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25th April 2007, 04:42 PM

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aap aise maat kahiye....

puraani yaadon ko bulane ko koshish mein
main aab har pal peeta hun
kya kahun hosh mein rehna abb munasib nahi
isse main paani samak kar jo peeta hun
kaun karta kisi ko yaad umr bhar,
bhool jatey agar yaar boolane se,
na peeta koi roj jaam pe jaam,
na rakhta koi rishta maikhane se....


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25th April 2007, 10:54 PM

namaskar didi,
bahut acha likha,
"na rakte kio rista maikhana se", daad kabul kijiye.

yhe raha humara jwab

rista nahi hai mera maikhana se
maikhana ka baas saath nibha raha hun
JAAM PE JAAM pelakar sakhi ne bulwa diya bewaffa ko
peeker main uska yhe ehsaan chukha raha hun

kaisa laga


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namaskar didi,
bahut acha likha,
"na rakte kio rista maikhana se", daad kabul kijiye.

yhe raha humara jwab

rista nahi hai mera maikhana se
maikhana ka baas saath nibha raha hun
JAAM PE JAAM pelakar sakhi ne bulwa diya bewaffa ko
peeker main uska yhe ehsaan chukha raha hun

kaisa laga
bahut khoob likha manish

tujse rishta todkar es maih se joda hai,
tu to saath chorr gaye har wada tod gaye,
par esne kiya hai wada mere saath rahegi,
teri tarah na chorrygi na dil todeygi,
jab marunga yeh mere paas padi royegi.....


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30th April 2007, 06:01 PM

wah kya baat hai...last line was jus 2 gud.

maikhana mein hum sirf peene aate hain
gum nahi..nah hi koi shikayat hai zindagi se
sharaab se mujhe tum jala dena
baass yehi aakri gujarish hai..didi tum se


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1st May 2007, 01:53 PM

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wah kya baat hai...last line was jus 2 gud.

maikhana mein hum sirf peene aate hain
gum nahi..nah hi koi shikayat hai zindagi se
sharaab se mujhe tum jala dena
baass yehi aakri gujarish hai..didi tum se

Ehhhh manish kaya likha hai yeh...mujhe pasand nahi aaya, phir aisa mat likhna.

do char ghoont pee leta hoon,
do char ghadi jee leta hoon,
aisa to dum gut-ta jata hai,
pee kar sakoon pa leta hoon..


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2nd May 2007, 06:52 AM

sorry didi, main aissa nahi likhunga.....pesh karta hun...umeed hai pasand ayega

kash do char ghut peekar...kam chala sakta
purra maikhana peena padta hai.....zakhm ke dard ko bulane ke liye.......

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peeta hun main zaruur, par sharaabi main nahi
saanse b leta hun...par vaise jinda main nahi
adhuri kahani hai meri...bas itna samaj lijiye
khuda hai sabkha.....par uska b main nahi..........


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2nd May 2007, 04:33 PM

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sorry didi, main aissa nahi likhunga.....pesh karta hun...umeed hai pasand ayega

kash do char ghut peekar...kam chala sakta
purra maikhana peena padta hai.....zakhm ke dard ko bulane ke liye.......

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peeta hun main zaruur, par sharaabi main nahi
saanse b leta hun...par vaise jinda main nahi
adhuri kahani hai meri...bas itna samaj lijiye
khuda hai sabkha.....par uska b main nahi..........
gar tu mujhe mil jaye.................to peena chorr doon,
dil ka chaman khil jaye...............to peena chorr doon,
dharti ambhar mil jaye................to peena chorr doon,
tera naam mere saath jurr jaye....to peena chorr doon


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2nd May 2007, 04:52 PM

wah kya baat hai

bahut badnaam hai mera naam.....is shehar mein
dushman hai mere saare....is dahar mein
dastan meri...mat pucho tum
zindagi gujar gayi....is sharaab mein.....


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2nd May 2007, 05:09 PM

tu kahe to hawao ka rukh mod doon,
tu kahe to main peena chorr doon,
tu kahe to jakham seena chorr doon,
gar tu kahe to main jeena b chorr doon....


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2nd May 2007, 05:18 PM

hum aisa kabhi nahi kahenge

mera ek khwaab tha....jo sharaab mein ghul gaya
manzil ki jo raah thi...nashe mein bhul gaya
saanse lena agar jeena hai, to main jee raha hun
jaise bachpan mein haste the...main vaise hasna bhul gaya


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4th May 2007, 03:15 PM

kaash aaj ji bhar barsaat ho jaye,
ashq chupane ka yeh kaam ho jaye,
nahi jiya jata ab es be-wafa jaha mein,
de saaki jaam aaj yeh shaam akhiri ho jaye...


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aab aap kyun udaas hote ho...aisa mat kahen

meri umar tumhe lag jaye
chahe humari zindagi ka suraj dal jaye
tum rehna humesha khush DIDI
chahe humare peete peete......dil he rukh jaye....


P.s nw say something else, my sher are always sad, but didi u have to write sumfin that is not sad, ok


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10th May 2007, 02:21 PM

maikhane mein jakar joom joom kar piyo,
saare dard bhool kar kushi se piyo,
maih tumko piye tum usko piyo..


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Salam To all of u ...its been long time ....i didnt write any sher or i didnt post any sher here as well ...but i came to this site regularly ...n i have seen the people writing n posting the sher here is good... i'm aapreciating to all of u ...keep writing .....n infact i will also post some new sher in a day 1 or 2 ...till then take care of urself
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maikhane mein jakar joom joom kar piyo,
saare dard bhool kar kushi se piyo,
maih tumko piye tum usko piyo..
mood to chalo change hua

behak gaya main nashe mein
uska haath pakad liya nashe mein
bahut mara us haseena ne humein DIDI
par dard nahi hua mujhe nashe mein


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mood to chalo change hua

behak gaya main nashe mein
uska haath pakad liya nashe mein
bahut mara us haseena ne humein DIDI
par dard nahi hua mujhe nashe mein

hahahaha

majja aa gaya padkar.....!

ab kha lo kasam na karogey nasha,
nahi to, phir mil jayega aisa majja,
dil se dil milakar dekho,
kabhi na jo utrega hoga aisa nasha....


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saanson mein nasha hai
nashe se dhadkta hai mera dil
agar bewaffai mil gayi dil ko mohabaat mein
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saanson mein nasha hai
nashe se dhadkta hai mera dil
agar bewaffai mil gayi dil ko mohabaat mein
to akela maikhane mein tadpega mera dil
chorro yeh maih aur maikhane ki baatey,
aao aaj koi pyar ki baat karey,
bhool jaye sab dard-o-gum,
ek naye jivan ki shuruyaat karey..


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didi aab apne yhe kaha hai to kyun nahi. par humne do jwab diye hain. one is positve and one is negative. here it goes:

jiski raah hi kho jaye
wo nayi manzil ki shuruwaat kaise karega
jisse khuda ne be bhula diya
abb wo kissi haseena ki ibadat kaise karega

sharaab bewaffie nahi karti
dil ko chain to milta hai, beshak do pal ke liye
didi apne pyaar se kaha chodo do
chod dunga main, chahe chodu sirf do pal ke liye.....

kaise laga..

aab yhe:

naye din ki tarah, aaj main phir se jiyun
sharaab nahi, amrit didi k haath se piyun
dil mein armaan phir se maclne lage
mohabaat aab hum b karenge......tum hi kyun

abb koi wajah nahi rone ki
bin khwaab ki neend sone ki
abb naya khwaab hai aankhon mein didi
khwaab hai, ek khwaaish jo hai..... chand ko....chune ki...

yhe kaisa laga...


didi, app meri zeher wali post par jayen. wahan par dhaval bhai ne kuch likha hai apki post k bare mein.

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appka chota bhai

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didi aab apne yhe kaha hai to kyun nahi. par humne do jwab diye hain. one is positve and one is negative. here it goes:

jiski raah hi kho jaye
wo nayi manzil ki shuruwaat kaise karega
jisse khuda ne be bhula diya
abb wo kissi haseena ki ibadat kaise karega

sharaab bewaffie nahi karti
dil ko chain to milta hai, beshak do pal ke liye
didi apne pyaar se kaha chodo do
chod dunga main, chahe chodu sirf do pal ke liye.....

kaise laga..

aab yhe:

naye din ki tarah, aaj main phir se jiyun
sharaab nahi, amrit didi k haath se piyun
dil mein armaan phir se maclne lage
mohabaat aab hum b karenge......tum hi kyun

abb koi wajah nahi rone ki
bin khwaab ki neend sone ki
abb naya khwaab hai aankhon mein didi
khwaab hai, ek khwaaish jo hai..... chand ko....chune ki...

yhe kaisa laga...


didi, app meri zeher wali post par jayen. wahan par dhaval bhai ne kuch likha hai apki post k bare mein.

tc

appka chota bhai

manish

bahut khoob lage dono sher:

ab kisi se mohabat tum bhi karogey,
kisi ki aankh ka noor tum bhi banogey,
ab maikhane mei.n tum nahi jaogey,
ishq ki kathin raah par tum bhi chalogey


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didi namaskar,

kaise hain app?

100th post

congratulations, main apki post ka 100th thread likh raha hun. i m honoured! i hope meri rachna is moke ki expectation par kahdi uthergi. didi, dheere dheere humara yahan aana kam ho raha hai, exams bi hain..aur nayi job is tyaari b chal rahi hai. dar hai kahin aana rukh hi nah jaye. to yhe lijiye hum pesh karte hain....

khushi ka mocka hai....ek jaam pila de saakhi
jaam nahi...puura maikhana pila de saakhi
balka kar mat chal tu mere samne
shayad ho jaye mohabaat tujse...agar apne haath se pila de saakhi

masti mein aaj tu pilaye jaa
shaam nahi...subah taak pilaye jaa
main nashe mein rahun zindagi bar
tu mujhe ragistan (desert) samaj kar pilaye jaa

mat kehna maikhana band hone wala hai
mat kehna sharaab khatam ho gayi
jitni saanse lunga...utne hi jaam lagenge hoothon par
chalo aaj khushi ke moke par...peene k yhe rasam ho gayi

kaho to main abi chod du
mat pila...yhe main sakhi ko bol du
par nashe mein mujhe sakun mil gaya
dil karta hai jaati hui raath ko rok dun......


didi..apke jwab ka besabri se intezaar rahega....

aapka chota bhai

manish


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
just
one drop at a time....


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didi namaskar,

kaise hain app?

100th post

congratulations, main apki post ka 100th thread likh raha hun. i m honoured! i hope meri rachna is moke ki expectation par kahdi uthergi. didi, dheere dheere humara yahan aana kam ho raha hai, exams bi hain..aur nayi job is tyaari b chal rahi hai. dar hai kahin aana rukh hi nah jaye. to yhe lijiye hum pesh karte hain....

khushi ka mocka hai....ek jaam pila de saakhi
jaam nahi...puura maikhana pila de saakhi
balka kar mat chal tu mere samne
shayad ho jaye mohabaat tujse...agar apne haath se pila de saakhi

masti mein aaj tu pilaye jaa
shaam nahi...subah taak pilaye jaa
main nashe mein rahun zindagi bar
tu mujhe ragistan (desert) samaj kar pilaye jaa

mat kehna maikhana band hone wala hai
mat kehna sharaab khatam ho gayi
jitni saanse lunga...utne hi jaam lagenge hoothon par
chalo aaj khushi ke moke par...peene k yhe rasam ho gayi

kaho to main abi chod du
mat pila...yhe main sakhi ko bol du
par nashe mein mujhe sakun mil gaya
dil karta hai jaati hui raath ko rok dun......


didi..apke jwab ka besabri se intezaar rahega....

aapka chota bhai

manish
Dear Manish.......bahut bahut shukriya, maine to es baat par dhayaan hi nahi diya tha....i proud of u my dear brother....! aur ha tumne jo sher likhey hai.n es 100th thread par, sabhi bahut badiya hai.n, yu hi aapni didi ka saath detey rahna.

lots of love
tumhari didi

dosto meri is post par jin dosto ne bhi mera saath diya hai...mai.n us sabhi ko bahut bahut dhanywaad kahti hoon. aap sab ke saath ki vajja se hi yeh thread jaha tak pahuncha hai. umeed hai aagey bhi aap sab ka saath yu hi mileyga.

ab es thread par mai.n kaya likhu....mere chottey bhai manish ne bahut kuch likh diya hai....main ek baar phir aap sab ka shukriya adda karti hoon.

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didi namaskar,

kaise hain app?

100th post

congratulations, main apki post ka 100th thread likh raha hun. i m honoured! i hope meri rachna is moke ki expectation par kahdi uthergi. didi, dheere dheere humara yahan aana kam ho raha hai, exams bi hain..aur nayi job is tyaari b chal rahi hai. dar hai kahin aana rukh hi nah jaye. to yhe lijiye hum pesh karte hain....

khushi ka mocka hai....ek jaam pila de saakhi
jaam nahi...puura maikhana pila de saakhi
balka kar mat chal tu mere samne
shayad ho jaye mohabaat tujse...agar apne haath se pila de saakhi

masti mein aaj tu pilaye jaa
shaam nahi...subah taak pilaye jaa
main nashe mein rahun zindagi bar
tu mujhe ragistan (desert) samaj kar pilaye jaa

mat kehna maikhana band hone wala hai
mat kehna sharaab khatam ho gayi
jitni saanse lunga...utne hi jaam lagenge hoothon par
chalo aaj khushi ke moke par...peene k yhe rasam ho gayi

kaho to main abi chod du
mat pila...yhe main sakhi ko bol du
par nashe mein mujhe sakun mil gaya
dil karta hai jaati hui raath ko rok dun......


didi..apke jwab ka besabri se intezaar rahega....

aapka chota bhai

manish
Dear Manish.......bahut bahut shukriya, maine to es baat par dhayaan hi nahi diya tha....i proud of u my dear brother....! aur ha tumne jo sher likhey hai.n es 100th thread par, sabhi bahut badiya hai.n, yu hi aapni didi ka saath detey rahna.

lots of love
tumhari didi

dosto meri is post par jin dosto ne bhi mera saath diya hai...mai.n us sabhi ko bahut bahut dhanywaad kahti hoon. aap sab ke saath ki vajja se hi yeh thread jaha tak pahuncha hai. umeed hai aagey bhi aap sab ka saath yu hi mileyga.

ab es thread par mai.n kaya likhu....mere chottey bhai manish ne bahut kuch likh diya hai....main ek baar phir aap sab ka shukriya adda karti hoon.

thanks alot


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kahte hain rog dil ka lag jae to mohhabat
basera hai aaj kal dimagon me dard ka
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manjeet ji namaskaar...meri post par aane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
hello sunita di
kasi ho app?
chalo aj me hbi kuch likhti hoon yaha apr appke liye


ZAKHAM SEH LETE HAI..... HOTOH KO SEE LETE HAI
ZINDGHY JAISI BHI DE...USE KHUSHI SE KEE LETE HAI
TU HAME APNE HATHON SE PILA NA PILA AYE SAAKI
PEENE VALE TO TERI ANKHON SE PEE LETE HAI!!!!!


khush rehiye
apna khiyal rakhie
appki preet


dosti aur pyar sirf kismat valo ke nasseb hote hai
har kisi ke nahi
preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya
aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya

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hello sunita di
kasi ho app?
chalo aj me hbi kuch likhti hoon yaha apr appke liye


ZAKHAM SEH LETE HAI..... HOTOH KO SEE LETE HAI
ZINDGHY JAISI BHI DE...USE KHUSHI SE KEE LETE HAI
TU HAME APNE HATHON SE PILA NA PILA AYE SAAKI
PEENE VALE TO TERI ANKHON SE PEE LETE HAI!!!!!


khush rehiye
apna khiyal rakhie
appki preet

wah wah kaya baat hai, bahut khoob preet....accha lagga es maikhane mein aapni italian/punjabi kudi ko dekha

meri madbhari ankho se tu piye ja,
yu hi kushi se mera saath diye ja,
choom lungi main tere haath,
en haato.n se bhar bhar jaam liye ja....

jawaab ka intjaar raheyga.....!


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wah wah kaya baat hai, bahut khoob preet....accha lagga es maikhane mein aapni italian/punjabi kudi ko dekha

meri madbhari ankho se tu piye ja,
yu hi kushi se mera saath diye ja,
choom lungi main tere haath,
en haato.n se bhar bhar jaam liye ja....

jawaab ka intjaar raheyga.....!

HELLO SAT SIR AKLA JI

meri PYARI SUNITA DI appka jawab to jabardast tha

ab me bhi koshishs karti hoon jawab dene ki magar kafi difrence hai lag sa hai.

Jam Pe Jam Peene Se Kya Faida,
shaam Ko Pee Aur Subah Utar Jaye Kya Faida,
are Do Boond Mere Dosti Ke Peele,
tere Zindagi Sari Nashe Me Utar Jayege.............................



umid hai appnu pasand ave gha

khush rehiye
appki pretto kamli


dosti aur pyar sirf kismat valo ke nasseb hote hai
har kisi ke nahi
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dostoyeh share mera nahi hai, par mujhe behad pasand hai, so mai appko bhi sunana chahati hu.

gaur farmayega:

"Lehro'N se khelta hua lehra ke pee gaya,
mai sakki ki nazar par bal kha ke pee gaya,
maine chod di thi, par roney laggi sharab,
mai uskey aansuo par taras kha ke pee gaya"
Jab insaan kisi ki kriti ko uska credit ata kerta hai toh sunita jibahoot achha lagta hai..aapne bhi aisa kiya..is tarah aapke wazood maiN jaroor izafa hua hai.....
tumhaari isi ada per ek sher arz hai sunitaji....

Tumhaari is ada ko dil laga ke pee gaya
Nazer bhale saki ki thi chhupa ke pee gaya
chhorhi nahi kabhi sharaab tere janoon maiN
maiN toh is ada ko hi bal kha ke pee gaya.



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HELLO SAT SIR AKLA JI

meri PYARI SUNITA DI appka jawab to jabardast tha

ab me bhi koshishs karti hoon jawab dene ki magar kafi difrence hai lag sa hai.

Jam Pe Jam Peene Se Kya Faida,
shaam Ko Pee Aur Subah Utar Jaye Kya Faida,
are Do Boond Mere Dosti Ke Peele,
tere Zindagi Sari Nashe Me Utar Jayege.............................



umid hai appnu pasand ave gha

khush rehiye
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oye hoye...meri preeto...kamli
bahut accha likiya hai tusi v, tuhadi dosti te tuhadey pyar da jaam te assi kad da pee chukey...kamliye. hun hor kihda jaam pilana chahundi hai....preeto.

es post te enj hi aaundi rahna.

teri aapni
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tumhaari isi ada per ek sher arz hai sunitaji....

Tumhaari is ada ko dil laga ke pee gaya
Nazer bhale saki ki thi chhupa ke pee gaya
chhorhi nahi kabhi sharaab tere janoon maiN
maiN toh is ada ko hi bal kha ke pee gaya.



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harash ji aap bhi hamarey es maikhane mei.n.....hehehehe bahut khoob.

aap meri es post par aaye aur aapney keemti lafaz hamarey liye likhey bahut accha lagga, yu hi aatey rahiyega.

hum bhi aapko jawaab dena chahtey hai.n :

arz hai:

ab aap bhi aa gaye ho mere es maikhane mei.n,
ab aur majja aayega jaam se jaam takrane mei.n,
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harash ji aap bhi hamarey es maikhane mei.n.....hehehehe bahut khoob.

aap meri es post par aaye aur aapney keemti lafaz hamarey liye likhey bahut accha lagga, yu hi aatey rahiyega.

hum bhi aapko jawaab dena chahtey hai.n :

arz hai:

ab aap bhi aa gaye ho mere es maikhane mei.n,
ab aur majja aayega jaam se jaam takrane mei.n,
aapko hum jayada to ab tak nahi jantey thy,
aapse bhi dosti ho jayegi dost esi bahane mei.n

aapke jawaab ka intjaar raheyga.

Waah sunita ji...Hum toh azaad shayari ke waise hi bahoot kayal haiN....

Tum mile toh zindagi maiN Ik nasha chhane laga
Bemaza si ho gayi thi phir maza aane laga
Ban gaye ho saaki tum toh jam khud takraane lage
aankhoN se teri pee ke maiN Chashm apne bahane laga.




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oye hoye...meri preeto...kamli
bahut accha likiya hai tusi v, tuhadi dosti te tuhadey pyar da jaam te assi kad da pee chukey...kamliye. hun hor kihda jaam pilana chahundi hai....preeto.

es post te enj hi aaundi rahna.

teri aapni
diii

hello meri pyari sunnita diii

acha ji ta meri dii ne meri dosti te pyar da jam pi vi liya te menu pata bhi nahi chalea

hmmmmmmmm to meri pyari di appke liye ek aur koshish hazir karti hoon

kuch nasha to appki baat ka hai,
kuch nasha to dhemmi barsat ka hai,
humein app yun hi sharabi na kahiye,
is dil par asar to app se mulakat ka hai

je appke liye hai appne hume dewana jo akr diya hai


khush rehiye

appki preetto


dosti aur pyar sirf kismat valo ke nasseb hote hai
har kisi ke nahi
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Waah sunita ji...Hum toh azaad shayari ke waise hi bahoot kayal haiN....

Tum mile toh zindagi maiN Ik nasha chhane laga
Bemaza si ho gayi thi phir maza aane laga
Ban gaye ho saaki tum toh jam khud takraane lage
aankhoN se teri pee ke maiN Chashm apne bahane laga.




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usko pane ke baad lagta hai usko kho diya,
kuch be-waffa halaat mere, kuch uske hai.n,
har kadam saath chalte hai.n par bhi door hai.n....

-Sunita Virender Singh-


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hello meri pyari sunnita diii

acha ji ta meri dii ne meri dosti te pyar da jam pi vi liya te menu pata bhi nahi chalea

hmmmmmmmm to meri pyari di appke liye ek aur koshish hazir karti hoon

kuch nasha to appki baat ka hai,
kuch nasha to dhemmi barsat ka hai,
humein app yun hi sharabi na kahiye,
is dil par asar to app se mulakat ka hai

je appke liye hai appne hume dewana jo akr diya hai


khush rehiye

appki preetto

haye mai.n mar java meri kamiye preeto....kina vadiya likhiya hai...dil kush ho gaya....

"dil chahey tujhe aaj mai.n baaho.n mein bhar loon,
tere bheegey adharo.n par ek chumban dhar doon,
tu zindgi ke kisi mod par na bhool paye mujhe,
aaj tujhe apni mohabat se etna madhosh kar doon"

hehehehehe yeh kamiliye tere liye


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30th May 2007, 07:07 PM

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Jaam Tootne ka bahana na kar ,Hum to teri aankho se pi lenge. ...
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30th May 2007, 11:23 PM

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haye mai.n mar java meri kamiye preeto....kina vadiya likhiya hai...dil kush ho gaya....

"dil chahey tujhe aaj mai.n baaho.n mein bhar loon,
tere bheegey adharo.n par ek chumban dhar doon,
tu zindgi ke kisi mod par na bhool paye mujhe,
aaj tujhe apni mohabat se etna madhosh kar doon"

hehehehehe yeh kamiliye tere liye

hey mar jama meri sunita di kina vadhia likhdi a
meri sweety sunita hmmmmmmmm kya kahu appse chalo
ek hor pekash tuhade le

Palko K Uthte Hi Do Diye Se Jal Jaate Hai
Jhuk Jaati Hai Jab Palke
To Band Kaliyo Se Nazar Aate Hai
Uski Aankhe hai Ya Meh K Pyale
Jo Bin Peeye Hi Hum Behak Se Jaate Hai....



tuhadi kamli preeto


dosti aur pyar sirf kismat valo ke nasseb hote hai
har kisi ke nahi
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31st May 2007, 08:11 AM

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hey mar jama meri sunita di kina vadhia likhdi a
meri sweety sunita hmmmmmmmm kya kahu appse chalo
ek hor pekash tuhade le

Palko K Uthte Hi Do Diye Se Jal Jaate Hai
Jhuk Jaati Hai Jab Palke
To Band Kaliyo Se Nazar Aate Hai
Uski Aankhe hai Ya Meh K Pyale
Jo Bin Peeye Hi Hum Behak Se Jaate Hai....



tuhadi kamli preeto
Waah preeto ji waah..kya baat hai....bahoot hi achhe....

Kitni kashish teri aankhoN maiN hai jaam nazer ata nahi
PalkoN ki dekh rawaangi muzhe kutchh our yahan bhata nahi
tera husn-o-shabaab loot raha hai mere dil ka har sabab
Jo paar tere dil maiN hai kahiN our nazer ata nahi


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