Apnay-apnay Raastay

[maktoob]

Teri Soch, Meri Soch nahin hai
Afsos! Kay tu wo nahin hai!

Tere Harf, Meri Zabaan se nahin miltay
Main Kya Samjhoon, Jo tunay kahi hai!

Tu bahut phoonk kar paanv rakhti hai,
Meri zindagi to bas paani si bahi hai!

Teri baaton mein ab nahin wo sabaab,
Aur Apni har baat ankahi hai!

Kehtay hain ki har muamala hai 'Maktoob'
Jo ho raha, Allah! ki marzi wahi hai!

[amaan7am]

..aapke kalam se mulakat hui aur ek fauri ta-aruff apse bhi hua...aur yakeen mane...aapse milkar bahut achcha laga...
magar pahale aapki ..nanhi :-) ghazal ke bare mein baat karein...kahane ko aapne ..bahut choti bahar ki ghazal likhi hai magar iske mani bahut ....'bade' hai ..mujhe afsos hai ke ..aapki baat yahan koi nahin samjh saka....magar aap mayus na ho...aap waqee achci shayri karte hai ....ghazal bahut sada hai ...aur shayd isiliye ..behtareen hai ...kyuki ..jaisa main janata hoon...aajkal ..sadagi to ..bus..ek lafz rah gayi hai..ghazal sada hai magar ....har lafz apne mani ....aise khulta hai jaise ....kisi ne kaha kuch na ho ..magar ...bus khamoshi se aapki janib dekhkar ..halka sa mukhkura diya ho....aapko is kadar aasan aurpurasar ghazal likhne ke liye ..salam...dheron salam..

aur ab aapki kuch baatein karein....mujhe maloom nahin ke aap is baat se ittefaq rakhte hai ya nahin ke....kisi shayar ke kalam darasal uski shaksiyat ka aeena hote hai ...maagr bhaijaan...main is baat ko dil se manata hoon...aur aapke lafzon mein aapka ek halka sa asks dekha ...zahin ..taur par aa kafi malamaal hai ..mubarakbaad..umeed hai ..aap se phir mulakat hogi....

[maktoob]

Salaam Amaan Saahab,

Zarranawazi ka shukriya. Ye dekhkar kafi accha laga ki kuch log aur hain jo shabdon kay jaal se paray sahi 'arth' ki talaash mein hain. Warnaa khokhlay harfon mein zazbaaton ka dam hi ghutata deekhta hai.

Umeed karta hoon aapkay kalaam bhi 'sach' ko prerit karenge.

Ek baar phir se..Shukriya....

Salamat Rahein!

Always,
Maktoob