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' Khubsurti Teri...Kudrat Bhi Diwaani ' ( Dedicated To The Moon ) - 18th June 2008, 03:57 AM
Tonight the full moon is smiling in the sky...!
It seems as if it is asking me to post one of my old poems dedicated to it...!
Hope that you will like..!


Teri kahaani...
Meri zubaani !

Parichay teri…
Aasmaan ki Raani !

Chehre pe tere…
Daag hai nishaani !

Ankhon main teri…
Shabnam hai paani !

Oudaasi teri…
Shaayar ne jaani !

Nazaara tera…
Raat suhaani !

Poonam ki raat …
Bharpur jawaani !

Khubsurti teri…
Kudrat bhi diwaani !

Mohabbat teri…
Khud se anjaani !

Choo loun tujhe…
' Mushkil ' o nadaani !


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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18th June 2008, 05:25 AM
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Tonight the full moon is smiling in the sky...!
It seems as if it is asking me to post one of my old poems dedicated to it...!
Hope that you will like..!


Teri kahaani...
Meri zubaani !

Parichay teri…
Aasmaan ki Raani !

Chehre pe tere…
Daag hai nishaani !

Ankhon main teri…
Shabnam hai paani !

Oudaasi teri…
Shaayar ne jaani !

Nazaara tera…
Raat suhaani !

Poonam ki raat …
Bharpur jawaani !

Khubsurti teri…
Kudrat bhi diwaani !

Mohabbat teri…
Khud se anjaani !

Choo loun tujhe…
' Mushkil ' o nadaani !
Yeh rachna inaayat ya..
Aapki meharbaani...
Khoob likhi aapne bhaiya..
ye apni zubaani...

Daad kubool keejiye.. bahut pasand aayi!

Take Care..

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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3rd July 2008, 05:46 PM
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Yeh rachna inaayat ya..
Aapki meharbaani...
Khoob likhi aapne bhaiya..
ye apni zubaani...

Daad kubool keejiye.. bahut pasand aayi!

Take Care..

~Priya
Aap ki daad sar ankhon par, Priya Behen...!

Bahut shukriya

Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?

With blessings


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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4th July 2008, 11:11 AM
Danny jee:

Pranaam!!

aapke saadagee bhare ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye.. be-Had pasaNd aaYii aapki yeh kavviSh.. DheroN saarii daad!! qabUl keejiyeNgaa.. YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe.. !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

jai SHree kriShnaa..

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Smile Chaand jaisa khoobsurat hi likha hai aapne - 4th July 2008, 02:05 PM
wah......danny ji bahut kamaal ka likha hai aapne, bahut napey tuley lafzo.n mein etni khoobsurai .....ki pad kar jubaaN se wah nikley bina na rah sake.....bahut bahut bahut pasand aaye aapki yeh rachna.....yoon hi aagey bhi likhtey rahiye....

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26th January 2010, 05:30 AM
Dear Bhaiya....

bahut kum lafzon mein bahut gherii baatein .............Awesome !!!!


bahut aacha likha hai aapney

likhety rahe...........

ek gustakii karney jaa rahii hu .... kuch lines mann mein aayiii ... umeed karti hu aapko pasand aayegii.........


kya haiN yeh
kudrat ki NishaNii??

aapki baateiN
haiN aasmaaNii

take care of urself

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Choo loun tujhe…
' Mushkil ' o nadaani !

kuch nahi kaha jaata....bemisaal.....

vikram...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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Mushkil sahab.......... AadaaB

Kya baat hai chaand i be intehaan tarif aur behtreen adaygii beha khoob lagi aapki yeh koshish behad umdaaa.

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Pranaam!!

aapke saadagee bhare ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye.. be-Had pasaNd aaYii aapki yeh kavviSh.. DheroN saarii daad!! qabUl keejiyeNgaa.. YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe.. !

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

jai SHree kriShnaa..

aapka

~ Dhaval
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wah......danny ji bahut kamaal ka likha hai aapne, bahut napey tuley lafzo.n mein etni khoobsurai .....ki pad kar jubaaN se wah nikley bina na rah sake.....bahut bahut bahut pasand aaye aapki yeh rachna.....yoon hi aagey bhi likhtey rahiye....

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Thank you for liking this too, Chotti behen...!

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Dear Bhaiya....

bahut kum lafzon mein bahut gherii baatein .............Awesome !!!!


bahut aacha likha hai aapney

likhety rahe...........

ek gustakii karney jaa rahii hu .... kuch lines mann mein aayiii ... umeed karti hu aapko pasand aayegii.........


kya haiN yeh
kudrat ki NishaNii??

aapki baateiN
haiN aasmaaNii

take care of urself

aapki

mandeep
Kaisi hein aap, Mandy behen...? Aajkal kahaaN heiN aap...? I miss you, you know...?

Well, thanks for appreciating and you wrote a very nice piece...! I love it...!

Take care you too and do keep coming, ok...?

Wtih blessings...!


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Teri kahaani...
Meri zubaani !

Parichay teri…
Aasmaan ki Raani !

Chehre pe tere…
Daag hai nishaani !

Ankhon main teri…
Shabnam hai paani !

Oudaasi teri…
Shaayar ne jaani !

Nazaara tera…
Raat suhaani !

Poonam ki raat …
Bharpur jawaani !

Khubsurti teri…
Kudrat bhi diwaani !

Mohabbat teri…
Khud se anjaani !

Choo loun tujhe…
' Mushkil ' o nadaani !


Danny Ji......Namaste ! Bahut pehle ki likhi hui hai aapki yeh rachna....aaj upar aai toh ...nighaa padhi iss par....varnaa yeh chaand ....kab se amaawas hua padha thaa humse....

Aapki Moon poetry ke Sabhi Khayal bahut umdaa lage mujhe.....ek behad badhi soch ke darshan karati ......aapki yeh rachna .... bahut pasand aai mujhe....dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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