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Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai, - 25th July 2010, 09:26 AM
Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai,


Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai,
Aur chaah ke baad hi raah hoti hai.

Apki daad se hi badh jati hai himmat
shayar achha likhta hai aur vaah vaah hoti hai.

Achhi shayri pe jo karte hain kanjoosi-e-daad
Unki ye na-ahlyat kabil-e-gunah hoti hai.

khule dil se dete hain Yaha'n yaar log
daad
Shayro'n ke lie SDC Khawabgaah hoti hai
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jal pari madam aap ka shukria , aapne jal se niklke sdc pe qadam, Sorry pata nahiN kya rakha

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4th September 2010, 02:07 PM
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Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai,


Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai,
Aur chaah ke baad hi raah hoti hai.

Apki daad se hi badh jati hai himmat
shayar achha likhta hai aur vaah vaah hoti hai.

Achhi shayri pe jo karte hain kanjoosi-e-daad
Unki ye na-ahlyat kabil-e-gunah hoti hai.

khule dil se dete hain Yaha'n yaar log
daad
Shayro'n ke lie SDC Khawabgaah hoti hai
dear big b aap ki is post me ,kavya roop me
jo aapne vichar pesh kiye hain .na jaane kis mood
me likhe hain.arthaat majak me ya seriously.
par mujhe aapki yeh rachna pad ke laga ke yeh
baat bilkul satya hai kyunki hum sub apni rachnaaye sdc pe isee liye leke aate hain kyunki hum chahte hain ki sab humari rachnaa ko padhe aur comments de.agar rachna achchhi lage to daad nahi to bahut hi madhur shabdon me salah bhi de sakte hain kai baar hum koi achchhi rachna ko padh to lete hain par shayad samya ki kami ke karan reply nahi karte par us se likhne vale ko vo khushi nahi de paate jo humne khud uski rachna se parapat ki hoti hai.shayad jaroort se jyada bol gai.agar kisi ko bhi meri baat achchhi na lagi ho to muafi chahti hoon.
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dear big b aap ki is post me ,kavya roop me
jo aapne vichar pesh kiye hain .na jaane kis mood
me likhe hain.arthaat majak me ya seriously.
par mujhe aapki yeh rachna pad ke laga ke yeh
baat bilkul satya hai kyunki hum sub apni rachnaaye sdc pe isee liye leke aate hain kyunki hum chahte hain ki sab humari rachnaa ko padhe aur comments de.agar rachna achchhi lage to daad nahi to bahut hi madhur shabdon me salah bhi de sakte hain kai baar hum koi achchhi rachna ko padh to lete hain par shayad samya ki kami ke karan reply nahi karte par us se likhne vale ko vo khushi nahi de paate jo humne khud uski rachna se parapat ki hoti hai.shayad jaroort se jyada bol gai.agar kisi ko bhi meri baat achchhi na lagi ho to muafi chahti hoon.
Rashmi ji bilkul hi sahi kaha hai aapne shayar sirf daad ka bhookha hota hai aur uski mehnat par agar use daad na mile to wo maayus ho jata hai, magar ye bhi sach hai ki ham kisi ko majboor bhi nahi kar sakte, logon ko khud hi ye baat samjhna chahiye ki agar use kisi ke comments ka intzaar rehta hai to kisi aur ko bhi uske comments ki ummeed hoti hogi......

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5th September 2010, 01:26 AM
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muje bi rapes nahi dia kise ne . mane bi kai ashhi ashhi kaweeta likhi hai . kiu. batao
Wo kya hai Jal Pari ji.....ke PariyoN ko reputation dena insano ke bas ki baat nahi hai......aap ko to samandar mein hona chahiye aap kahan SDC par aa gayi hain....

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5th September 2010, 09:21 AM
bhai mere jab shayre likha jata hai tab bhi khaaj hoti hai aur jab koi daad nahi.n deta tab bhi khaaj hoti hai mousam koi bhi ho

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Rashmi ji bilkul hi sahi kaha hai aapne shayar sirf daad ka bhookha hota hai aur uski mehnat par agar use daad na mile to wo maayus ho jata hai, magar ye bhi sach hai ki ham kisi ko majboor bhi nahi kar sakte, logon ko khud hi ye baat samjhna chahiye ki agar use kisi ke comments ka intzaar rehta hai to kisi aur ko bhi uske comments ki ummeed hoti hogi......


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13th September 2010, 10:08 AM
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Wah wa.....wah wa........wah wa

parveen ji aap ki is khaas peshkash k liay khasamkhaas wah wa.

baat aisi hai k yuN to kisi ka likha hua koi padh le ya sun le itna hi kafi hota hai likhne wale k liay lekin us par agar daad or wah wahi bhi mil jaay to kya kehne.

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ha ha ha ha ha ha rajinderseep ji , bilkul sahi joke mara , ab dekhie yaha.n kitne logo ne kitne logo ke pet me darad kar raka hai ha ha

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Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai,


Har shayar ko daad ki chaah hoti hai,
Aur chaah ke baad hi raah hoti hai.

Apki daad se hi badh jati hai himmat
shayar achha likhta hai aur vaah vaah hoti hai.

Achhi shayri pe jo karte hain kanjoosi-e-daad
Unki ye na-ahlyat kabil-e-gunah hoti hai.

khule dil se dete hain Yaha'n yaar log
daad
Shayro'n ke lie SDC Khawabgaah hoti hai
Hi Komal
Chah hoti hai agar to raah hoti hai
Ho ghazal jo achchi,to waah hoti hai
waah!waah!waah!
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dear big b aap ki is post me ,kavya roop me
jo aapne vichar pesh kiye hain .na jaane kis mood
me likhe hain.arthaat majak me ya seriously.
Par mujhe aapki yeh rachna pad ke laga ke yeh
baat bilkul satya hai kyunki hum sub apni rachnaaye sdc pe isee liye leke aate hain kyunki hum chahte hain ki sab humari rachnaa ko padhe aur comments de.agar rachna achchhi lage to daad nahi to bahut hi madhur shabdon me salah bhi de sakte hain kai baar hum koi achchhi rachna ko padh to lete hain par shayad samya ki kami ke karan reply nahi karte par us se likhne vale ko vo khushi nahi de paate jo humne khud uski rachna se parapat ki hoti hai.shayad jaroort se jyada bol gai.agar kisi ko bhi meri baat achchhi na lagi ho to muafi chahti hoon.
rashmi ji mai aapke is essay ka arath ab samjha hoon ji

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Bahut acha likha hai parveen ji......... Aapke is andaaz ke liye dil se daad hazir hai....
thanks singla ji . apki daad dil se kabool hai.

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