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pyar tumhara -
27th February 2006, 07:25 PM
tumhare pyar ne banaya shayar hamain,
yeh kala hum mai pehle to na thi,
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
apne se zayada bharosa karte hai tumpe,
yeh hosla yeh himmat hum mai pehle to na thi,
apni tamaam zindagi bitaau sang tumhare,
yeh dua kisi aur ke liye kabhi ki na thi.
aap sab ke raaye -mashware ki muntazir,
akelijaan
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Re: pyar tumhara -
27th February 2006, 08:25 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by akelijaan
tumhare pyar ne banaya shayar hamain,
yeh kala hum mai pehle to na thi,
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
apne se zayada bharosa karte hai tumpe,
yeh hosla yeh himmat hum mai pehle to na thi,
apni tamaam zindagi bitaau sang tumhare,
yeh dua kisi aur ke liye kabhi ki na thi.
aap sab ke raaye -mashware ki muntazir,
akelijaan
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11th August 2006, 10:30 PM
diggaj ji,
kya kahun,samajh nai aaraha.bahut sharmindagi mehsoos horahi hai mujhe jo itne arse baad aapko reply kar rahi hun.sorry.
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12th August 2006, 02:35 AM
bahoot khuub akelijaan....bahoot hi achcha likha hai aap ne
aap k kalaam ko pad k achcha laga
aise hi likhte rehna
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apne bhut acha likha yaar ease hi likhte rahiye
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kaif ji,
shukriya aapka ,aap meri post par aaye aur meri shayri ko saraha.umeed hai aage bhi yunhin aapka saath rahega.
tc
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
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15th August 2006, 07:15 PM
karan ji,
tahe dil se shukrguzaar hun aapki ki aap meri post par aaye.aate rahiyega.
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16th August 2006, 05:27 PM
Sharminda to aap mujhe kar rahi hai...aese sabad ache nahi lagte...aage se khayal rakhiyega aur ye sorry-2 jaise word na bole to jayada khushi hogi mujhe
Khush rahiye.....apna khayal rakhiye
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diggaj ji,
kya kahun,samajh nai aaraha.bahut sharmindagi mehsoos horahi hai mujhe jo itne arse baad aapko reply kar rahi hun.sorry.
shukriya diggaj ji meri shayri ko saraahne ka.
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16th August 2006, 07:55 PM
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
wow nice ,,kya baat hai aapki,well hamein to pata hi nahi tha,ki hamari dost itna chha likhti hai really,,,,maine aapki sari post dekhi hai,really bohot achha laga aapko padhkar,,isi tarah likhte raho,,,,,,,ok,,,apna kahayl rakho,tk cr bye
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jaan ji apke ashaar umda hai.....lafzon ka acha istemaal kiya hai dil pe dastak zaroor dee apke khyalon ne....yu he likhti rehna.....yeh share acha laga........raj......
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Re: pyar tumhara -
18th August 2006, 12:04 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by akelijaan
tumhare pyar ne banaya shayar hamain,
yeh kala hum mai pehle to na thi,
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
apne se zayada bharosa karte hai tumpe,
yeh hosla yeh himmat hum mai pehle to na thi,
apni tamaam zindagi bitaau sang tumhare,
yeh dua kisi aur ke liye kabhi ki na thi.
aap sab ke raaye -mashware ki muntazir,
akelijaan
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dost appka yeh kalaam maine aaj hi padda, bahut accha lagga, khaas kar yeh share bahut pyara lagga.
apne se zayada bharosa karte hai tumpe,
yeh hosla yeh himmat hum mai pehle to na thi,
appki dost
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18th August 2006, 04:08 PM
yun mohabbat hamein na hoti ,
gar tumse haseen mulaaquat na hooti....
pyaar kya hain jaan hi nahi paata...
agar raaste main vo haseen baat nahi hoti...
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MASHA ALLAH BOHAT KHOOB HAI........
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2nd September 2006, 04:48 PM
sony ji,
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2nd September 2006, 05:06 PM
dhaval ji,aapko meri post par dekh bahut khushi hui.mera kalaam pasand karne ka shkriya.
umeed hai aapka saath yunhin milta rahega.aate rhiyega.
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raj ji,
shukriya aapka.bahut acha lagta hai aap jaison ko meri post par dekh.aate rahiyega.
bye,tc.
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sunita ji,
bayaan nahi karsakti mai jab aap jaise itne umdaah kalakaar ko mai apni post par dekhti hun.thnx a lot for taking out time for my ritings.yunhin saath dete rahiyega.
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acha likha hai aapne par shayd aapne galti se yaan ise post kardiya.aapko new threadd banani chahiye thi.khair meri post par aane ka shukriya.
bye tc.
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bhavna ji,
khushi hui jaankar ke aapko mera likha pasand aaya.thnx.aate rahiyega.
bye,tc
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Re: pyar tumhara -
6th September 2006, 08:49 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by akelijaan
tumhare pyar ne banaya shayar hamain,
yeh kala hum mai pehle to na thi,
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
apne se zayada bharosa karte hai tumpe,
yeh hosla yeh himmat hum mai pehle to na thi,
apni tamaam zindagi bitaau sang tumhare,
yeh dua kisi aur ke liye kabhi ki na thi.
aap sab ke raaye -mashware ki muntazir,
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hi akeli jaan ji
aaj aapki is nayab kalam per jaise hi nazar padi or jab ise pada to main reply kiye bina nahi rah saka .... bahut hi nayabehsas hai aapke .....
kisi naye premi ka pyar jatane ka ehsas liye aapki ye rachan bakai main kamal hai...... likhte waqt main iske shero ko hi gngna raha hoo.n
apni tamaam zindagi bitaau sang tumhare,
yeh dua kisi aur ke liye kabhi ki na thi.
ese hi likhte rahiye
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dilip ji,
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Re: pyar tumhara -
9th September 2006, 10:35 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by akelijaan
tumhare pyar ne banaya shayar hamain,
yeh kala hum mai pehle to na thi,
tumhare aane se jeene ki tamanna jaag uthi,
warna zindagi se koi umeed pehle to na thi,
apne se zayada bharosa karte hai tumpe,
yeh hosla yeh himmat hum mai pehle to na thi,
apni tamaam zindagi bitaau sang tumhare,
yeh dua kisi aur ke liye kabhi ki na thi.
aap sab ke raaye -mashware ki muntazir,
akelijaan
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hi akelijaan ji
aane jo likha bahot pasand aya.
gr88888888888888888888
aapki dost
pooja
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8th October 2006, 08:46 PM
pooja ji ,
thnx sooooo much.yunhin saath deti rahiyega.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
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