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Zarra saheb... rasan-e-daar is liye use kiya,
rasan means rassi aur daar means phansi...
maqsad yeh tha ke unhon ne phansi ki rassi apne hath se khud banayi...

ohhho !! achha !! in that case I stand corrected Hassan sahab !! aap ki baat waajib hai !! thanks for clarifying aur waah "rasan-e-daar" se ek dilchasp aur uncommon kahani kahi aapne sher mein


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ohhho !! achha !! in that case I stand corrected Hassan sahab !! aap ki baat waajib hai !! thanks for clarifying aur waah "rasan-e-daar" se ek dilchasp aur uncommon kahani kahi aapne sher mein

Be-had shukriyaaH, Zarra saheb...

actually, aap ke diye gaye alfaazoN se circumstances change hote rahey

wese, aap ka shuker-guzaar hooN, ke aap ne mujhe aise alfaaz diye..

jis se meri diary meiN aik aur Ghazal ka izaafa hua....

thanks a lot for being there and so supportive...

miltay rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,


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Be-had shukriyaaH, Zarra saheb...

actually, aap ke diye gaye alfaazoN se circumstances change hote rahey

wese, aap ka shuker-guzaar hooN, ke aap ne mujhe aise alfaaz diye..

jis se meri diary meiN aik aur Ghazal ka izaafa hua....

thanks a lot for being there and so supportive...

miltay rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,
Ji zaroor ..... aur abhi to n jaane kitni ghazlein betaab hain aap ki qalam se zindagi se zindagi paane ke liye .... aap ko abhi bahaut si dairiyon ki zaroorat parhne waali hai


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Too good Hassan i suggest u post this ghazal in shayrie ishq taaki aur log bhi padh sakein appreciate kar sakein.
shayri-e-ishQ ya Dard......???


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Its suitable for shayri-e-ishq but u cn post in dard if u want.
dard hi dard hai ghazal meiN........


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Dard to hai maine kab mana ki lekin ishq dard pe bhari hai isliye i said ishq me karo, waise jahan tumhe thik lage karo, rone ki zarurat nahin


maqsad to sirf ab tak ke alfaazoN pe roshni daalna tha...

but your suggestion is acceptable

thankyou!


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Dedicated to them who work hard day and night, break their backs
to support their families, who do not live for themselves but for their families:-

kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!


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kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!
Wwwaaahhhh !!! Dil ko chhoo lene waale alfaaz !! Sach mein, aise logon ke saamne jabeen jhuk jaati hai. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !


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Wwwaaahhhh !!! Dil ko chhoo lene waale alfaaz !! Sach mein, aise logon ke saamne jabeen jhuk jaati hai. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !
Zarraa saheb... pasandeedgi k liye mashoor hooN..


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Bahot khoob.....jabeen word bahot achche se use hua hai.
Zehrra nawaazi hai, Naaz ................


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dostoN .... lafz "jabeen" par ghaur karne ka aakhiri din hai ye ... aglee midnight tak hum is lafz par rahenge ... phir nay a lafz


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28th July 2014, 01:01 AM

Lafz...mizhgaa.n

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ye link hai mirza ghalib ki ek azeem ghazal ka jis ke 3 aashaar meiN lafz "mizhgaan" ka hairatanghez istemaal kiya hai unhoneiN

http://www.columbia.edu/itc/mealac/p...ndex_233.html?

is meiN "mizhgaan" par kya khoob jumle Ghalib sahab ne farmaaye haiN ...

daawat-e-mizhgaan = feast for eyelashes (jigar ke tukrhoN ki)

khaama-e-mizhgaan = pen of eyelashes (jis meiN khoon-e-dil bhara huwa hai)

dashna-e-mizhgaan = dagger of eyelashes (jise surme se tez kiya hai)


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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
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mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
waaahh Zarrasaab, waaaahhhhhhhhhhh...

iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii.........
mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai.....
behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad
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waaahh Zarrasaab, waaaahhhhhhhhhhh...

iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii.........
mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai.....
behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad
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laajawaab.. aalatareen bayaanaat, Ufaqsaab.. kya khubsurat kaarigarii hai.....
lafz-e-mizgaa.n ko aapne bakhubii nibhaayaa hai
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29th July 2014, 11:29 AM

lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....

nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte


*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes



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lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....

nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte


*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
Waaahhh !!! Kya khoob jalwagari hai alfaaz ki aur kya pursoz khayaal !!


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29th July 2014, 03:34 PM

mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe

*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of



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mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe

*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
Waahh !!! "mizhgaan-e-tar" aur "saraab-zaar nazar" se kya maani taameer kiya hai !! Waqayee ek fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kiya hai aap ne Aadeil bhai !!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut daad !!!!!!


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Waaahhh !!! Kya khoob jalwagari hai alfaaz ki aur kya pursoz khayaal !!
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Waahh !!! "mizhgaan-e-tar" aur "saraab-zaar nazar" se kya maani taameer kiya hai !! Waqayee ek fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kiya hai aap ne Aadeil bhai !!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut daad !!!!!!
aapkii zarra navaazii ke liye mashkuur-o-mamnoon hooN, Zarrasaab..
yuN hi pyar barqaraar rakhiye

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30th July 2014, 04:45 PM

teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha

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teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha

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(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

Zarraasaab, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!
laajawaab, kya sher kahaa hai..... mizhgaaN ke kham, ek yaktaa khayaal....

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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
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*tifl = child

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*tifl = child

~Adil
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Wwwaaaahhhh !!!!!! Beintehaayee khoobsurat khayaal !!! Waah !! Deed par mizhgaan ka pehra !! Kya haseen fiqr hai, kya khoobsurat sher !! Dheron daad N@zneen ji !!


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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe

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* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se

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lafz "mizhgaan" par members ke aashaar .... - 1st August 2014, 09:11 PM

DostoN, lafz "mizhgaan" par members ke khud ke kahe aashaar ....

Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
Ufaq

mushtaaq-e-deed-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman bana diya
Zarraa

nok-e-mizhgaa.n pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n gham jo manaate rehte
Aadeil

mizhgaan-e-tar kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim rahe
lekin saraab-zaar nazar se adiim rahe
Aadeil

teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
Zarraa

shokHii-e-tifl si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
Aadeil

Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
N@zneen

abroo khiNchee itaab meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN par haiN aa rahe
Zarraa

Sipar liye khade the saf meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN
N@zneen

tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN
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naya lafz - 1st August 2014, 10:28 PM

dostoN ... is baar ka lafz hai .... MUNTAZIR .....

"muntazir" means "one who is waiting" ya "jo intezaar mein ho"

"muntazir" meiN "t" ka pronounciation is as in teer (arrow), tees (30), taaqat (strength) ... aap samajh gaye hoNge ...

"muntazir" ki taqti, mere opinion mein, hai 212. any other opinion is welcome.

to ab hum lafz "muntazir" par ghaur kareNge, koyee sher, qit'ta, nazm, rubaayee ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake, keh kar. behr ki koyee bandish naheeN hai, n hi aashaar par koyee gintee, jitne chaaheiN aashaar kaheiN ..... more the merrier

shayari ke saath saath SDC style guftagoo bhi jaaree rakkheNge, seekhne sikhaane ke maqsad se. members se darkhwaast hai ki is lafz par apne khayaalaat aur ilm bhi baaNtte raheiN aur is ki nuances aur is ki usage par roshni daaleiN, jis se hum sab saath saath seekh sakeiN.

ab is lafz par kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ka lutf lete haiN ...

jin ke hum muntazir rahe un ko
mil gaye aur hum safar shaayad
-Faraaz

sab apne apne qareene se muntazir us ke
kisi ko shukr kisi ko shikaayateiN karni
-Faraaz

muntazir kab se tahayyur hai teri taqreer ka
baat kar tujh par gumaaN hone laga tasweer ka
-Faraaz

qaasidoN ke muntazir rehne lage
parh gaye un ko maze paigaam ke
-Daagh Dehlevi

ab kaun muntazir hai hamaare liye wahaaN
shaam aa gayee hai laut ke ghar jaayeiN bhi to kya
-Muneer Niyazi

jo pyaas paani ki muntazir hai
wo sooliyoN par taNgi huwee hai
-Ali Sardar Jaafri

muntazir hai ek toofaan-e-bala mere liye
ab bhi jaane kitne darwaaze haiN wa mere liye
par museebat hai mera ahd-e-wafa mere liye
ai gham-e-dil kya karooN ai wahshat-e-dil kya karooN
-Majaz ki nazm se

jo muntazir n mila wo to hum haiN sharminda
ki hum ne der laga di palat ke aane meiN
-Javed Akhtar

hawas-naseeb nazar ko kaheeN qaraar naheeN
maiN muntazir hooN magar tera intezaar naheeN
-Saahir Ludhianvi

faiz kya jaaniye yaar kis aas par muntazir haiN ke laayega koyee khabar
maykashoN par huwa mohtasib meherbaaN dil-figaaroN pe qaatil ko pyaar aa gaya
-Faiz

jo teri muntazir theeN wo aaNkheiN hi bujh gayeeN
ab kyooN saja raha hai charaaghoN se shaam ko
-name of shayar not known by me, NM

is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 5 din tak chalaayenge, yaani Friday, 6th August, 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.

to ab aur intezaar mat karwaaiye! hum muntazir haiN lafz-e-muntazir par aap ke khoobsurat aashaar ke

duaoN ke saath
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Wah! Zarraji bahot khoob...bahot khoobsurat tasveer pesh ki hai apne..abroo aur mizhgaaN ko teer kamaan ki misaal de dii....bahot khoob.
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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya

-zarraa


mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...

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lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....

nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte


*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!

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mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe

*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...


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teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha

-zarraa


(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..

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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n


*tifl = child

~Adil
hahaha!.... you made her day!
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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!

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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe

-zarraa


* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow

wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad


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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*


Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb!


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[QUOTE=Hassan;463754]
wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!

nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...


aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Hassanbhai

hahaha!.... you made her day!




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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Hassan bhai !!



QUOTE=Hassan;463754]wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...



wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!



nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...




zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..



hahaha!.... you made her day!


ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!



wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad




wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb! [/QUOTE]


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