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25th July 2014, 12:37 AM
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Zarra saheb... rasan-e-daar is liye use kiya,
rasan means rassi aur daar means phansi...
maqsad yeh tha ke unhon ne phansi ki rassi apne hath se khud banayi...
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ohhho !! achha !! in that case I stand corrected Hassan sahab !! aap ki baat waajib hai !! thanks for clarifying aur waah "rasan-e-daar" se ek dilchasp aur uncommon kahani kahi aapne sher mein
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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25th July 2014, 12:52 AM
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ohhho !! achha !! in that case I stand corrected Hassan sahab !! aap ki baat waajib hai !! thanks for clarifying aur waah "rasan-e-daar" se ek dilchasp aur uncommon kahani kahi aapne sher mein
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Be-had shukriyaaH, Zarra saheb...
actually, aap ke diye gaye alfaazoN se circumstances change hote rahey
wese, aap ka shuker-guzaar hooN, ke aap ne mujhe aise alfaaz diye..
jis se meri diary meiN aik aur Ghazal ka izaafa hua....
thanks a lot for being there and so supportive...
miltay rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th July 2014, 01:35 AM
Ji zaroor ..... aur abhi to n jaane kitni ghazlein betaab hain aap ki qalam se zindagi se zindagi paane ke liye .... aap ko abhi bahaut si dairiyon ki zaroorat parhne waali hai
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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24th July 2014, 10:18 PM
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Too good Hassan i suggest u post this ghazal in shayrie ishq taaki aur log bhi padh sakein appreciate kar sakein.
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shayri-e-ishQ ya Dard......???
*hSn* : parStaar
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24th July 2014, 10:26 PM
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Its suitable for shayri-e-ishq but u cn post in dard if u want.
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dard hi dard hai ghazal meiN........
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24th July 2014, 10:44 PM
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th July 2014, 11:22 PM
Dedicated to them who work hard day and night, break their backs
to support their families, who do not live for themselves but for their families:-
kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th July 2014, 02:58 PM
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Dedicated to them who work hard day and night, break their backs
to support their families, who do not live for themselves but for their families:-
kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!
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Wwwaaahhhh !!! Dil ko chhoo lene waale alfaaz !! Sach mein, aise logon ke saamne jabeen jhuk jaati hai. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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26th July 2014, 09:47 PM
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Wwwaaahhhh !!! Dil ko chhoo lene waale alfaaz !! Sach mein, aise logon ke saamne jabeen jhuk jaati hai. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !
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Zarraa saheb... pasandeedgi k liye mashoor hooN..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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26th July 2014, 09:46 PM
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Bahot khoob.....jabeen word bahot achche se use hua hai.
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Zehrra nawaazi hai, Naaz ................
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27th July 2014, 01:45 AM
dostoN .... lafz "jabeen" par ghaur karne ka aakhiri din hai ye ... aglee midnight tak hum is lafz par rahenge ... phir nay a lafz
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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28th July 2014, 01:01 AM
Lafz...mizhgaa.n
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Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
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28th July 2014, 03:00 PM
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Lafz...mizhgaa.n
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Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
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Wwwwaaaaaahhhhhh Ufaq bhai wwwwAaaaaahhhhh !!!!
Kya gehri fiqr hai aur us ka kis baareekee aur nazaakat se khayaal ka bayaan kiya hai !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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28th July 2014, 03:02 PM
ye link hai mirza ghalib ki ek azeem ghazal ka jis ke 3 aashaar meiN lafz "mizhgaan" ka hairatanghez istemaal kiya hai unhoneiN
http://www.columbia.edu/itc/mealac/p...ndex_233.html?
is meiN "mizhgaan" par kya khoob jumle Ghalib sahab ne farmaaye haiN ...
daawat-e-mizhgaan = feast for eyelashes (jigar ke tukrhoN ki)
khaama-e-mizhgaan = pen of eyelashes (jis meiN khoon-e-dil bhara huwa hai)
dashna-e-mizhgaan = dagger of eyelashes (jise surme se tez kiya hai)
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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28th July 2014, 04:17 PM
mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya
-zarraa
mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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29th July 2014, 11:17 AM
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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya
-zarraa
mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
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waaahh Zarrasaab, waaaahhhhhhhhhhh...
iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii.........
mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai.....
behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad
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29th July 2014, 11:40 PM
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waaahh Zarrasaab, waaaahhhhhhhhhhh...
iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii.........
mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai.....
behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad
Adil
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya aap ka Aadeil bhai aur aap ko meri jaanib se dheron duaein
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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29th July 2014, 11:13 AM
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Lafz...mizhgaa.n
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Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
laajawaab.. aalatareen bayaanaat, Ufaqsaab.. kya khubsurat kaarigarii hai.....
lafz-e-mizgaa.n ko aapne bakhubii nibhaayaa hai
dili daad...
--Adil
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29th July 2014, 11:29 AM
lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....
nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte
*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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29th July 2014, 11:43 PM
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lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....
nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte
*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
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Waaahhh !!! Kya khoob jalwagari hai alfaaz ki aur kya pursoz khayaal !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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29th July 2014, 03:34 PM
mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe
*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe
*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
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Waahh !!! "mizhgaan-e-tar" aur "saraab-zaar nazar" se kya maani taameer kiya hai !! Waqayee ek fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kiya hai aap ne Aadeil bhai !!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut daad !!!!!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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30th July 2014, 09:16 AM
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Waaahhh !!! Kya khoob jalwagari hai alfaaz ki aur kya pursoz khayaal !!
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Waahh !!! "mizhgaan-e-tar" aur "saraab-zaar nazar" se kya maani taameer kiya hai !! Waqayee ek fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kiya hai aap ne Aadeil bhai !!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut daad !!!!!!
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aapkii zarra navaazii ke liye mashkuur-o-mamnoon hooN, Zarrasaab..
yuN hi pyar barqaraar rakhiye
duaaoN ke saath,
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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30th July 2014, 04:45 PM
teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
-zarraa
(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
-zarraa
(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Zarraasaab, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!
laajawaab, kya sher kahaa hai..... mizhgaaN ke kham, ek yaktaa khayaal....
dheroN dheroN daad meri jaanib se......
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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31st July 2014, 09:44 AM
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Bahot khoob……………..
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Thanks a lot, Naaz ...........................
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31st July 2014, 09:36 AM
Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
*tifl = child
~Adil
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
*tifl = child
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Waah !! Kya khoobsurat sher N@zneen ji ke naam kiya hai !! Bahut khoob Aadeil bhai !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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Waah !! Kya khoobsurat sher N@zneen ji ke naam kiya hai !! Bahut khoob Aadeil bhai !!
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aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoo.n
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ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
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31st July 2014, 07:52 PM
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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
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Wwwaaaahhhh !!!!!! Beintehaayee khoobsurat khayaal !!! Waah !! Deed par mizhgaan ka pehra !! Kya haseen fiqr hai, kya khoobsurat sher !! Dheron daad N@zneen ji !!
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31st July 2014, 08:05 PM
abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe
-zarraa
* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe
-zarraa
* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Aadeil bhai !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 09:11 PM
DostoN, lafz "mizhgaan" par members ke khud ke kahe aashaar ....
Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
Ufaq
mushtaaq-e-deed-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman bana diya
Zarraa
nok-e-mizhgaa.n pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n gham jo manaate rehte
Aadeil
mizhgaan-e-tar kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim rahe
lekin saraab-zaar nazar se adiim rahe
Aadeil
teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
Zarraa
shokHii-e-tifl si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
Aadeil
Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
N@zneen
abroo khiNchee itaab meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN par haiN aa rahe
Zarraa
Sipar liye khade the saf meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN
N@zneen
tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN
Hassan
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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naya lafz -
1st August 2014, 10:28 PM
dostoN ... is baar ka lafz hai .... MUNTAZIR .....
"muntazir" means "one who is waiting" ya "jo intezaar mein ho"
"muntazir" meiN "t" ka pronounciation is as in teer (arrow), tees (30), taaqat (strength) ... aap samajh gaye hoNge ...
"muntazir" ki taqti, mere opinion mein, hai 212. any other opinion is welcome.
to ab hum lafz "muntazir" par ghaur kareNge, koyee sher, qit'ta, nazm, rubaayee ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake, keh kar. behr ki koyee bandish naheeN hai, n hi aashaar par koyee gintee, jitne chaaheiN aashaar kaheiN ..... more the merrier
shayari ke saath saath SDC style guftagoo bhi jaaree rakkheNge, seekhne sikhaane ke maqsad se. members se darkhwaast hai ki is lafz par apne khayaalaat aur ilm bhi baaNtte raheiN aur is ki nuances aur is ki usage par roshni daaleiN, jis se hum sab saath saath seekh sakeiN.
ab is lafz par kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ka lutf lete haiN ...
jin ke hum muntazir rahe un ko
mil gaye aur hum safar shaayad
-Faraaz
sab apne apne qareene se muntazir us ke
kisi ko shukr kisi ko shikaayateiN karni
-Faraaz
muntazir kab se tahayyur hai teri taqreer ka
baat kar tujh par gumaaN hone laga tasweer ka
-Faraaz
qaasidoN ke muntazir rehne lage
parh gaye un ko maze paigaam ke
-Daagh Dehlevi
ab kaun muntazir hai hamaare liye wahaaN
shaam aa gayee hai laut ke ghar jaayeiN bhi to kya
-Muneer Niyazi
jo pyaas paani ki muntazir hai
wo sooliyoN par taNgi huwee hai
-Ali Sardar Jaafri
muntazir hai ek toofaan-e-bala mere liye
ab bhi jaane kitne darwaaze haiN wa mere liye
par museebat hai mera ahd-e-wafa mere liye
ai gham-e-dil kya karooN ai wahshat-e-dil kya karooN
-Majaz ki nazm se
jo muntazir n mila wo to hum haiN sharminda
ki hum ne der laga di palat ke aane meiN
-Javed Akhtar
hawas-naseeb nazar ko kaheeN qaraar naheeN
maiN muntazir hooN magar tera intezaar naheeN
-Saahir Ludhianvi
faiz kya jaaniye yaar kis aas par muntazir haiN ke laayega koyee khabar
maykashoN par huwa mohtasib meherbaaN dil-figaaroN pe qaatil ko pyaar aa gaya
-Faiz
jo teri muntazir theeN wo aaNkheiN hi bujh gayeeN
ab kyooN saja raha hai charaaghoN se shaam ko
-name of shayar not known by me, NM
is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 5 din tak chalaayenge, yaani Friday, 6th August, 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.
to ab aur intezaar mat karwaaiye! hum muntazir haiN lafz-e-muntazir par aap ke khoobsurat aashaar ke
duaoN ke saath
zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 08:30 PM
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Originally Posted by N@zneen
Wah! Zarraji bahot khoob...bahot khoobsurat tasveer pesh ki hai apne..abroo aur mizhgaaN ko teer kamaan ki misaal de dii....bahot khoob.
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya N@zneen ji
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 02:02 AM
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Originally Posted by zarraa
mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya
-zarraa
mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
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wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...
Quote:
Originally Posted by aadeil
lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....
nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte
*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
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wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!
Quote:
Originally Posted by aadeil
mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe
*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
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nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...
Quote:
Originally Posted by zarraa
teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
-zarraa
(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
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zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..
Quote:
Originally Posted by aadeil
Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
*tifl = child
~Adil
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hahaha!.... you made her day!
Quote:
Originally Posted by N@zneen
Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
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ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!
Quote:
Originally Posted by zarraa
abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe
-zarraa
* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
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wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad
Quote:
Originally Posted by N@zneen
Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*
Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
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wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 04:10 PM
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st August 2014, 08:31 PM
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Hassan bhai !!
QUOTE=Hassan;463754] wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...
wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!
nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...
zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..
hahaha!.... you made her day!
ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!
wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad
wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb! [/QUOTE]
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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