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7th August 2008, 03:00 PM
KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..
KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..
KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm
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7th August 2008, 03:02 PM
hmm
KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..
bahut khoob ji......
tiguna word is impressive ...........
bas meter ka khyal rakhe
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7th August 2008, 07:38 PM
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hmm
KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..
bahut khoob ji......
tiguna word is impressive ...........
bas meter ka khyal rakhe
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sukriya janumanu ji aapke yeh id achha hai ...hume pasand aaye....meter ka matlab hume nehin maloom pls aap hume batadijiyega .....
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8th August 2008, 03:06 PM
Diya jee....bahut acche ahsaas hoti hai aapki shayri meiN ...aapko padna accha laga....yoon hi bazam ki ronak bane rahiye...!
kush rahiye
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khuubsurat ahsaas hai ji apke,sach hi kaha he aape,likhte rahe
ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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8th August 2008, 11:53 PM
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Diya jee....bahut acche ahsaas hoti hai aapki shayri meiN ...aapko padna accha laga....yoon hi bazam ki ronak bane rahiye...!
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main koshish karoongi aise nagme yahan post karti rahunjismain eheshash ho ...aap younhi mere saath dijiyega Sunita ji .........
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8th August 2008, 11:55 PM
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khuubsurat ahsaas hai ji apke,sach hi kaha he aape,likhte rahe
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sukriya baagi ji ...aap bhi bahat achhe likhte hain humne aap ke post dekhe hain....
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9th August 2008, 12:31 AM
"mujhay acha sa lagta hai tum hi ko dekhte rehna
tum hi ko sohchte rehna tum hi ko sunte rehna
bahut gahre khayalo me khwabo me sawalo me
mohabbat ke hawalo me tumhara naam aa ja na
mujhe acha sa lagta hai tumhare sung sung chalna
wafa ki aag me jalna tumhe naraz kar dena
kabhi khud bi rooth jana tumari be-rukhi pe bhi
tumhari arzoo karna khud apne dil ki dharkan se
tumhari guftagu karna mujhe acha sa lagta hai......nm
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9th August 2008, 03:48 PM
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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..
KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..
KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm
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bohat khoob janab kya baat hai app ki bohat post ki hai apne.khush raho hamesha hasti raho meri ye he dua hai apna khayal rakhna...
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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bohat khoob janab kya baat hai app ki bohat post ki hai apne.khush raho hamesha hasti raho meri ye he dua hai apna khayal rakhna...
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Kuch kadmo ki hi doorie par woh mere saamne hai
Chupke se dekh aankhien band kar leti hoon
Kya waqt ki majboori hai use choo nahi sakti
Zindagi saamne hai mere saansein le nahi sakti
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12th August 2008, 10:47 AM
Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta Tumko Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye
ye sher kis ka hai,aap ne nahi likha magar jahan tak meri samajh hai,agar aap pahli line(misra)mein tum ko ki jagah TUMHE lagaati hain tabhi ye sher meter mein aata hai..koshish kar ke dekhiye..achcha khaasa sher hai..kisi ka bhi ho..is liye khud ko rok na paya.
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main koshish karoongi aise nagme yahan post karti rahunjismain eheshash ho ...aap younhi mere saath dijiyega Sunita ji .........
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12th August 2008, 02:15 PM
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Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta Tumko Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye
ye sher kis ka hai,aap ne nahi likha magar jahan tak meri samajh hai,agar aap pahli line(misra)mein tum ko ki jagah TUMHE lagaati hain tabhi ye sher meter mein aata hai..koshish kar ke dekhiye..achcha khaasa sher hai..kisi ka bhi ho..is liye khud ko rok na paya.
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Sukriya Prasant ji .......hum abhi isko change karke dekhte hain yeh sher meri nehin per sign main rakhi hun kyun ki iske labz mere zindegi se juda hua hai...hume khusi hui ki aapne hume salah di ...aise hi aap humare saath dijiye hum bahat kuchh sikhenge aap se
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12th August 2008, 11:25 PM
Diya ji
Please..mere naam ki sahi spelling hai PRASHANT.aap ne H bhula diya..diya se aage ye ummeed nahi..aur jahan aap ne LABZ likha hai use LAFZ likhen..LAFZ yaani shabd ya words.Aap bahut achchi cheezen bhejti hain..mujhe aap ki pasand par khushi hai...
Achcha padhiye..likhtee rahiye..aur aap ek din kmaal likhengi.yaqeen nahi hoga aap ko magar apni shuru ki likhi cheezon mein main ne itni technical galtiyan ki hain ki aaj unhe padh kar khud bura lagta hai..sachchi.
all the best.
prashant vasl
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Sukriya Prasant ji .......hum abhi isko change karke dekhte hain yeh sher meri nehin per sign main rakhi hun kyun ki iske labz mere zindegi se juda hua hai...hume khusi hui ki aapne hume salah di ...aise hi aap humare saath dijiye hum bahat kuchh sikhenge aap se
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12th August 2008, 11:34 PM
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Diya ji
Please..mere naam ki sahi spelling hai PRASHANT.aap ne H bhula diya..diya se aage ye ummeed nahi..aur jahan aap ne LABZ likha hai use LAFZ likhen..LAFZ yaani shabd ya words.Aap bahut achchi cheezen bhejti hain..mujhe aap ki pasand par khushi hai...
Achcha padhiye..likhtee rahiye..aur aap ek din kmaal likhengi.yaqeen nahi hoga aap ko magar apni shuru ki likhi cheezon mein main ne itni technical galtiyan ki hain ki aaj unhe padh kar khud bura lagta hai..sachchi.
all the best.
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ab koi galti nehin karenge janab aapke baat yaad rakhenge ...hume bahat achha lagta hai jab aap itne pyar se apnapan jatake samjhate hain..sach kahoon to galti karne ka dubara maan hoti hai taki aap younhi samjhaye ........
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13th August 2008, 12:18 AM
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sukriya janumanu ji aapke yeh id achha hai ...hume pasand aaye....meter ka matlab hume nehin maloom pls aap hume batadijiyega .....
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Urdu meN jo shero-shaayri ham karte haiN yaa phir koii Ghazal likhte haiN to ek baat ko zehan meN rakhni paDti hai aur woh hai metre jisko Urdu meN 'bahar' yaa 'behar' kahte haiN. Ek rythm yaani ki lay jo hotaa hai misroN meN usiiko behar kahte haiN. Iske alaawaa aur bhi kayii baateN hotii haiN jin ko samajhne meN thoDi diqqat ho sakti hai. Lekin aap ko jaanate hue ham daawe ke saath kah sakte haiN ki aap bahut jald inn sabhi baatoN ko parakh leNgi.
Mayankji ne hameN ek article paDhnekeliye kahaa thaa jisko paDhne se shaayri ki taamiir ke baare meN bahut kuch samajhaa jaa saktaa hai. Umiid karte haiN aap ko bhi iss se madad milegi: YahaaN CLICK kareN
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Urdu meN jo shero-shaayri ham karte haiN yaa phir koii Ghazal likhte haiN to ek baat ko zehan meN rakhni paDti hai aur woh hai metre jisko Urdu meN 'bahar' yaa 'behar' kahte haiN. Ek rythm yaani ki lay jo hotaa hai misroN meN usiiko behar kahte haiN. Iske alaawaa aur bhi kayii baateN hotii haiN jin ko samajhne meN thoDi diqqat ho sakti hai. Lekin aap ko jaanate hue ham daawe ke saath kah sakte haiN ki aap bahut jald inn sabhi baatoN ko parakh leNgi.
Mayankji ne hameN ek article paDhnekeliye kahaa thaa jisko paDhne se shaayri ki taamiir ke baare meN bahut kuch samajhaa jaa saktaa hai. Umiid karte haiN aap ko bhi iss se madad milegi: YahaaN CLICK kareN
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bahat bahat sukriya prasad ji main jaroor dekhungi ...mujhe khusi hai ki aap itna madad kar rahe hain ......ek din sayad main bin galti ke ek sayari likhungi
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15th August 2008, 06:23 PM
hi diya sorry maine hi meter ki baat ki thi ..
waise i m impressed ki tumne sabki baat ko dhyaan se suna......
meter ke bare mai sab bata hi chuke hai.............
main b bahar ke bare mai nahi janta
main abs yahi kahunga ki
misre ka har lafz ek flow mai ho .. lafzo ke bazan ka khyaal rakho
unki tabiyat ka khyaal rakho
sound ... words ki sound ka khyaal........
koe word humko pause ki sound deta hai koe... full stop ki kisi mai flow hota hai doosri line ko jodne ka
kaise akhtar........... isme last mai r word pe toung rukti hai.. ye upar se neechye aane ki yani full stop ki sound deta hai...
iase hi misre yani sher ki line maien word ko kaise flow mai rakhna hai iska dhyaan
aur sher ki line word ke hissab se barabar ho .. thoda bahut chalta hai ..
( as we are not trained with grammar of meter and technical term)
har misra barabar aur ghazal ka har sher barabar ho bas
itna b kaafi hai
maine unko b padha hai jo meter aur baki cheezo mai abhut perfect hote hai lekin woh bas technical hi rah jate hai
emotion aur thought se bahut peechey chhooot jate hai
hope ki kahi galat na kaha ho
mai galat b ho sakta hun.........
aur kisi se seekhne se acha hai study ur self ..........
sabko padho
unke style pe study karo.. that it
keep it
hope u will correct me too
do take care
janumanu.............
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17th August 2008, 05:07 PM
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hi diya sorry maine hi meter ki baat ki thi ..
waise i m impressed ki tumne sabki baat ko dhyaan se suna......
meter ke bare mai sab bata hi chuke hai.............
main b bahar ke bare mai nahi janta
main abs yahi kahunga ki
misre ka har lafz ek flow mai ho .. lafzo ke bazan ka khyaal rakho
unki tabiyat ka khyaal rakho
sound ... words ki sound ka khyaal........
koe word humko pause ki sound deta hai koe... full stop ki kisi mai flow hota hai doosri line ko jodne ka
kaise akhtar........... isme last mai r word pe toung rukti hai.. ye upar se neechye aane ki yani full stop ki sound deta hai...
iase hi misre yani sher ki line maien word ko kaise flow mai rakhna hai iska dhyaan
aur sher ki line word ke hissab se barabar ho .. thoda bahut chalta hai ..
( as we are not trained with grammar of meter and technical term)
har misra barabar aur ghazal ka har sher barabar ho bas
itna b kaafi hai
maine unko b padha hai jo meter aur baki cheezo mai abhut perfect hote hai lekin woh bas technical hi rah jate hai
emotion aur thought se bahut peechey chhooot jate hai
hope ki kahi galat na kaha ho
mai galat b ho sakta hun.........
aur kisi se seekhne se acha hai study ur self ..........
sabko padho
unke style pe study karo.. that it
keep it
hope u will correct me too
do take care
janumanu.............
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Manuji, bahut achchi tarah se samajhaane kii koshish kii hai aap ne. Yaqiinan, hameN bhi bahut faaydaa huaa paDhkar. Ham chaahte haiN ke sher-o-shaayri ke saath aur bhii aise charche hoN jin se unn sabhi ko madad mile jo Urdu siikhne ki khwaahish rakhte haiN.
Aap ko iss post keliye reps milne chaahiye. Reps added ++
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17th August 2008, 05:20 PM
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Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta Tumko Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye
ye sher kis ka hai,aap ne nahi likha magar jahan tak meri samajh hai,agar aap pahli line(misra)mein tum ko ki jagah TUMHE lagaati hain tabhi ye sher meter mein aata hai..koshish kar ke dekhiye..achcha khaasa sher hai..kisi ka bhi ho..is liye khud ko rok na paya.
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Prashant jee:
Namaste:
sahii farmaaya hai aap ne, 'tum ko' ki 'tumhe' istemaa karne par yeh meter me.n aa raha hai, par agar ham 'tumhe' ki jagah 'unhe' istemaal karte hai.n to sher aur bhi pyaara lagegaa..
Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta unhe Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye
kya khayaal hai aap ka
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17th August 2008, 08:14 PM
yahan mera kya khayal koi nehin puchhta ........
sukriya mayank ji ..yeh bhi achha hai ....hume pasand hai .......
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Prashant jee:
Namaste:
sahii farmaaya hai aap ne, 'tum ko' ki 'tumhe' istemaa karne par yeh meter me.n aa raha hai, par agar ham 'tumhe' ki jagah 'unhe' istemaal karte hai.n to sher aur bhi pyaara lagegaa..
Bhoole Hai Rafta Rafta unhe Muddaton Me Hum...
Kishton Me Khudkhushi Ka Maza Humse Puchiye
kya khayaal hai aap ka
Mayank
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19th August 2008, 11:58 AM
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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..
KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..
KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm
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Nice one diya.....
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya
ye lines bahut hi sweet lagi...sweety
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19th August 2008, 05:17 PM
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Nice one diya.....
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya
ye lines bahut hi sweet lagi...sweety
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22nd August 2008, 01:09 PM
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KehTe hai.. Dooriya pyar kam kar deTi hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Dooriyo ne pyar ko Tiguna kar diya..
KehTe hai.. Jhagde ho To pyar ke liye acha nahi..
Me kehTi hu.. Jhagdo ne hum dono ko aur kareeb la diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar zahir karna zaroori hoTa hai..
Me kehTi hu.. Zuban se nahi, humne aankho se hi kaam liya..
KehTe hai.. Jalan hoTi hai To pyar nahi hoTa..
Me kehTi hu.. Jalan ne hi To gehre pyar, gehre rishTe ko janam diya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ibaadaT hai, pooja hai bhagwan ki..
Me kehTi hu.. Khuda ka doosra naam pyar hai, To maine khuda ko maan liya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar me pagal phirTi hai
Me kehTi hu.. Is janam me pyar na kiya, To shayad kuch bhi na kiya..
KehTe hai.. Pyar ki sachayi dard hai, mayoosi hai...
Me kehTi hu.. Is dard me jiya, To sach me jiya, zindagi me kuch kiya..nm
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diya ji.....
aap jo bhi likhte ho...... bohut meetha likhte ho....... ab tak to main aapki dil se fan ho chuki hu....... wow kya asardaar shabdon ka prayog karto ho....... aapke lavz mere dil ko cheerte hue nikal jaati hai........
really u rock man........
Ab to apni zindagi yuhi tanhaa rehti hain........
Saans leti hu to zakhmon ko hawa lagti hain........
Kabhi raazi to kabhi khafaa lagti hain..........
Tu hi bata EH zindagi tu meri kya lagti hain........
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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22nd August 2008, 02:02 PM
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Originally Posted by CHHALIYA
diya ji.....
aap jo bhi likhte ho...... bohut meetha likhte ho....... ab tak to main aapki dil se fan ho chuki hu....... wow kya asardaar shabdon ka prayog karto ho....... aapke lavz mere dil ko cheerte hue nikal jaati hai........
really u rock man........
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Sukriya ji ..hume bahat khusi hui aapko humare nagme pasand hai....hum koi sayar nehin bas thori eheshash ko lafz main batane ki koshish kar rahe hain.....
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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