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koi khuda hai hi nahi - 22nd June 2015, 08:12 PM
Dard e dil kuch yun bayaan karne ke liye ,
Alfaaz nahi milte hai koi kalam likhne ke liye

Kadam rakh diya maine bhi mandir aur masjid me,
Mere khoye huye khuda ko dhoondne ke liye

Behte rahe aansoo raat bhar in aankhon se,
Koi reh nahi gaya, baithke inhe ponchne ke liye

Shaayad meri ibaadat e muhobbat me hi kuch kami thi
Ya koi khuda hai hi nahi aarzoo e muhobbat sun.ne ke liye

Jab nikal gaye hai pal e muhobbat mere zindagi se ,
Kyu reh gaye hai unki yaadein mujhe tadpaane ke liye

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye . . .

Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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22nd June 2015, 08:25 PM
Ek achchi koshish Krishnasharma ji ......aap bura na mane tau kuch changes suggest karunga aapki.last do lines meiN...

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye .


yuN hi has leta hai krishna zamane ko dikhane ko,
Warna koi wajah ab bachi nahi muskurane ko. .

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22nd June 2015, 08:40 PM
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Dard e dil kuch yun bayaan karne ke liye ,
Alfaaz nahi milte hai koi kalam likhne ke liye

Kadam rakh diya maine bhi mandir aur masjid me,
Mere khoye huye khuda ko dhoondne ke liye

Behte rahe aansoo raat bhar in aankhon se,
Koi reh nahi gaya, baithke inhe ponchne ke liye

Shaayad meri ibaadat e muhobbat me hi kuch kami thi
Ya koi khuda hai hi nahi aarzoo e muhobbat sun.ne ke liye

Jab nikal gaye hai pal e muhobbat mere zindagi se ,
Kyu reh gaye hai unki yaadein mujhe tadpaane ke liye

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye . . .
Bahut khoob janaab, yunhi likhte rahiye!

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22nd June 2015, 09:41 PM
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Ek achchi koshish Krishnasharma ji ......aap bura na mane tau kuch changes suggest karunga aapki.last do lines meiN...

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye .


yuN hi has leta hai krishna zamane ko dikhane ko,
Warna koi wajah ab bachi nahi muskurane ko. .

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23rd June 2015, 11:30 AM
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Dard e dil kuch yun bayaan karne ke liye ,
Alfaaz nahi milte hai koi kalam likhne ke liye

Kadam rakh diya maine bhi mandir aur masjid me,
Mere khoye huye khuda ko dhoondne ke liye

Behte rahe aansoo raat bhar in aankhon se,
Koi reh nahi gaya, baithke inhe ponchne ke liye

Shaayad meri ibaadat e muhobbat me hi kuch kami thi
Ya koi khuda hai hi nahi aarzoo e muhobbat sun.ne ke liye

Jab nikal gaye hai pal e muhobbat mere zindagi se ,
Kyu reh gaye hai unki yaadein mujhe tadpaane ke liye

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye . . .
bahut achchi koshish krishna ji........
likhte rahein....
aate rahiye.......


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23rd June 2015, 01:21 PM
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Dard e dil kuch yun bayaan karne ke liye ,
Alfaaz nahi milte hai koi kalam likhne ke liye

Kadam rakh diya maine bhi mandir aur masjid me,
Mere khoye huye khuda ko dhoondne ke liye

Behte rahe aansoo raat bhar in aankhon se,
Koi reh nahi gaya, baithke inhe ponchne ke liye

Shaayad meri ibaadat e muhobbat me hi kuch kami thi
Ya koi khuda hai hi nahi aarzoo e muhobbat sun.ne ke liye

Jab nikal gaye hai pal e muhobbat mere zindagi se ,
Kyu reh gaye hai unki yaadein mujhe tadpaane ke liye

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye . . .


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23rd June 2015, 09:06 PM
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Dard e dil kuch yun bayaan karne ke liye ,
Alfaaz nahi milte hai koi kalam likhne ke liye

Kadam rakh diya maine bhi mandir aur masjid me,
Mere khoye huye khuda ko dhoondne ke liye

Behte rahe aansoo raat bhar in aankhon se,
Koi reh nahi gaya, baithke inhe ponchne ke liye

Shaayad meri ibaadat e muhobbat me hi kuch kami thi
Ya koi khuda hai hi nahi aarzoo e muhobbat sun.ne ke liye

Jab nikal gaye hai pal e muhobbat mere zindagi se ,
Kyu reh gaye hai unki yaadein mujhe tadpaane ke liye

Yunhi hi hasta rehta hai krishna zamaane ko nibhaane ke liye
Koi wajah bacha hi nahi ise muskuraane ke liye . . .

Khoob ehsaas huye hai Krishna ji, yunhi ehsaas-e-bayaan karte rahiYeGaa


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