Zalzala (Earth Quake)

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wo subha thi, wo qayamat thi
chotey baron ki shaamat thi

Wo jo lamho(moments) mai ujar(tabah) gaye
Wo jo lamho mai bitchar gaye

kohi azeezon(relatives) ko dhoondhta hai kahi
kisi kaa kohi bhi raha nahi

kuch un ki madad karo logo(people)
thori himat karo logo

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Bhoot he khoob Star
tum haray kalam ka markazi khial (Basic Idea)
tw mujh ko bhoot he pasand aya..

K itni tabahi hui hay,
kitnay he mar gay
aur jo zinda hay wo,
murdo say bhi buri halat may hay
aur tum nay logo ko un ke madad kar nay ko bhi kaha..

Miny tum say he mutasir (inspire) hoo kar kuch likha hay.
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Jaha may misly-e-kiamat ek Sada Aai,......................(Jaha= Dunia; Misly-e-Kiamat= Kimat ky jisay; Sada= Awaz)
us subh zami bhi khuf-e-Khuda say tharrai.................(Khuf-e-Khuda= Auper waly ka azab; tharrai = dar say kampna)
Taab-e-Nazary-e-Affat Nigh nay kaha pAai,.................(Taab-e-Nazary-e-Affat = Azab ko dekhnay ke takat)
har-su malbo ki shakal may pardi Thabahi..................(Har-su = har taraf; Malbo = Tutay huy ghar ka dher)

Roshni in cherago may phir ay Khuda bhar-day,
apni rahmat ke ek jhalak tw auria kar-day.................(Auria = Dekaha)
Azmaish hay kardi tw is ko asan kar-day,
Sabar-e-Kalab Aye Khuda tw in ko Ata Kar day..............(Sabar-e-Kalab = Dil ka Sabar)

Rahamat-e-Illahi kay bazu tum bano........................(Rahamat-e-Illahi = Khuda ke rahaymat; Bazu = Arm)
In bekaso ky sir pay saya tum bano........................(Bekas = La-char)
Tabasum-e-Aumeed chero pay tum bano.......................(Tabasum-e-Aumeed = Aummed ke muskurahat)
Dua-e-rahmat ky asar tum bano.............................(Dua-e-rahmat = Rahamat ke dua)

Aumeed hay pasand ai hoo ge

Mr Nice Guy

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Salam Nice_4m_Heart

liked ur poem very much
May ALLAH be with us in recovering such a disaster.
aur haan i thought to give u an idea to improve ur spellings
what ever word u r going to write if its difficult to spell just split its voices being used in its pronounciation. then choose carefully the english alphabets to write it down

then it'll be very easily get its spellings correct.
take care