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Aaj Mausam bara Ashiqana hai - 7th December 2014, 06:10 AM
Ek nayi nazm le kar hazir hua huN , gaur farmaiye ....

Aaj Mausam bara Ashiqana hai,
Bus yehi dil ko ab samjhana hai.

Kyon mile thhe raah pe hum tum,
Is jirah meiN ab na jana hai.

Kal hue thhe bare charche YuN tau,
Hai haqueekat ke ye afsana hai.

Toone Naino se kar diya jaadoo,
Ab mujhe phir hosh meiN ana hai.

Mere dil pe tera hi pehra hai,
KyuN mujhe phir se aajmana hai.

Dil pe dee thi kabhi dustuk toone,
Us lamhe ko aaj phir dohrana hai.


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Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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7th December 2014, 08:32 AM
Waaaaaah.......Sehgal sahab waaaaaaaah....
Subah subah mohol romani bana diya aapne...

Kya ehsaas hai.....bohot khooob gazal

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7th December 2014, 09:00 AM
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Ek nayi nazm le kar hazir hua huN , gaur farmaiye ....

Aaj Mausam bara Ashiqana hai,
Bus yehi dil ko ab samjhana hai.

Kyon mile thhe raah pe hum tum,
Is jirah meiN ab na jana hai.

Kal hue thhe bare charche YuN tau,
Hai haqueekat ke ye afsana hai.

Toone Naino se kar diya jaadoo,
Ab mujhe phir hosh meiN ana hai.

Mere dil pe tera hi pehra hai,
KyuN mujhe phir se aajmana hai.

Dil pe dee thi kabhi dustuk toone,
Us lamhe ko aaj phir dohrana hai.

waahhhh janaab kya baat hai..................... itnii khoobsurat ghazal aapne drive karte karte likh lii bade tajjjub ki baat hai aur ham jaise talib e ilm ke liye misaal ki baat hai, kaash ke ham me bhi ye hunar aa jae......

likhte rahiye...... salaamat rahiye

Shaad....

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7th December 2014, 11:53 AM
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Waaaaaah.......Sehgal sahab waaaaaaaah....
Subah subah mohol romani bana diya aapne...

Kya ehsaas hai.....bohot khooob gazal

Aapka apna
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7th December 2014, 01:21 PM
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Ek nayi nazm le kar hazir hua huN , gaur farmaiye ....

Aaj Mausam bara Ashiqana hai,
Bus yehi dil ko ab samjhana hai.

Kyon mile thhe raah pe hum tum,
Is jirah meiN ab na jana hai.

Kal hue thhe bare charche YuN tau,
Hai haqueekat ke ye afsana hai.

Toone Naino se kar diya jaadoo,
Ab mujhe phir hosh meiN ana hai.

Mere dil pe tera hi pehra hai,
KyuN mujhe phir se aajmana hai.

Dil pe dee thi kabhi dustuk toone,
Us lamhe ko aaj phir dohrana hai.
Waah sanjay ji mausam to ashiqana hoga hi jab aap aisi dil lubhane wali nazm likhenge....
Kyon mile hum tum
is zirah me na jana hai...
Bahut khoob..


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7th December 2014, 01:30 PM
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Ek nayi nazm le kar hazir hua huN , gaur farmaiye ....

Aaj Mausam bara Ashiqana hai,
Bus yehi dil ko ab samjhana hai.

Kyon mile thhe raah pe hum tum,
Is jirah meiN ab na jana hai.

Kal hue thhe bare charche YuN tau,
Hai haqueekat ke ye afsana hai.

Toone Naino se kar diya jaadoo,
Ab mujhe phir hosh meiN ana hai.

Mere dil pe tera hi pehra hai,
KyuN mujhe phir se aajmana hai.

Dil pe dee thi kabhi dustuk toone,
Us lamhe ko aaj phir dohrana hai.
Behad umdaa Sanjay ji

mehfil loot li aapne janaab yunhi to har sher muqammal mehsoos hua par is sher par waah ki awaaz thodi wazn ke saath nikli

Kal hue thhe bare charche YuN tau,
Hai haqueekat ke ye afsana hai.

Yunhi bazm mein aag lagaate rahiYeGaa


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9th December 2014, 10:38 AM
waah Sanjay jee.....Dino din àapne improvement dekhne KO mil rha h.... I m proud of u....


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14th December 2014, 10:58 AM
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waahhhh janaab kya baat hai..................... itnii khoobsurat ghazal aapne drive karte karte likh lii bade tajjjub ki baat hai aur ham jaise talib e ilm ke liye misaal ki baat hai, kaash ke ham me bhi ye hunar aa jae......

likhte rahiye...... salaamat rahiye

Shaad....
Shukriya Shoaib bhai jo aapko.humari peshkasjh pasand ayee.

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14th December 2014, 11:02 AM
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Waah sanjay ji mausam to ashiqana hoga hi jab aap aisi dil lubhane wali nazm likhenge....
Kyon mile hum tum
is zirah me na jana hai..
Bahut khoob..
Madhu ji ..bahut khushi hui yeh jaan kat ki.aap ko meri nazm pasand ayee

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khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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