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ik birhman ne kaha hai ki ye saal achha hai...!
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Love ik birhman ne kaha hai ki ye saal achha hai...! - 30th November 2009, 10:00 PM

Mehfil-e-mashoor-shayar me haazir mere sab dostoN ko mera Salam!
Aaj phir Mirza Ghalib saheb ki ek Ghazal pesh karne ke iraade se aap se mukhatib ho raha hooN.
Aapko yeh Ghazal pasand aaye, issi Umm'eed ke saath pesh kar raha hooN, mulehza farmaaiye....
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be-talab deN to maza usme sava milta hai....
wo gada jiska na ho Khu-e-swaal achha hai...!

[gada = bhikhari, khu-e-swaal = maangne ki aadat]

dekhiye paate haiN ush_shaak button se kya faiz...?
ik birhman ne kaha hai ki ye saal achha hai...!

[ush_shaak = aashiq log]

unke dekhe se jo aa jaati hai muNh par raunak...
Wo samjhte haiN ki bimaar ka haal achha hai...!


hum-sukhan tesha ne farhaad shiiriiN ko kiya...
jis tarha ka ki kisi meiN ho kamaal achha hai...!

[hum-sukhan = aapas meiN baat-cheet ki tayari]

Qtra dariya meiN jo mil jaaye to dariya ho jaaye...
kaam achha hai wo jiska ki ma'al achha hai...!

[ma'al = result]

humko maloom hai jannat ki haqiqat lekin...
dil ke khush karne ko 'Ghalib' yeh khayal achha hai...!


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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1st December 2009, 10:52 AM

Husn meyh garcha ba hangaam e kamaal achaa hai
is se mera meyh e Khusheed e jamaal acha hai

boosa daity nahieN aur dil pe hai her laHz^ah nigaah
jee meN kehte haiN keh muft aaey to maal acha hai

aur baazaar se le aaey agar TooT gayaa
saagir e jam se meraa jaam e sifaal achaa hai

be talab daiN to maza us meN sava miltaa hai
woh gadaa jis ko nah ho khuu-e-sawal achaa hai

un ke dekhy se je aa jaati hai mouN per ronaq
woh smajhte haiN keh bemaar ka Haal achaa hai

dekhiye paate hain u'shaaQ buttoN se kiyaa faiZ
ik barhaman ne kaha hay keh yeh saath achaa hai

hum sukhan taishe nay farhaan ko sheerieN se kiyaa
jis t^araH ka keh kasi meN hoo kamaal acha hai

Qatrah daryaa meN jo mil jaaey to daryaa ho jaaey
kaam acha hai woh , jis ka keh maal achaa hai

KhiZar sult^aaN ke rakhey KhaaliQ e akbar sar sabz
shaah ke baaGh meN yeh taazah nihaal achaa hai

hum ko maloom hai jannat ki Haqeeqat lakin
dil ko khush rakhne ko Ghaalib yeh Khayaal achaa hai


kuch kahoN to sharm saar hoN
chup rahoN to guneh gaar hoN
   
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1st December 2009, 10:53 AM

kuch ashaar mere pass bhi they so maiN ne poori ghazal pesh kii ...umeed hai lut^f andooz hoNge


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kuch ashaar mere pass bhi they so maiN ne poori ghazal pesh kii ...umeed hai lut^f andooz hoNge
Mujeeb saheb bahut bahut shukriya.....aapne waqi meiN bahut badhiya kaam kiya hai.....

Janaab mere paas Ghalib saheb ki kuch ghazaleN haiN, jinko maiN yahaN share karta rehta hooN......agar aap ke paas bhi haiN to aap bhi thread pe daal dijiye, mere jaise kadrdanoN ka bahut bhala ho jayega.....


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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