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jasdeep ji, bahut acha likha hai. jwab dene ki koshish ki hai, plz gaur farmayein: mohabaat kya hai.....kuch b nahi sirf dilon ka khel hai aur...kuch b nahi tanhai mein koi uaad to yeh mohabaat nahi yeh sirf vaadon ka jaal hai aur.....kuch b nahi be-waffa hass rahi hai raqeebo ke saath hum saanse b lete hain, to wo bi darr-darr kar ek hi dhua di huse, jo kabul ho gayi k hum jiye yeh zingadi....mar-mar kar........ Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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Koshish ki hai chhoti c ke aapke swaalon ka jawaab de saku.... zara gaur farmaiyega Apke pehle sher ka jawab Mohabbat kuch bhi nahi, to phir hoti kyun hai?? tod dene hote hai gar khwaab, to yeh piroti kyun hai?? Zakhm to bahut milte hai mohabbat mein gar dikhte nahi to phir aankh roti kyun hai?? Aur Doosre sher ka jawwab gar kubool ho gayi hai dua apni to khushi kyun nahi??? dekh kar usko hanste aaj, apne chehre par hansi kyun nahi??? chahte to yehi the ke har khushi mile usko aaj mili hai usko to hamein khushi kyun nahi?? Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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16th August 2007, 01:27 PM
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sabko mila ke pite hein pani sharab me, sabko mila ke pite hein pani sharab.... or me pi gaya milake or me pi gaya milake jawani sharab me..... sunitaji itni nashiili line mat likha karo kahin esa n ho ki bina piye hi nasha chad jaaye.... shukriya in sheron ko hamare bich share karne ke liye...ese hi umda-2 sher likhkar is shayron ki mehfil ko ronaq ata karti rahein.... bye dost  agar hum ek ansu hote, to apki ankhon se hokar apke hothon par marna pasand karte. agar ap meri ankhon ke ansu hote, to vaada he jaan hum zindgi bhar N rote... Merii subah terii muriid hai merii shaam tere hii naam se Tere dar se nahii main jaau.Ngaa ye Khayaal dil se nikal de --------------------------------------- ****allah hafiz**** **aadi9935458083** ***take care*** (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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17th August 2007, 04:50 PM
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 yeh sher mujhe behad pasand hai so aap sab ke saath share karna chaha tha.aatey rahiye god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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kai baar kushi ke saath dard bhi aata hai, kushi ka ahsaas kahi gayab ho jata hai, mat jaya karo aap roj roj maikhane meiN, roj jane se sakki se pyar ho jata hai....  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th August 2007, 05:05 PM
lovely lovely dear it was very nice....few people may understand it... H.O. Shapoorji Pallonji ltd. mumbai. |
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wah wah karke na mahfil se utha kijiye, jara aapne daman meiN bhi jaank lijiye... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th August 2007, 05:16 PM
very nice...i really liked it H.O. Shapoorji Pallonji ltd. mumbai. |
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yu hi nice nice kah kar baat khatam na kijiye. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th August 2007, 05:26 AM
apni hi mehfil mein humein najar andaaz kar diya
pucha b nahi peeto ho, aur jaam bar diya tumhari mehfil mein, tumhari ek jhalak k liye taras gaye jisse sharaab nah behka saki, teri ek najar yeh kaam kar diya.............. malum hai thoda teda meda likha hai aur thoda lumga, kya karein......bt this time, sad nahi hai....  Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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Sabhi Doston ko mera Namashkaar, Sunita ji ,aap ka jawaab nahi hai jab bhi gujarta hoon maikhaane se... har botal me teri tasweer nazar aati hai... tabhi aata hai khayal teri bewafai ka... ki kaise har hoton se to chipak jaati hai... (Writer: Unknown) Reshma, Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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21st August 2007, 03:05 PM
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ankho se dekh liya hota agar tamanna thi ajmaane ki ...hum yuhi behosh ho jaate kya jarurat thi muskurane ki... H.O. Shapoorji Pallonji ltd. mumbai. |
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21st August 2007, 03:12 PM
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koi dikha k roye.. koi chupa k roye.. hume rulane wale rula k royee. par maja to uss waqt hai dost .. jab qatil bhi janaze pe aake royee....... H.O. Shapoorji Pallonji ltd. mumbai. |
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22nd August 2007, 09:46 AM
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wah wah dost bahut aacha sher hum sab se share kiya hai aapne....yu hi aatey rahiye aur ha aapka phele wala sher bhi kamaal ka hai. hum to raat ke andherey meiN roye, zamane ke saamne to muskuraye, par tanhai meiN tumhey yaad karke roye, tumne di thi kasam na peena phir kabhi, yaad teri aaye to maikhane jake roye. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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har jaam honthoN se lagaya nahi jata, jo lag jaye ek baar usko hataya nahi jata, yu to rahi miltey haiN bahut safar meiN, par har rahi ko humsafar banaya nahi jata. Not Mine .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd August 2007, 10:44 AM
ye kaun chala chaman se khamoshiyan lekar...
kali kali ro uthi siskiya lekar... hus rahe the jo mere doobne par.. wohi nikle hai meri talaash me kashtiyaa lekar... kaisa laga jaroor batiyega.... H.O. Shapoorji Pallonji ltd. mumbai. |
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23rd August 2007, 10:48 AM
baadlon k darmiyaan kuch aisi saajish hui..
mera ghar mitti ka tha..mere hi ghar barish hui.. usko bhi zidd hai bijliyan girane ki.. aur hume bhi zidd hai wahi ghar basane ki... H.O. Shapoorji Pallonji ltd. mumbai. |
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24th August 2007, 08:56 AM
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ab etne acchey sher likhey hai apne to enka jawaab mujhe abhi nahi mil raha...soch kar enka reply karungi. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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31st August 2007, 08:14 PM
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haa didi, mai puri tarah sehmat ho aap ki baat se............wakehi TAUHEED ne bahut khub sher likhe hai.........inka jawaab dena thoda mushkil hai.......... gr8 job TAUHEED............... |
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3rd September 2007, 01:18 AM
chalo men bhi hisaa le letaa hoon magar ye song hai ise sune bina mat jaaiyega majaa nahi aayegaa. ye hai link gaana sunane ke liye
http://www.radioreloaded.com/beta/tracks/?3162 aur yeh hai song lyrix barasaat ke mausam mein tanhaayi ke aalam mein - 2 main ghar se nikal aayaa botal bhi uthaa laaya abi zindaa huun to (ji lene do) - 2 bhari barasaat mein pi lene do - 2 (mujhe tukadon mein nahin jinaa hai qataraa qataraa to nahin pinaa hai) - 2 ho aaj paimaane hataa do yaaron haan saaraa maikaanaa pilaa do yaaron maikadon mein to piyaa karataa huun - 2 chalati raahon mein to pi lene do abi zindaa huun to (mere dushman hain zamaane ke gam baad pine ke ye honge kam) - 2 ho zulm duniyaa ke na sah paayuunga bin piye aaj na rah paayuunga mujhe haalaat se takaraanaa hai - 2 aise haalaat mein pi lene do abi zindaa huun to regards manu |
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3rd September 2007, 04:41 AM
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chalo didi se jwab nahi diya gaya, hum jwab dene ki koshish karte hain. bahut muskil se kuch likha hai, umeed hai, iske jwad k kabil hai. kripya gaur farmayein: sawaan ka mausam tha, aur barish b hui buunde wahin girri jahan aapka ghar tha saajish mat samjiyein isse badalon ki ghar wahan banaya, jahan badal har pal tha bijli to milati badal ko zameen se issi liye, bijli ko girna tha shayad bahut khoobsurat tha aapka ghar issi wajah se badal ko vahin zameen se milna tha humein umeed hai, k humara jwab pasand ayega. plz batayeiga, kaisa laga. adeus manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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http://www.radioreloaded.com/beta/tracks/?3162 aur yeh hai song lyrix barasaat ke mausam mein tanhaayi ke aalam mein - 2 main ghar se nikal aayaa botal bhi uthaa laaya abi zindaa huun to (ji lene do) - 2 bhari barasaat mein pi lene do - 2 (mujhe tukadon mein nahin jinaa hai qataraa qataraa to nahin pinaa hai) - 2 ho aaj paimaane hataa do yaaron haan saaraa maikaanaa pilaa do yaaron maikadon mein to piyaa karataa huun - 2 chalati raahon mein to pi lene do abi zindaa huun to (mere dushman hain zamaane ke gam baad pine ke ye honge kam) - 2 ho zulm duniyaa ke na sah paayuunga bin piye aaj na rah paayuunga mujhe haalaat se takaraanaa hai - 2 aise haalaat mein pi lene do abi zindaa huun to regards manu |
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21st September 2007, 03:57 PM
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maaf kijiyega tauheed ji aapke sher bahut khoob thy...unka reply hi nahi kar saki.....  lijiye ek sher meri taraf se aap sab ki nazar.......... Barsaat tanha gujar gaye meri, milne aa jate to kaya jata, pyasi rahi maiN barsaat mein bhi, do goont nazroN se pilla jate to kaya jata, sulagata raha badan barsaat meiN bhi, ek baar gale laga jate to kaya jata..... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2007, 12:42 PM
Kismat ki berukhi ka manzar ajeeb tha,
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28th September 2007, 09:27 PM
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this is arvind .................. aap likhi line read karke mujhe mere purane din yaad aagaye.... CHHUP GAYA WO JAKAR KAHI SHAYAD HUME SATANE KO, LEKIN HUM UNKI YAAD ME BHOOL GAYE JAMANE KO, KOI UNHE JAKAR YE BATA DE KI, TARSTE HAIN HUM UNKI EK JHALAK PANE KO........ |
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30th September 2007, 01:42 AM
Unhe jarurat kya hai hame yu aajmane ki, aaj fir jarurat padegi kanch ke paimano ki.
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30th September 2007, 02:14 AM
Unhe jarurat kya hai hame yu aajmane ki, aaj fir jarurat padegi kanch ke paimano ki.
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5th October 2007, 01:34 PM
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"socha tha kushnaseeb hoon, har manzil ke maiN kareeb hoon, waha khuda bhi kaya kar sakta hai, jaha ensaaN hi badnseeb ho" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th October 2007, 02:56 PM
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yu tadpane meiN bhi ek majja hai, par sach to yeh hai ki mere mahboob, tere bin jeena mere liye ek sajja hai" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th October 2007, 03:02 PM
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woh din suhane yaad aatey hai to ro leti hoon, jab nahi sah pata dil jalim waqt ki dushbariyaN, khuda ke saamne haath jodti hoon aur ro leti hoon" maine koshish ki hai aap sab ki shayri ka jawaab dene ki, par pata nahi aapko mere jawaab pasand aaye hai ja nahi....! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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8th October 2007, 03:41 AM
Hi SAKHI BAS ITNA SA KAAM KAR, YE SAARE ILZAAM MERE NAAM KAR EK DO PAIMANE SE MERA KYA HOGA, SARA MAIKHANA MERE NAAM KAR (N.M) Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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gar hota mumkin to beshak maiN yeh kar deti, sarra maikhana kaya har maikhana tere naam kar deti, par jaha to har koi mera diwana hai, eh mere ashiq, maikhana chorr, Kaash !maangi hoti tune meri zindgi, bin sochey zindgi naam tere kar deti.................... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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achaa sher hai. vaise aap achaa to likhatee hee hai. jab bhi dhaval milta hai aap ki tareef karta hai. aap ke is shr ke reply men ghulam ali sahaab ki ek ghazal paish karta hoon. kaun hai jisane may nahin chakkhi kaun jhuuthi qasam uthaata hai mayakade se jo bach niakalata hai teri aankhon mein duub jaata hai piye ja raha huun, jiye ja raha huun jawaani ko dhokha diye ja raha huun judaayi hi tha zindagi ka muqaddar bahut ji chuka lijiye ja raha huun bahut zakm khaaye magar raaston par charaagaan to kuchh kuchh kiye ja raha huun bhulaana mujhe itana aasaan na hoga kayi daastaanein diye ja raha huun kashish koyi aisi hai jine mein ' aarif' ke mar mar ke bhi main jiye ja raha huun regards manu |
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12th October 2007, 04:54 AM
hello didi...........kaise hain aap? misd u loads...
abb hum b kuch likhte hain saaki jaara dheere dheere pila raat abbi baaki hai mohabaat abbi thodi si hui hai thodi si abbi baaki hai itna khoobsurat banaya hai khuda ne usko dekha ek bar aur humein mohabaat ho gayi sharaab mein dikh rahi hai meri mehbooba yeh sharaab aab aur b nashili ho gayi...... kaisa laga didi? meri mail mili???? Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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15th October 2007, 09:48 AM
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accha laga munna mail mil gaye hai........ aur maine reply b kar diya hai...."shaam hote hi kadam ladkhadane lage, khud b khud tere dar ki aur aane lage, do goont pila aur buja se pyas sakki, nahi to hum yeh dunia chorr kar jane lage" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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15th October 2007, 09:51 AM
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namaskaar manu g, kaise haiN aap. g haan, dhaval se aapke bare meiN baat hue thi, accha hai na do bade bade shayar ek doosrey ke etne paas rahtey haiN manu g, ab kaya kahuN aapne to mere sher ke jawaab meiN Gulaam Ali Saheb ki gazal likh di......maiN es akabil kaha ki mere sher ka jawaab unki gazal se ho. aapne mera sher pasand kiya dil se shukriya yu hi padtey rahiyega aur aapni rai detey rahiyega. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2007, 04:25 AM
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dii..vaise jo aapne likha hai, vo humein bahut pasand aaya. lekin hum naraaz hain. humne iss bar kuch acha sa likha aur aapne sad likhna shuru kar diya!!!!!!!  kya baat hai dii?jab aati hai vo mere saame saanse rukh jaanti hain aur bas dil nahi dhadka uski gazali nigaho ne kuch is tarah pilayi saaki ki teri sharaab abb nasha nahi chadta...... aapke jwab ka besabri se intezaar rahega.....humesha ki tarah. munna Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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19th October 2007, 02:47 PM
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thik hai bhai....ab kaya likhu jo mere munna ko pasand aaye..... doondli si sard subha mein, uske bheege se baalo.n mein, jab main ungliya.n goomati hoon, to jane kyu ik nasha sa cha jata hai, jab woh mujhe apni baaho.n mein bharta hai, to sard mausam bhi dahak jata hai, jab lab se lab miltey haiN, mausam rangeen ho jata hai, kho jate haiN do badan ek dooje meiN, tab pata hi nahi chalta ki kab, doondli subha se dupahar ho jati hai  munna likhne kuch baithi thi likh kuch diya.....aur end meiN kuch samaj nahi aaya kaya likhuN to last line maine majakiya c likh diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th October 2007, 04:21 PM
hi sunita only for this website user
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19th October 2007, 04:23 PM
जून की गर्म दोपहरी में तीन आदमी सड़क के किनारे गङ्ढा खोद रहे थे। उनका बॉस पास ही पेड़ की छाया में खड़ा था।
एक आदमी बोला - ''देखो, हम यहां धूप में मर रहे हैं और हमारा अफसर छाया में आराम से खड़ा है। ये अन्याय क्यों हैं ?'' ''पता नहीं।'' - दूसरे ने कहा । ''मैं पूछकर आता हूं'' - पहले ने कहा और अफसर के पास गया। ''हम लोग धूप में काम कर रहे हैं और आप यहां छाया में खड़े हैं। ऐसा क्यों है? - उसने पूछा। ''अक्ल की वजह से'' - अफसर ने कहा । ''क्या मतलब ? '' - आदमी ने पूछा। ''मतलब ये कि मैं तुमसे ज्यादा अक्लमंद हूं ।'' - अफसर ने कहा। ''वो कैसे ? साबित कीजिये'' आदमी ने कहा। ''ठीक है । देखो मैं अपना हाथ इस पेड़ पर टिकाता हूं। अब तुम फावड़ा मेरे हाथ पर मारो।'' - अफसर ने कहा। आदमी ने जैसे ही उसके हाथ पर वार किया अफसर ने अपना हाथ वहां से हटा लिया। फावड़ा तने में जाकर लगा। ''यही अक्लमंदी है। समझे ?'' - अफसर ने मुस्कराते हुये कहा। आदमी सर झुकाये वापस चला गया। उसके साथी ने पूछा - ''उन्होंने क्या कहा ?'' ''उन्होंने कहा हम लोगों में अक्ल कम हैं इसीलिये हम यहां हैं।'' ''क्या मतलब? अक्ल कम है !'' - साथी ने पूछा । आदमी ने सिर खुजाया और अपने दूसरे साथी के सिर पर हाथ रखकर तीसरे से कहा - ''फावड़ा उठाओ और मेरे हाथ पर मारो।'' |
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