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Love pyar kiye jaate hain - 15th October 2008, 07:21 PM

tum par aitbaar tera intzaar kiye jaate hain.
bahon mein bhar teri yadon ko jiye jaate hain.
kare shikwa bhi to kisko,jo tu paas nahin.
tere armaan se hi hum pyar kiye jaate hain.

tere hone se hi khwabo mein rang aate hain
jhoom jaata hain ye man ,ehsaas mehek jaate hain
sirf tum hi tum aankhon mein aur kuch bhi nahin.
har umeed ek naya aashiyaan banaate hain

tere armaano se hi hum pyaar kiye jaate hain
   
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15th October 2008, 07:42 PM

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kare shikwa bhi to kisko,jo tu paas nahin.

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15th October 2008, 07:49 PM

thnx
shukriya
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aapki saari baatein kaafi achhi lagi
aur mere ehsaaso ko samajhne ke liye shukriya
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bahut ahcha likha hai apne...likhte rahen,share karte rahe


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19th October 2008, 08:30 PM

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tum par aitbaar tera intzaar kiye jaate hain.
bahon mein bhar teri yadon ko jiye jaate hain.
kare shikwa bhi to kisko,jo tu paas nahin.
tere armaan se hi hum pyar kiye jaate hain.

tere hone se hi khwabo mein rang aate hain
jhoom jaata hain ye man ,ehsaas mehek jaate hain
sirf tum hi tum aankhon mein aur kuch bhi nahin.
har umeed ek naya aashiyaan banaate hain

tere armaano se hi hum pyaar kiye jaate hain
Muskan ji
aapke nagme hume achhi lagi...likhte rahiye ..khus rahiye

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Bahut hi achche khyal hain aapke... padne ke baad ahsaas hua.... anyway keep writing....

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bahut khoob muskaan ji..............bahut acche ehsaas hain...

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tum par aitbaar tera intzaar kiye jaate hain.
bahon mein bhar teri yadon ko jiye jaate hain.
kare shikwa bhi to kisko,jo tu paas nahin.
tere armaan se hi hum pyar kiye jaate hain.


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waise to poori ghazal ke aHsaas ache haiN per yeh do Sha'ir mujhe beHad ache lage

likhte rahiye ...


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thnx 4 ur sweet words
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3rd November 2008, 12:42 PM

bahut acha likha hai muskaanji aapne....

"kare shikwa bhi to kisko,jo tu paas nahin.
tere armaan se hi hum pyar kiye jaate hain."

tum par aitbaar tera intzaar kiye jaate hain.... beautiful....


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thnx ruchi
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thnx
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