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Love Tanha dil - 19th June 2002, 12:08 PM

kiss kadar tanha thi yeh zindagi
tum se pehle udaas thi yeh zindagi

aati jaati saanso se pooch ke dekho
kiss kadar bechen thi yeh zindagi

badalte the mausam har maas mein
magar apna mausam na badla kisi bhi haal mein


sitare to bahut dekhe aasamn mein barso
tum ko dekha to laga jaise dekha ho chaand ko.


aas yehi lagaye bethi hoon sahil per
aayega kabhi woh , jiska naam likha tha kabhi balu per


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hi - 19th June 2002, 03:03 PM

hi
this a really good poem and i hope ke wh jis ka naam balu pe likha tha zartoor aaygi
take care
keep on writing
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Re: hi - 19th June 2002, 03:16 PM

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sorry i was mistaken because i didnt know wel woh zaroor aayga
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19th June 2002, 03:25 PM

Hi
this is so nicely written...agar tum ek baar apne unko yeh sunaa do tho shayad woh aapke paas aajaaye...sach mein bohoth hi acha likha hain.

Hope to hear more from you soon


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