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gulon ke girne ka gum darkht kab tak jhelengey??kab tak?? |
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gulon ke girne ka gum darkht kab tak jhelengey??kab tak?? -
28th May 2004, 01:20 PM
gulon ke girne ka gum darakht kab tak jhelengey?
mayusiyon ke saye mein derd ankhmichoni kab tak khelengey? nazuk rukhsaron per pahiley ho jab ashk beshumaar sau jakhm seeney ke duniya se kab tab chup lengey? hathon ki lakeeron mein doondoon majboor kismat ko badnaseebi ki janjeeron ka derd paanw kabtak seh lengy? jindgi jab pahunchi hai umer ke dosrey kinarey per kashti-e-khawish se bebas lamhat kab tak behlengey? sehra ke bawander mein jab boondey nazar aye chahat ki muddaton se khushk lab pyase kab tak reh lengey? murda hue jismon ko dafnane ka riwaz hai magar jinda sanson mein merne ka ehsaas kab tak jhelengey? her raat ke baat sehar ka aagaz to sabne dekha "sona" peshaani ko andheri raazon ka paigam kab tak de lengey? |
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Re: gulon ke girne ka gum darkht kab tak jhelengey??kab tak?? -
28th May 2004, 03:03 PM
swati ji
behad dard samaya hai aapki nazm mein,,,,sari hi gazal dil ko choo gayi magar jin sheron ne dil par chaap chod di hai wo yeh hai..... hathon ki lakeeron mein doondoon majboor kismat ko badnaseebi ki janjeeron ka derd paanw kabtak seh lengy? jindgi jab pahunchi hai umer ke dosrey kinarey per kashti-e-khawish se bebas lamhat kab tak behlengey? sehra ke bawander mein jab boondey nazar aye chahat ki muddaton se khushk lab pyase kab tak reh lengey? hamari dil se nikli daad kubool kijiye....sada yunhi likhte rahiye....apna kahayl rakhiye..... -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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28th May 2004, 10:17 PM
Hello Sona... once again u written sooo nice ....that touces heart.
i appriciate ur passion for art of showing feelings.. kisi ne ye bhi kaha hai...ki.. Zindagi Ki Raahon Mein Aise Mod Bhi Aate Hain Saawan Ke Saath-Saath Yehan Patjad Bhi Aate Hain Aasuwon Ke Saagar Mein Moti Bhi Milthe Hain Jo Unhe Doond lete hain, Wahi Zindagi Jee Lete Hain !! sooo ..always be happy n smile...  |
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28th May 2004, 11:08 PM
hello manoj ji
apki derd per ki gayi wah bahut acchi lagi,,, per hum kitne aise khushnaseeb hain,,jo in derd se mukti paa leyin?shayad hi sab yahan derd ke sataye hue hain... aapka bahut hi shukriya swati |
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28th May 2004, 11:12 PM
dear mahen!
ur reply is appropriate to my derd.... bahut hi khoobsoorti se apni baat kehne ki kala hai tummey.. shayd tumhara kehna sahi hai,,ki jo sagar mein se moti chunle aur paar jane ka irada rakehtey ho,,,jee letey hain... aaj ek gazal ki line yaad aa rahihai... chalk jigar ke see leteyhain.. jaise bhi ho jee letey hain.. hum to hain un phoolon jaise jo ashkon mein jee leteyhain thx sona |
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31st May 2004, 11:19 AM
murda hue jismon ko dafnane ki riwaz hai magar
jinda sanson mein merne ka ehsaas kab tak phailengey? Sonaa Jii... Bahut khub deard ka ehsaas karaayaa hai aap ne.Daad qabul farmaaiye.. MayanK |
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2nd June 2004, 05:13 PM
hello mayank ji
aapki is daad ke liye bahut shukriya..apne mere derd ko samjh aaur saraha,, swati |
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6th June 2004, 06:38 AM
Swati jee...
murda hue jismon ko dafnane ka riwaz hai magar jinda sanson mein merne ka ehsaas kab tak jhelengey? Bahut khuub bayan kiya hai..."zinda sanson mein marne ka ehsaas" yeh sher tau dil ko duur tak chuu gaya...wakai bahut kamaal ka likha hai...dard tau jhalakta hai...yeh dard na hota tau shayad achi shayri bhi na kalam se behti...hai na...chalo kuch tau dard ne kiya... hamesha khush rahiye...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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7th June 2004, 06:15 PM
murda hue jismon ko dafnane ka riwaz hai magar
jinda sanson mein merne ka ehsaas kab tak jhelengey? her raat ke baat sehar ka aagaz to sabne dekha "sona" peshaani ko andheri raazon ka paigam kab tak de lengey? Dear San Jee, keya kahoun...yeh dard tou baas mehsoos hi karsakti houn. Mere tasveer mein rang aur kisi ka tou nahin, gherle mujhko sab aankhen main tamasha tou nahin...ek gazal thi. Aapni aankhon ki samandar mein utar jaane de*Tera mujrim houn mujhe doobke maar jaane de, aapni aankhon ki samandar mein utar jaane de*aag Duniya ki lagai houi bujh jaayegi Koi aansoon mere daman pe bikhar jaane de*aapni aankhon ki samandar mein utar jaane de*Zakhm kitne teri chahat se mile hai mujhko*sochta houn ke kahoun tujhse magar jaane de.......yeh bhi ek gazal hai lekin youn hi likhdi hai. Aur yeh gazal: Chaand ke sath kai dard purane nikle*kitne gham thein jo tere gham ke bahane nikle*Chaand ke sath.......Dilse nikli houi Daad kubool kijiyega. Main isse jiyada aur keya likhsakti thi! Puri gazal mein aap *beinteha dard ki bayan kardi hai, youn laga jeise mujhe pehle se hi isski ehsaas hogaayi thi lekin(pata nahin kyun aisa laga)aur yeh bhi ke jeise koi aapna yeh sab kuch suna gaaya ho.......Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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