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Na jaane kyu....!!! - 12th June 2005, 11:02 PM
Najaney Kyun Dil Laga Letey Hain Laug

Khud ko yuun hi saza detey hain laug ..

Jab koi pass ho to kadar nahin kartey

Door koi chala jaey to sada detey hain laug..

Jabb mill jaey safar main naya hum-safar koi

Per kiun purani rafaqat ko bhula detey hain laug

Gham bhi detey hain or kehtey hain bhool jao

Humari chahat ka yeh sila detey hain log .....!!!
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Dil ki chokhat pey jo aik deep jala rakha hai

Tere laut aanay ka amkaan saja rakha hai

Saans tak bhi nahin letay hain tujhey sochtay waqt

Hum ney is kaam ko bhi kal pey utha rakha hai

Rooth jatay ho to kuch aur haseen lagtay ho

Hum ne yeh soch key hi tum ko khafa rakha hai

Tum jissey rota hua chor gaye theh aik din

Hum ney us shaam ko seenay se laga rakha hai

Chain lenay nahin detey kissi taur mujhey

Teri yaadon ney jo tofaan uthaa rakha hai

Janay walay ney kaha thah keh wo laute ga zaroor

Aik issi aas pe derwaza khula rakha hai

Terey janay sey jo aik dhool uthi thi gaam ki

Hum ney us dhool ko aankhon mein basa rakha hai

Mujh ko kal shaam sey woh yaad bohut anay laga

Dil ne muddat sey jo aik shakhs bhula rakha hai

Aakhri baar jo aaya tha merey naam

Mein ney us khat ko dil sey laga rakha hai ..........!!!

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Kisi ki yaad mere aass paas rehti hai,

Barey dino se tabiyat udass rehti hai ,

Bichar gaya hai magar yeh dil manta hi nahin

Na janey kyu terey milne ki aass rehti hai,

Chura key dil agar wo chal diya to heiran ho kyu ??

Khushi yahan hamesha kiss key pass rehtih hai......!!!

be!maan mohabbat.....!!!

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13th June 2005, 04:59 PM
hey salim

very nice
likhte raho

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Post shukriya - 14th June 2005, 10:44 PM
thnks soni......thnks a lot.....

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hi! - 15th June 2005, 02:58 PM
Salim ji............it was Wonderful!..i liked it alot!
daad kubul kijiye!....thx a lot for sharing the work!
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15th June 2005, 03:20 PM
salim bhaiya bahut ahcha laga ye kalam aapka.sach much na jane aakhir aisa kyon karte hain log.pls do keep cary on writing.

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15th June 2005, 05:06 PM
nice one's salim ji,
its gud to read ur thoughts. keep flowing ur thoughts n keep sharing amang us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.


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jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
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17th June 2005, 12:50 AM
Kaafi accha likhte hain aap...............keep it up

Mohabbat...
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Thumbs up thnks - 17th June 2005, 10:01 PM
oh hi komal seen after a long days......waise i thought

u frgt me bt i m really happy u liked this composition...


Its true this is one of my fav composition bt frankly telling

its frm my collection n m nt the composer......


Thnks n keep watching

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Thumbs up thnks - 17th June 2005, 10:05 PM
Bahut Bhaut shukriya mere bhai.....ghyal shayr.......

waise dost shayar humesha ghayal hi hote hain.......


Bas keep watching my shayris...thnks

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Thumbs up thnks - 17th June 2005, 10:15 PM
shukriya Ruhani.......bahut shukriya for liking my

shayri.......keep watching dost

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Thumbs up 17th June 2005, 10:19 PM
Thnks naina........thnks 4 appreciating bt frnd all this

compostion are not mine bt this is from my collection...


Keep watching........n ya ek aur aapko khas shukriya

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