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ki meri gudiya BADI ho gayi... (priya tumhare liye) -
13th October 2004, 11:38 PM
meri priya behan ki shadi ke din nazdeek hai... jaisa mast bhai ne kaha ki khushi ka mauka hai ... par bhai ke liye thoda dukh bhi hota hai... shayad yahi pyar tha meri behan ke liye hum bhaiyon ka ki humm dono ye likh paye... maine ye lines mast bhai ke post pe reply main hi likhi thi... par main chahta hun ... har bhai mehsoos kare ki jab ek behan vida hoti hai to kaisa lagta hai... mehsoos kare ki ek behan ki vidai kaisi hoti hai ek bhai ki ankhon ke liye....
meri behan priya ye sirf tumhare liye hai lekin specialyy bade din gaud main kheli.. gudia gudde uski saheli.. ek din ye kissa suna ... aur ye kaisi ghadi ho gayi.. meri gudia badi ho gayi... haste hue jab dikhti thi... meri sanse tab chalti thi... aur aaj hum khade rahe aankhen ye nam ho gayi.. ki gudiya meri badi ho gayi... faili lipistick sari penthi thi sath choti goothte the maa ke hath aaj tera sringar jo dekha ... aankhen ye teri bayan kar gayi ki gudiya meri badi ho gayi... kuch din pehle woh bath kahi... kisi ke bin tum jee sakti nahi... ho gaya hai tumhe kisi se pyar judai ki ghadi aankhon main aa gayi ki gudia meri badi ho gayi... kuch din main hath peele kar logi... sang apne piya ke chal dogi.. doli main bithane hum aayenge anjaan ghar ki khushi ho gayi ki gudiya meri badi ho gayi tere sare sathi.. tere sare khilone lag jayenge humare sang rone bhai ye dukhi bhi khush bhi hoga acche meri behan ke takdeer ho gayi ki gudiya meri badi ho gayi... tu na rona jara bhi meri aanken dekh tu na kehna jana nahi piya ke desh mera "saccha_pyar" tere sath hi hoga... kya hua is ghar se parayi jo ho gayi.. ki meri gudia badi ho gayi... har sal tujhse milne main aaounga... apne klai pe rakhi bandhwaunga... tujhe khush dekh "mast" ho jaounga dua thi jo wo rang la gayi... ki meri gudiya badi ho gayi... priya ye meri aur mast bhai ki taraf se tohfa hai yahan ka tumhare liye... pasand karna ise jaroor isme hum bhaiyon ka pyar hai tumhare apne Kunal & Mast Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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15th October 2004, 01:04 PM
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tum kuch na bolo hum sab samajh gaye hai priya ab tumse mil na paunga maheene tak shayad agar possible hua to jaroor reply karounga par halat kuch aise hai ki maheene tak main shayri nahi likh sakta apna khyal rakhna aur mere mast bhai ka bhi tumhara bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: ki meri gudiya BADI ho gayi... (priya tumhare liye) -
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aankhen num kar din na aapne ... wakai main ek bhai ke bayanat khoob bayan kiye hai aapne .... bhai sach kehta hun aapse pyara dedication koi nahi kar sakta kahin bhi .... chahe koi bhi mauka ho ... aap rishte nibhana bakhoob jante hai ... aur dil se likhte hai... aur aapke dil ki aawaz bakhoob nikalti hai aapke har kalam main ... main to natmastak hun aapke is dedication pe .... apna khayal rakhna bas raj hi raj |
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Re: Re: ki meri gudiya BADI ho gayi... (priya tumhare liye) -
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arre bhai aap aaye ... ye kya kam hai ... mere honsle buland ho gaye '... bhai aapne to mujhe himalaya pe bitha diya hai... sambhal lena plz ... bhai jindgi rishte nibhane ka naam hi hai ... ye jaroori nahi ki uska rishta kittna apna hai ... jaroori hai ki rishta kitna pakka hai ... bhai aap jaisa sath dene wlaa mil jaye to har rah aasan ho jaye .... yun hi sath dete rehna mere bhai Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd November 2004, 03:38 PM
hey bros hw u doin
vow itni piyaari shaaayri. is tareef ke liye alfaaz kaha se aaye ab is duniya mai to nahi hoonge. meri behna ki shaadi hai aur mujhe maloom hi nahi hum aap se bhut naraaz hai sis. aapki shayri par ke aankhain nam ho gayi vow. bhai behene ke rishte jaisa aur to hota koi nahi hai lakin aapne is mai aane waale is nazak mood ko lafzo ka roop de diya. keep on writing both of u and behan ji aapke liye yahi duva hai ke aap khus raho aur is saari duniya ki khushiya aapko mile cos i cant think of ne one betta who deserves them bye |
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SACH MEIN BADI HO GAYI HAI..... |
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2nd November 2004, 03:51 PM
Kunal aur Mast ka apni behna ke liye pyar dekha.....
Ye to bhai behan ka pyar hai..kunal ji.... lekin apke har lafz aaj phir mere dil mein meri yaadon ko cheer se gaye.... Humne bhi yun ki kisi ko 9 saal tak ek gudiya ki tarah baade pyar aur naazoon se rakha tha..... " jab tumne na chalna seekha tha... apne haathon ko pakad ke daudna seekhaya humne... jala na de.N ye aangaare duniya ke.... (tere pairon ko) khud challe aur tujhe baahoon mein uthaya humne...... bhar na aaye teri pyari se vo aankhen kabhi... tere har gam ko hans ke dil mein dabaya humne.... khush rahe humesha aur khilti rahen muskaan tere hoton pe.. isliye^AMAN^, har dard-o-gam chumpaya humne......" Iske baad ek aur haqequat-e-dauran pesh hai doston...... "Soochta tha Shayad tu badi ho gayi hai.... Chalna tu seekhi na thi kabhi.... aaj daudne lag gyai hai.... Soochta tha Shayad tu badi ho gayi hai.... Lafz tere hoton se bahar aate na the kabhi.... aaj humne sunnane lag gayi hai.... Soochta tha Shayad tu badi ho gayi hai.... uthaane mein tujhe zindagi barbaad kar li .... aaj humne neecha deekhane lag gayi hai.... gudiya ki tarah rakha tha tujhe.... aaj jaana hai^AMAN^ ki teri GudiYa Sach Mein badi ho gayi hai..." Shayd aap logon ko pasand aaye.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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3rd November 2004, 10:42 AM
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thanx .. jo aap yahan aayi .. aur meri behan ke liye mere pyar ki sarhana ki ... dekha priya ne aapko bhi nahi bataya ... aur ye kya aap bhi rone lage ... dekhiye ye din to bhai behan ki jindgi main aata hi hai .... aapko mere alfaz pasand aaye aapne ise dil se padha ... aur jo duayen aapne meri behan ko di ... uske liye teh dil se aapka shukra gujar hun .... aap yun hi sath deti rahingi umeed hai ... waise aaj aapne pehli bar mujhe reply kiya hai ... par tab bhi umeed kar raha hun .... apna khayal rakhiyega kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: SACH MEIN BADI HO GAYI HAI..... -
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kya kahun .... main aapke reply ne mujhe hila ke rakh diya hai ... aapne mere dil k cheer diya hai .... aapke reply ne mujhe aapki sari ankhi baton ko samjha diya hai ... bas bhai yahi kehna chahunga ki aapke sath jo hua life main uwo kisi ke sath na ho ....aur ye sab kisi ko pehle nahi pata hota .... par mujhe apni is behan pe to yaken hai ... halanki jyada din nahi hue .... par na jane kyun ek vishwash hai ... aur dua hai ki ... aapko chain mile buri yaden aapko pareshan na kare .... jyada kuch janta nahi ... warna aapko jaroor sahi baton se avgat karata ... par janna jaroor chahunga ... gar aap hume is kabil samjhe to jaroor batayiyega .... aur apna khayal rakhiyega ... aur yahan aane ke liye aapka teh dil se shukriya Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th November 2004, 03:56 PM
hi aman bhai
kasie ho aap vow dat was marvellous a really reaaly beautiful poem. aapki shayri ka jaado cha jaata hai . maloom nahi aur kiya kaho bas itna ke it was a really ice poem jo piyaar aapne usmai express kiya i can understand dat. it was very touchy. by d way aapko pata tha ke sis ki shaadi hone waali hai. take care keep on writing bye kunal i nw dat was the first time replied to ur post dats cos i avnt been online for a while but mast ji aur priya ko bhuta arse se jaanti hoo and i was shockd ke uski shaadi hone waali hai aur humai pata bi nahi chala. but it was a great poem and i hope u will keep on writin poems like dese in future cos i will look forward to reading them take care bye |
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4th November 2004, 04:12 PM
kunal, anu,
tum dono ko meri taraf se dher sari badhaai is ahesaas ko jatane par.... meri priiii, ............................ tumhari diiiiii |
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4th November 2004, 04:46 PM
Hello Romana ji....
Thnx ki aapko mera kuch haal-e-dil pasand aaya.... Main to naya hoon is forum pe... mujhe nahi pata tha ki SIS ki shaadi hai..... ye to kunal ji ne bataya tha..... Kunal.... Kabhi ru-ba-ru hue to jaroor batayenge ki kya gujra hai hum pe... shayad aapki dua kubul ho jaye.... din to kat jata hai.. apki mekhfil mein ... ye raat berahem kaati nahi jaat..... Bahut pareshaan ho uthta hoon.. jarror milenge... Take care.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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4th November 2004, 08:23 PM
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romana ji main jyada naya nahi yahan .. aug main hi join kiya 30 tareekh ko ... par mast bhai aur priya se jo pyar mila ... uska izhar karne ki koshish karta hun ... aur unko unka reply dene ki koshish ... mujhe bhi yun hi maloom chal gaya tha ek din ... usi din likha tha ye kalam ... raaj bhai ki inayat thi ki ye kalam ateet ke panno main dab sa gaya tha ... koi reponse bhi nahi mila mujhe iske liye ... par meri behan ko main apna pyar dikha paya wahi mere liye kafi tha ... raaj bhai ne ise phir ap logon ke roobroo khada kar diya ... unka shukra gujar hun main ... wakai main ye poem apne aap main ek mahan kriti hai ... kyunki ye maine apni behan ke liye likhi ... shukriya aap ne ise apni tareef se nawaza ... aap sath dete rehna main jaroor likhta rahunga ... aur bohat si poem hai jo aap miss kar gayi hai ... kabhi fursat ho to back pages main jaiyega ... aapke sath ke bina khak banda kuch bhi nahi .... apna khayal rakhna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th November 2004, 08:27 PM
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bohat bohat shukriya ... mast bhai ne bhi likha tha uske liye ... choti gudiya kahin daba hua hai wo ....laounga aapke roobroo.. aapke aane ka teh dil se shukra gujar hun .... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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tu DARD hi kehlayega.. apna khayal rakhna bhai ... bohat acche se ... aapki khushi se hume bohat khushi milegi ... aapko yahoo pe add kar raha hun Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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5th November 2004, 12:01 PM
Romana ji
Aap shock kyun ho gayi??? meri shaadi ki khabar sun ke...???? arre itni buri bhi nahi hoti yeh shadiyan...  yeh to humesha hi ek pleasant surprise ki tarah hoti hain.. lekin mere case mein yeh real long and awaited pal hain.... jo ab ja ke naseeb honge mujhe..... aap yahan aayi..mujhe bahut khushi hui... khayaal rakhiye apna.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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I have no sister but your writing made me realize how it would be. May God bless Kunal and Priya Kunal - It is infact simple yaar, simple as the love is.... Shade in the shadow world |
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3rd February 2005, 05:10 AM
hi priya di
aisi baat nahi hai actually i kind off know wot u went through and i can imagine wot it must have been like for u so i know it means alot to u and i m rally happy for u aur aapko maloom hai ke humari duva hamesha aapke saath rehti hai. well mere khiyaal mai shaadi achi chezz nahi hai well not until u r ready for it but in ur case it is cos aapke liye yeh vo pal the jin ka aapne itna lamba intezaar kiya kehte hai na sabar ka phal meetha hota hai and i think dats wot happend wiv u is well in the end everything workd out so i wish u a happy marrid life well tc bye |
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manta huN shadiyaN buri nahi hoti ... aur tumhari life ka awaiting pal bhi hai ... par meri life ka awaiting pal ab tumse mulaqat ban gaya hai.. jahaN ek aur meri behan ki shadi parso hui .. aur aaj uski yaad se maiN num aNkheN liye baitha huN .. wahiN tumhe yaad karke... is kalaam ko upar dekh dil bhar aaya hai ... sach ye shadi jiske liye sabse azeeb hoti hai ... uska naam bhai hi hai... bachpan se jawan umra tak ka sath pal bhar maiN chooth jata hai.. aur halat ye hoti hai ki khush na ho to kaise roye na to kaise... sach behna aaj apne ghar ko soona pake maiN bohat udas huN ... wahiN khush huN ki meri behno ko acche parivaroN maiN jagah mili .... apna khayal rakhna meri behna aur dua hai meri behan ke liye bhi ... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd February 2005, 10:56 PM
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aaj kehne ke liye mere pas kuch nahi ... kalam ke jadugar ke paas aaj woh shayi nahi ... jo apni khushi ko dukh main mila ke kagaz rakh kar paye ...  kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd February 2005, 10:58 PM
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6th February 2005, 01:39 AM
Hello my sweet Little brother
kaise ho kunal???Abb tum kahoge mein ladkon jaisa huun...Cheer up kunal...............Yeh kya Tumharey Aankhein Num hain.......Aisey nahin kartey............dekho tumhari didi ne apni nayi zindagi mein kadam rakha hay.......Aankhein num nahin kartey.......Kal ko tumharey Zindagi Roshan karney kay liye bhi ek Roshni aayegi tumhari Zindagi mein  .........Jeevan mein kushi,yadein,kissey ka paas hona,duur jaana ek nayee zindagi jeenay kay liye chalta rehta hay.....dil thoda nahin kartey.............Cheer up my sweet little brother..........tum udas acchey nahin lagtey Sada kush Raho. |
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1st March 2005, 03:47 PM
Aaj bahut dino ke baad site pe aa paayi hun...
aaj phir se Kunal bhai ka yeh thread shuru se padha.... aur phir se vahi ehsaas dil mein jaag gaye.... Bas fark itna hai ki tab meri shaadi hone vaali thi.. aur ab use hue poore 2 and half months ho chuke hain.. and i'm very very haapy.. sab aap sabki duaaon ka nateeja hai.... Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya.... itna pyar bhara parivaar bahut kam naseeb hota hai.... aur main der se aane ki maafi chaahti hun/.... take care all ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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1st March 2005, 05:41 PM
hi kunal aaj ye post padi tumhari dil ko choo gai ye.khashkar ye lines
tere sare sathi.. tere sare khilone lag jayenge humare sang rone bhai ye dukhi bhi khush bhi hoga acche meri behan ke takdeer ho gayi ki gudiya meri badi ho gayi such hi to hai beti bahan ki jab shadi ho jati hai to sab kuch chut jata hai jindgi mein saare riste naye sire se shuru hote hai tab hai na. priya di khush rahe yahi dua hai sakhi ki. शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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2nd March 2005, 08:26 PM
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aapki batoN ne mujhe sahara jaroorr diya ... aur maiN khud in sab baton ko janta hun ... aur maiN kya sab jante hai .. par hum kuch nahi kar sakte ... dil pe shayad kisi ka jor nahi ... bas haN khud ko samjha hi sakte hai ! aapka shukriya jo aapne itna sath diya ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd March 2005, 08:31 PM
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teri har yaad ko seene se lagaye baithe hai... (unknown) meri behan ... tum aayi aur pata bhi na chala kab chali gayi... aur tumhara is post pe aana mujhe yakeen to dilata hai ki tum hume nahi bhooli .. aur apne is bhai ko to bilkul nahi ... aur uski is rachna ko bhi nahi ... raha sawal dhai maheene ka to ... meri dua hai dhaisoo saloN tak tum sath raho .. aur yuN hi humse milne tum aati raho ... aur parivar ki duayeN uski beti ke liye na ho aisa to ho hi nahi sakta ... aur tumhare parivar ka bhi yahi farz tha to jo humne nibhaya .. ab bas tum kuch din ke liye apne maike aa hi jao .. dekho meena maa bhi tumhara rasta dekh rahi hai aur ... kuch bhai bhi ... tum humesha khush raho yahi dua hai ... tumhara bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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2nd March 2005, 08:34 PM
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shukriya tum meri is fav post pe aayi ... aur tumhe ye line pasand aayi jinhe padh ke maiN humesha ro padta huN aur sakhi sach ladkiyoN ke liye jitna mushkil hota hai ... utna hi ghar walo ke liye bhi hota hai ... meri dua bhi tumhare sath hai priya ke liye ... tumhara dost kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Aapko kabhi bhi nahi bhool sakti.. na aapko, aur na hi Anu bhai ko. Aaj kal woh aa nahi paate, lekin jo pyar aur apna pan aapne mujhe diya hai, usko koi bhala kaise bhulaaye? Aaj meri Shaadi ko hue kuch... saadde teen saal ho gaye hain, lekin aapki is pyari rachna ko padh ke aaj bhi aankhein nam ho gayi.. woh pyar woh apnaapan.. woh saari puraani baatein, phir aankhon ke saamne se guzarne lagi maano kal ki hi baat ho...Apne dono pyare bhaiyon ko bahut miss karti hun.. aur haan itna zaroor kehna chaahungi, ki mere pyare bhaiyon ki duaaon ke hi kaaran aaj main bahut khush hun... Meena Di ko bhi bahut miss karti hun.... woh purana vakt kitna acha tha, jab aap teeno se aksar roz hi baat ho jaati thi.. lekin aaj kal to jaise vakt ki hi kami mehsoos hoti hai.. phir bhi main aap sab se yehi kehna chaahti hun, ki chaahe aapse kitni hi der baat na ho, phir bhi mere dil me aapke liye vahi pyar aur satkaar ki baavna rahegi... jo is behan ke dil me shuru se hai apne pyare bhaiyon ke liye! Mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai aur garv bhi yeh kehne me ki SDC ne mujhe aise do anmol bhai diye hain! Tum jiyo hazaarooo saal bhaiya! Aap bhi humesha khush rahein! Take Care.. Aapki Gudiya..... Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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27th October 2009, 12:35 PM
Kunaal Jee,
sab se pahele to maiN aap ko aur priya jee dono ko mubaarak baad dena chahti hoon. aise riste.N sirf aur sirf khush-kismat waalo.N ke naseeb meiN likhe hote hai.. aap ne jis tarah priya jee ke prati aap ke pyaar ko apne ehesaas se yahan hum sab se share kiya hai.. waqyii bahot bahot laajawaab hai.. har chhoti-chhoti baat ko aapne bakhubi bayan kiya hai.... bahot khoob khush rahiye aise hee likhte rahiye aap ki dost purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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28th October 2009, 12:30 AM
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bhaiya ji pehli baar aapko padh raha hoon aapki is rachna main jo sneh dekhai diya hai sach main wo kabilay tareef hai .......aapki is rachna main mujhko aap hi ki shayri.com kay ek aur bhaiya hain bhai vichitra ji ....un jaisa dard dekhai deta hai ..........waisay to mai v likhta hoon par aap jaisa nahin .......padh kar sach mai bhout hi achcha laga .........likhtay rahiyega ..kush rahiyega ......aapki agli rachna ka inzar hoga muzko.... matwala chatak |
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28th October 2009, 10:46 PM
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kya kahu ... sab kuch bahi hai jo main mahsoos karta hun aur ise padh ke bhi kar raha hun .... aaj mujeh bhi meri di yaad aa gayee .... shadi ke baas samandar paar kar liye usne .. kya karu apne aap mai chupa liya hai mujhko khudse zuda kiya hai pahle wali hasi hasa do mujhe meri aapi louta do ek hi gamle main pgool tha mere usi se raat thi, they usi se sawere jis din se woh hai gum huaa raat dhundli mere din mai andhere fir chaand ka phool khila do mujhe meri aapi* louta do .. (*aapi .. sister) sorry yaar baat khushi ki thi maine kya likh diyaa aaj bahut si nazme yaad aa rahi hai thodi thodi suna deta hun ... bina izazat ke ...badi bahan ka chota bhayee vada kiya na rakhi bandhbayee jo khuda ne kiya nahi woh khud karta hai mangen se jo mila nahi uski zid karta hai Pagal diwana soudayee badi bahan ka chota bhayee dekha suna sa lagta hai ye rista hath se buna lagta hai oon ka dhaga, ma ki bunayee badi bahan ka chota bhayee bas yaar abhi itna hi take care ur self and god bless ur gudiyaa be happy both of u regard Janumanu |
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28th October 2009, 11:38 PM
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aaj ye post phir uper hai ,, aur tumhari yaad ne phir tumhare bhai ko gher liya hai .. yakeeN nahi hota 5 saal hone ko aaye tumhari shadi ko ..aur aisa lagta hai mano kal hi ki baat hai .. kitne utarchadaav aa gaye .. aur haal hi maiN jo hua uska jikra main kya kahuN... par phir bhi mujhe itna pata hai .. jab beti ya behan ki shadi ho jaati hai uske liye ta umra khushiyan hi maante rehte hai uske parivaar waale.. maiN aaj bhi tumhare liye yahi dua karta huN .. aur humesha karunga.. tum humesha khush raho .. aur dekhna tum jaldi hi us khushi ko bhi paogi .. jisse tum mehroom reh gayi.... is waqt isse jyada kuch nahi keh sakta .. aur kuch nahi samjha sakta .. bas ho sake to apne bhai ke pyaar ko samajhna... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th October 2009, 11:41 PM
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maine to bas aapko apne ehsaas diye the.. aaone yahan aake mujhe manmoon kar diya hai .. ehsaasoN ka koi mol nahi .. bas wahi hai ere paas aapke liye .. kyuNki itna waqt beet gaya aaj bhi ye ehsaas jo adhne se hai .. mere rongte khade kar jaate hai ... har ek lamha aankhoN maiN aa gaya hai.. khyaal rakhiye apna Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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29th October 2009, 06:37 PM
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bhai sach main kuch shabd nahin hai ....aur aisa pyaar diya hai aapnay ki aapki behan humesha hi yaad rakhaygi ....... eh gana yaad aa gaya hai .. foolon ka taron ka sabka kehna hai ...eh hazaar main meri behna hai sari umar humain sang rehna hai ..... bhai sach main u r grate .......... aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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2nd November 2009, 11:43 PM
bhai,
Kya kahu....bas itna hi kahoonga ki ek gusthakhi hui hai...aapki ye kavita aapke izazat ke bina , maine apni choti sis ke saath share ki hai.....(par mujhe lagta hai ki is kavita par keval aapka haq nahi ispe har bhai ka haq hai...isliye shayad...) uski shaadi ko abhi kuch mahine hi hue hai...... shabdo se is rachna ki tulna karna bekaar hai...... dil ki awaaz jaroor pahuchi hogi. Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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3rd November 2009, 12:39 AM
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Kunal ji, Adaab!!! Asal meiN ye hi maksad hai apne ehsaasoN ko ibaarat dene ka, aapne jo cheez 2004 meiN likhi thee, woh meri aankh aaj 2009 meiN nam kar gayee, aur mujhe nahi lagta ke main aapki iss kavvish pe Kuch kahunga kyuNki yeh apne aap meiN hee ek taareef hai aur taareef ki taareef nahi ho sakti usse to sirf mehsoos kar romanchit hua jaa sakta hai, aur main iss Waqt khoob romanchit hooN.... Aapka dost, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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