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यूँ तो घर में, मंदिर में, भगवान् सजा के रक्खा
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'Saahil'
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यूँ तो घर में, मंदिर में, भगवान् सजा के रक्खा -
3rd September 2010, 03:31 AM
aadaab dosto, pesh hai meri ek nai ghazal.........umeed hai pasand aayegi.
यूँ तो घर में, मंदिर में, भगवान् सजा के रक्खा है
बिकने को बाजारों में ईमान सजा के रक्खा है
तुम मानो या न मानो पर हमने तो ये भी देखा है
इंसानों ने महफ़िल में इंसान सजा के रक्खा है
दिल में इतने ग़म हैं फिर भी होंठ नहीं भूले हंसना
तेरी यादों से दिल का शमशान सजा के रक्खा है
मेरी ग़ज़लें मेरे नगमे काश के तू भी पढ़ ले यार
मैंने तेरी खातिर ये दीवान सजा के रक्खा है
'साहिल' अपनी कश्ती कैसे पार भला अब उतरेगी
मौजों ने जो सीने पर तूफ़ान सजा के रक्खा है
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3rd September 2010, 03:55 AM
Bahut accha likhaa hai aapne, Saahil Ji...! And welcome in SDC...!
Roman main bhi likhte to accha hota...!
The 1st and 2nd couplets are my favourite...!
Likhte raheiN
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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3rd September 2010, 04:10 AM
bahut bahut shukriya, next time se roman mai bhi likhoonga...............shukriya
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4th September 2010, 11:54 PM
saahil jee:
namaste!
bahot hi Khoobsoorat Ghazal ! dil ko Chhu gayii.n! aise hi liKhate rahe.n.. Shayri Parivaar mei.n aapka swaagat haii!
dil se daad!
KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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5th September 2010, 12:28 AM
Bohat good he zee apke biaan...............
~PAANI CHHO KE HONTHO.N SE GULABI KAR DIA,
MAINE NADI KI MACHHLIO.N KO SHARAABI KAR DIA~
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'Saahil'
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7th September 2010, 08:03 AM
Dhaval ji aur Mushkil ji,
padhne ka aur pasand karne ka bahut shukriya.
khush rahiye....
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7th September 2010, 03:57 PM
दिल में इतने ग़म हैं फिर भी होंठ नहीं भूले हंसना
तेरी यादों से दिल का शमशान सजा के रक्खा है
'साहिल' अपनी कश्ती कैसे पार भला अब उतरेगी
मौजों ने जो सीने पर तूफ़ान सजा के रक्खा है
ji bhaut khoob .........................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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7th September 2010, 10:14 PM
bahut khoob bhai sundar ahsaason ke liye dil se daad
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8th September 2010, 05:57 PM
Saahil Ji ... aapki yeh peshkah mujhe behad pasand aai... sabhi ashaar bahut khoobsurti se adaa hue hai... zindagi ke bahut kareeb rahe ...sabhi khayal...dil se daad... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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10th September 2010, 01:12 AM
@Radhika_2, ISHQ EK IBADAT, naresh_mehra110
bahut bahut shukirya aap teenon ki daad ke liya.............
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