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aa gaya chaand - 19th September 2003, 08:55 PM
aa gaya chaand le ke
taaron ki baaraat
sang uske
jhilmilati si chalne lagi raat
andhera laga dhundlaane
jaane lage dard saare
mehakne lagi raat
phool gaane lage tarane
lekar chand ko baahon mein raat lagi ithlaane
thumakti hui aayi chandni
raat se batiyaane
kehne lagi bata e-raat
jo raaz lagi thi chupaane
hansi raat, boli-
janti hoon ki kal phir na hoga chand
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1st September 2004, 12:12 AM
Bahut khoob.....aapki chaand aur taaron ne din mein chaandni dekhne ka mahool sa kar diya...

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Are wah!

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Aapne to behad khubsoorat kalaam likh diya.. bohat hi pyaara khayaal hai iska.. aur bayaan bhi saadgi me lipTa hua.. bohat khoob!

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Re: aa gaya chaand - 22nd December 2004, 01:41 PM
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taaron ki baaraat
sang uske
jhilmilati si chalne lagi raat
andhera laga dhundlaane
jaane lage dard saare
mehakne lagi raat
phool gaane lage tarane
lekar chand ko baahon mein raat lagi ithlaane
thumakti hui aayi chandni
raat se batiyaane
kehne lagi bata e-raat
jo raaz lagi thi chupaane
hansi raat, boli-
janti hoon ki kal phir na hoga chand
na honge taare
reh jayenge mere sang tarane jo gaaye saare
reh jaayenge geet aur baatein bohut saari
kaat loongi subah phir yaad mein tumhari
hi masti ji

ye lo ek nagina hume dhund nikala ....aapke chand aur unki baraton ka kissa yun to ab kisi se chupa nahi reh gaya .. par ye kavita jaroor waqt ke panno pe kahin dab si gayi thi ... aaj ise hume hawa di hai ... aur umeed hai ye charcha bhi ab kisi se chupa na rahega ... aapki har manokamna poori ho isi dua ke sath .. aapse vida

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reh jayenge mere sang tarane jo gaaye saare
reh jaayenge geet aur baatein bohut saari
kaat loongi subah phir yaad mein tumhari

Hi!

Bohot khooob... this one is so beautifull... The above lines impressed me the most.. really nice work... hope to see you here again

Well Done Kunaal!! Is nageene se rubaro karane ka shukriya

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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Bahut khoob - 23rd December 2004, 02:21 PM
Masti ji....bahut khoob....aapki gaayki to sun hi li thi....aaj ye likhne ki kala bhi parhi...bahut pasand aayi...donoN hi kalaaeiN...

Hope aage bhi likhti raheiNgi....meri taraf se shubhkaamnaaeiN...khushhaal bhavishye ke liye.

Khush rahiye.

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Re: aa gaya chaand - 27th December 2004, 10:12 PM
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aa gaya chaand le ke
taaron ki baaraat
sang uske
jhilmilati si chalne lagi raat
andhera laga dhundlaane
jaane lage dard saare
mehakne lagi raat
phool gaane lage tarane
lekar chand ko baahon mein raat lagi ithlaane
thumakti hui aayi chandni
raat se batiyaane
kehne lagi bata e-raat
jo raaz lagi thi chupaane
hansi raat, boli-
janti hoon ki kal phir na hoga chand
na honge taare
reh jayenge mere sang tarane jo gaaye saare
reh jaayenge geet aur baatein bohut saari
kaat loongi subah phir yaad mein tumhari

Kya mast mast likha hai masti ji
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aa gaya chaand le ke
taaron ki baaraat
sang uske
jhilmilati si chalne lagi raat
andhera laga dhundlaane
jaane lage dard saare
mehakne lagi raat
phool gaane lage tarane
lekar chand ko baahon mein raat lagi ithlaane
thumakti hui aayi chandni
raat se batiyaane
kehne lagi bata e-raat
jo raaz lagi thi chupaane
hansi raat, boli-
janti hoon ki kal phir na hoga chand
na honge taare
reh jayenge mere sang tarane jo gaaye saare
reh jaayenge geet aur baatein bohut saari
kaat loongi subah phir yaad mein tumhari


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.kya khoobsoorat kalaam samne layi hain aap..shukriya apka..
bahut pyara likha hai sarika...itna sara pyaar hai in pankitiyon me...aur sath sath dard bhi chhipa hai..
bahut khoob.....


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bahut khoob............................................. ....................

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yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa

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Are wah!

Masti ji..

Aapne to behad khubsoorat kalaam likh diya.. bohat hi pyaara khayaal hai iska.. aur bayaan bhi saadgi me lipTa hua.. bohat khoob!

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hi masti ji

ye lo ek nagina hume dhund nikala ....aapke chand aur unki baraton ka kissa yun to ab kisi se chupa nahi reh gaya .. par ye kavita jaroor waqt ke panno pe kahin dab si gayi thi ... aaj ise hume hawa di hai ... aur umeed hai ye charcha bhi ab kisi se chupa na rahega ... aapki har manokamna poori ho isi dua ke sath .. aapse vida

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Bohot khooob... this one is so beautifull... The above lines impressed me the most.. really nice work... hope to see you here again

Well Done Kunaal!! Is nageene se rubaro karane ka shukriya
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Masti ji....bahut khoob....aapki gaayki to sun hi li thi....aaj ye likhne ki kala bhi parhi...bahut pasand aayi...donoN hi kalaaeiN...

Hope aage bhi likhti raheiNgi....meri taraf se shubhkaamnaaeiN...khushhaal bhavishye ke liye.

Khush rahiye.

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sarika,

ek soonder ahesaas .... soondarta ki kalam se...... achha laga

kunaal shukriaa........ ise yaha tak laane k liye.....
Sab se pehle to aap sab se muafi chahungi. aap sab ne apna keemati waqt nikala mera housla badaane ke liye aur main iss thread ko bhool hi gayi.


Kunaal ne to isey revive bhi karne ki koshish ki..........main bohut sharminda hun aur aap sab ki tahe dil se shukrguzaar hun ki aapne iss raat ki kahaani mein dil chaspi dikhaayi aur mere tooto phoote alfaazon ki itni tareef kari jiski main khud ko haqdaar bhi nahi samajhati.

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hoye hoye....kya romantic romantic likha hai bhabhi sahiiba...bahut majja aaya aapki yeh purani poetry padkar

shukriya didi........

puraana likha bhi diary ke puraane panne ki tarah hota hai jis par humaare ateet ki chaap hoti hai.

usey padna bhi aapko phir usii duniya mein le jaata hai jahan ka rasta wqt ke saath hum bhool jaaate hain.

yaad aa raha hai ki isey bhi raat mein apni chat par baith kar likha tha kyun na jaane man ko raat ek premika nazar aayi aur chaand premi .............

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bahut pyara likha hai sarika...itna sara pyaar hai in pankitiyon me...aur sath sath dard bhi chhipa hai..
bahut khoob.....
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bahot khub ehsaas....
dheroN daad.
Shukriya adeil..............kya baat hai aaj kal bohut kam aate ho?

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