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Swarachit kavita - 19th September 2010, 10:52 PM
Ek toofaan thaa jo gujar gaya
abhi- abhi jo maine dekha thaa
ek khwaab, woh kidhar gayaa
kyoon khuli aankh,woh khwaab hi sahi
magar thaa kitna sach-saa,
zindagi dikhti thee kitni haseen
apni hi aankhon ke saamne
kaash! Woh chalta yoon hi, magar bifar gayaa
ek toofan thaa.....
Badi mushkilo se samudri ret pe banaya thaa
jo maine,iss lehar ke aate hi,kahan wo mera ghar gayaa
phir-phir aati ye lehren,
aur uss pe ye badhta ghana andhera,
uph! Samunder ka kinaara bhi sihar gayaa
ek toofan thaa....
Kabhi dil dimaag pe hota
toh kabhi dimaag dil pe
main toh bas doorse dekhta raha,
na jane kab raat gayee,kab pehar gaya
ek toofan thaa........
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20th September 2010, 06:28 PM
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Ek toofaan thaa jo gujar gaya
abhi- abhi jo maine dekha thaa
ek khwaab, woh kidhar gayaa
kyoon khuli aankh,woh khwaab hi sahi
magar thaa kitna sach-saa,
zindagi dikhti thee kitni haseen
apni hi aankhon ke saamne
kaash! Woh chalta yoon hi, magar bifar gayaa
ek toofan thaa.....
Badi mushkilo se samudri ret pe banaya thaa
jo maine,iss lehar ke aate hi,kahan wo mera ghar gayaa
phir-phir aati ye lehren,
aur uss pe ye badhta ghana andhera,
uph! Samunder ka kinaara bhi sihar gayaa
ek toofan thaa....
Kabhi dil dimaag pe hota
toh kabhi dimaag dil pe
main toh bas doorse dekhta raha,
na jane kab raat gayee,kab pehar gaya
ek toofan thaa........

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26th September 2010, 11:45 AM
Hounsalaafzaai ke liye shukria.aapki rachnayen bhi bahut achchhi lagi.
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26th September 2010, 12:42 PM
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Ek toofaan thaa jo gujar gaya
abhi- abhi jo maine dekha thaa
ek khwaab, woh kidhar gayaa
kyoon khuli aankh,woh khwaab hi sahi
magar thaa kitna sach-saa,
zindagi dikhti thee kitni haseen
apni hi aankhon ke saamne
kaash! Woh chalta yoon hi, magar bifar gayaa
ek toofan thaa.....
Badi mushkilo se samudri ret pe banaya thaa
jo maine,iss lehar ke aate hi,kahan wo mera ghar gayaa
phir-phir aati ye lehren,
aur uss pe ye badhta ghana andhera,
uph! Samunder ka kinaara bhi sihar gayaa
ek toofan thaa....
Kabhi dil dimaag pe hota
toh kabhi dimaag dil pe
main toh bas doorse dekhta raha,
na jane kab raat gayee,kab pehar gaya
ek toofan thaa........
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2nd November 2010, 11:37 AM
So nice of you for sharing this wonderful poem. May God bless you........

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