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| View Poll Results: GTM Best of The Best Group C ki Ghazale.n | |||
| kaam koi bhi hamaare vaaste mushkil na tha |
   
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2 | 12.50% |
| Waqt ke Imtihaan se bada hota koi Imtihaan Nahi |
  
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3 | 18.75% |
| meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye |
  
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8 | 50.00% |
| pathron ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti |
  
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2 | 12.50% |
| RishtoN ke i's taane-baane meiN bhala sa hai ik naam |
  
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1 | 6.25% |
| Voters: 16. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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GTM "Best of The Best Group C" -
16th August 2010, 09:13 AM
Mere Pyare dosto.n :
Namskaar aur Aadaab! GTM Best of the Best Gorup A ke winnner hai : Fezan saaHeb GTM Best of the Best Gorup B ke winnner hai : Zidd saaHeb dosto.n GTM ka yeh Silsilaa'h aage baRhaate huye haazir hai Gorup C ki behterin Ghazale.n! apnaa qeemtee Vote apni pasandeedaa Ghazal ko de kar usse winner banaaye.n! duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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16th August 2010, 09:19 AM
kaam koi bhi hamaare vaaste mushkil na tha,
jab talak khauf-o-khatar agaah apna dil na tha. *agaah=maloom hona,being aware. thi baRi bad-mast raatein din bhi be-fikri ke the, oak mein sagar tha phir ka ranj jo saahil na tha. *bad-mast=nasheeli, high on alcohol *oak=hands put together to form a cup(to drink) bhool kar maazi ko apne haal mein jeete the hum, zeeq kyuN karte kisine dekha mustakbil na tha. *maazi=past,haal=present,zeeq=fikr/worry, mustakbil=future. chasm-e-tar hoon yaad karke woh jawaaN awaargi, jab weham tha sab hai haasil lek kuch haasil na tha. *chasm-e-tar=teary eyes, lek=lekin choR kar aaye the hum faulaad haathoN mein watan, kya Qayamat hai kaRoDoN mein koi kaabil na tha..? choR kar apne watan ko roz dohraata hoon main, mulQ yeh mera thikaana hai kabhi MANZIL na tha. na koi barbaad hum sa na koi khanaa kharaab, naaz hai main aur sab kuch tha magar buzdil na tha. InqalaaboN ka zamaana tha wohi "Talib" ke jab, ghar mein kala phone tha hathoN mein mobile na tha. |
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16th August 2010, 09:20 AM
Waqt ke Imtihaan se bada hota koi Imtihaan Nahi
Jab jee chahe use rok sake aisa koi InsaaN nahi Banti hai har marz ki dawa yun.H to zamane meiN Milti ho dard-e-dil ki dawa aisi koi DukaaN nahi Beithe hai har taraf Lu.Ntere kayi heejaboN meiN Jahan main kuda se badhkar mera koi NighbaaN nahi Har taraf sunayi deti bas mazhab kee hi baateiN Sirf Insaaniyat ki baat kare aisi koi ZabaaN nahi Nahi karte hum zaKhmo.n kii numaa_ish sare aam Bin aansoon ke bayaaN ho aisi meri koi DaastaN nahi Samajhaa hai zamaane ko ba.Dii muddat.oN ke baad Sabr-e-gham sabhi bhoolade aisa koi PaimaaN nahi Guzar chukaa hai ummiido.n kaa qaafilaa kab kaa kahne ko to Zinda hai "Ghazal" baki koi Armaan nahi |
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16th August 2010, 09:21 AM
meri tadap ka kaash un par aisa asar ho jaye
pathar hai jo pighal kar maum sa jigar ho jaye na rahene denge unki gali mein andhera kabhi jala denge khud ko jo roshan unka ghar ho jaye raah-e-zindagi mein na pahuchen unhe koi taqlif unki aasuvon ki meri ankhon mein basar ho jaye kab tak phirun main dar ba dar yu tanha bebas unke dar par ruh nikle khatam ye safar ho jaye mehsus ho jo unhe ik baar kabhi meri bhi kami toh mohabbat meri bhi ya khuda amar ho jaye |
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16th August 2010, 09:22 AM
pathron ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti
kabhi sang dil sanam se mohabat nahi milti jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti zaroori nahi tu chahe jise wo bhi tujhe chahe zamane mein kisi se kisi ki aadat nahi milti janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti yu.n to milta hai sabhi se muskura ke wo sitamgar bas ek hami ko uski zara si kurbatt nahi milti na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj' yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti |
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16th August 2010, 09:22 AM
RishtoN ke i's taane-baane meiN bhala sa hai ik naam
har baar ho tu hi maa meri, bas hai rab ko yahi paigaam nau maah rakh kokh meiN apni, lahu se apne seeNche maana ke har cheez hai bikati, na hai mamta ka koi daam haath pakad chalna seekhati, lori ga pyaar se sulaati maa hona vardaan bada, nahi i's se bada hai koi kaam pehle pet bhare bachche ka, bache to khuchh kha leti khoje se na milti mamta, chahe kar lo char tirath dhaam nalaayaq ho, bad'soorat ho ya sabse bada nik'kama bachcha apna lage bhala maa ko, bole ye_hi mera shayam diya hai jisne nayaab ye tohfa, sakal i's saNsaar ko u's rab ko tere isilye hai, mera baar'm baar pranaam |
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16th August 2010, 11:17 AM
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 Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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19th August 2010, 10:33 PM
Vote zaruur kare.n............!!
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21st August 2010, 03:00 PM
Plzz vote.............................................. ....
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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22nd August 2010, 02:23 PM
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My Vote Goes for this one! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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24th August 2010, 04:00 PM
aap sabhee se guzaariSh haiii ki Vote zaruur kare.n apnii pasandeedaa Ghazal ko..!
aapka ~Dhaval |
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24th August 2010, 04:37 PM
all the best.......................................
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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26th August 2010, 11:52 AM
Sabhi members se meri guzarish hai ke apna vote dekar sahi ghazal ko jeetne me madad kijiye.....
Plzzzz vote...........Now.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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26th August 2010, 12:46 PM
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bus adaigi aur bayaani thodi aur behtar ho sakti thi....... magar asl shayri hai isliye is group me best lagi... ye kiski hai koi secret to nahi hai magar yaad bhi nahi hai kiski hai ye jiski bhi hai daad kabool karen regards |
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mera vote |
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mera vote -
27th August 2010, 09:49 AM
Waqt ke Imtihaan se bada hota koi Imtihaan Nahi
Jab jee chahe use rok sake aisa koi InsaaN nahi....... mera vote is ghazal ke liye hai.....goodluck http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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30th August 2010, 03:59 AM
Votes plzzzzzzzz........................................ ......
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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