*~*ChAl MeRe SaAtH cHaL*~*

[Taish]

CHAL MERE SAATH CHAL




doston aaj ek saath do ghazalen pesh kar di hain maine,bas isi umeed me ki aap logon ko dodno kalaam pasand aayenge.umeed hai jyada bura nahi likha hai.


Ek baar fir se bazm ko is nacheez ghayal ka aadaabb.ek baar fir se pesh hun aapki bazm me mehfil sajane ko.bas haataal humse bahut khafa hain.aur zindagi humse naarzz fir v majbur tha kalam chalane ko.so aa gaya ek aur ghayal klaam ke saath.isi umeed me ki aapko pasand aayega.


To pesh hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam............


Har gali,har ghar pet era nisha dekhte hain,,tu hi dikhti hai,hum jahaan dekhte hain,,har ajnabee se hum tera pata poochte hain,,eh khuda,kyat hi meri khata? poochte hain,sheeshe ka dil hai mera patthar nahi,,par todne wale haathon ko,koi darr nahi……………

Sach me koi dar nahi……………..



Ye samaa ho na ho kal,chal,mere saath chal,
Zindagi ban jayegi ghazal, chal,mere saath chal.

Saath tere hum nahi,kaise kahen ki gum nahi,
Tu kyun yun gaya badal, chal,mere saath chal.

Wafayen ki,jafayen ki,humne sirf khatayen ki,
Zamane se zara sambhal, chal,mere saath chal.

Jab v teri yaad aayi,bas yahi fariyaad aayi,
Kabhi meri kabr pe tahal, chal,mere saath chal.

Aane wale dino ka pata kya,Aa mere kareeb aa,
Tujhme main jaun pighal, chal,mere saath chal.

Wafa ko milti bewafai,eh khuda,duhai!duhai!,
Fir v log wafa karte“Ghayal”,chal,mere saath chal.

Mohabat jo ki kisi se,nafrat ho gayi zindagi se,
Kuch yun kate humare pal, chal,mere saath chal.

[sunita thakur]

Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
CHAL MERE SAATH CHAL




doston aaj ek saath do ghazalen pesh kar di hain maine,bas isi umeed me ki aap logon ko dodno kalaam pasand aayenge.umeed hai jyada bura nahi likha hai.


Ek baar fir se bazm ko is nacheez ghayal ka aadaabb.ek baar fir se pesh hun aapki bazm me mehfil sajane ko.bas haataal humse bahut khafa hain.aur zindagi humse naarzz fir v majbur tha kalam chalane ko.so aa gaya ek aur ghayal klaam ke saath.isi umeed me ki aapko pasand aayega.


To pesh hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam............


Har gali,har ghar pet era nisha dekhte hain,,tu hi dikhti hai,hum jahaan dekhte hain,,har ajnabee se hum tera pata poochte hain,,eh khuda,kyat hi meri khata? poochte hain,sheeshe ka dil hai mera patthar nahi,,par todne wale haathon ko,koi darr nahi……………

Sach me koi dar nahi……………..



Ye samaa ho na ho kal,chal,mere saath chal,
Zindagi ban jayegi ghazal, chal,mere saath chal.

Saath tere hum nahi,kaise kahen ki gum nahi,
Tu kyun yun gaya badal, chal,mere saath chal.

Wafayen ki,jafayen ki,humne sirf khatayen ki,
Zamane se zara sambhal, chal,mere saath chal.

Jab v teri yaad aayi,bas yahi fariyaad aayi,
Kabhi meri kabr pe tahal, chal,mere saath chal.

Aane wale dino ka pata kya,Aa mere kareeb aa,
Tujhme main jaun pighal, chal,mere saath chal.

Wafa ko milti bewafai,eh khuda,duhai!duhai!,
Fir v log wafa karte“Ghayal”,chal,mere saath chal.

Mohabat jo ki kisi se,nafrat ho gayi zindagi se,
Kuch yun kate humare pal, chal,mere saath chal.

Ghayal ji

mubarakbaad kabool kijiye etne badiya gazal ke liye.

appki gazals bahut dard bhari hoti hai. pad kar dil ko sakoon sa milta hai, kyuki dard bhi ek dawa hai.

"Uttha kar dil se lagga leti hu,
dekhti hu jab b koi shai tadpaety huey"

[Rubeena Parveen]

hi
apka nam to main nahi janti apko ghayal shayar kehkar mukhatib karna achha nahi lagta agar koi etraz na ho to agli post main ap apn anam zarur likhyega achha lagega tab apko mukhatib karte hue

wese apki ye rachna bhi kafi achhi he padhkar achha laga apka kalam bhi qabile tareef hota he wese mujhe ek wafa ka kalam bahut pasanad he unke har kalam main zabadast dard hota he padhte hi dil main utarta chala jata he apki bhi do rachna mujhe wese hi lagi

keep writing
take care
bye

[Taish]

Originally posted by sunita virender
Ghayal ji

mubarakbaad kabool kijiye etne badiya gazal ke liye.

appki gazals bahut dard bhari hoti hai. pad kar dil ko sakoon sa milta hai, kyuki dard bhi ek dawa hai.

"Uttha kar dil se lagga leti hu,
dekhti hu jab b koi shai tadpaety huey"

shukriya sunita ji.par aapne kaha ki humari ghazalen ahchi hoti hain.par humne aapko pehli baar apni mehfil me dekha hai.umeed karte hain ki aap hume aur v padhiyega.waise ek ghazal dard me v hai.umeed hai aapko wo v pasand aayega.hume yunhi padhte rahiyega.

[Taish]

Originally posted by Rubeena Parveen
hi
apka nam to main nahi janti apko ghayal shayar kehkar mukhatib karna achha nahi lagta agar koi etraz na ho to agli post main ap apn anam zarur likhyega achha lagega tab apko mukhatib karte hue

wese apki ye rachna bhi kafi achhi he padhkar achha laga apka kalam bhi qabile tareef hota he wese mujhe ek wafa ka kalam bahut pasanad he unke har kalam main zabadast dard hota he padhte hi dil main utarta chala jata he apki bhi do rachna mujhe wese hi lagi

keep writing
take care
bye

shukriya rubeena ji.aapka shukraguzar hun ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.waise hume log LUCKY naam se bulate hain.umeed hai aage v aapse baaten hoti rahengi humari.