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hum ulfat meiN haiN kya ko kya kehne waale -
30th June 2013, 09:15 PM
hum ulfat meiN haiN kya ko kya kehne waale
teri har khataa ko adaa kehne waale taraanaa-e-meher-o-wafaa ga rahe hum wo roodaad-e-jaur-o-jafaa kehne waale (meher-o-wafaa = favours & faithfulness, roodaad = story, jaur-o-jafaa = oppression & tyranny) takalluf se milne se achchhaa milo mat kabhi the mujhe aashnaa kehne waale (takalluf = formality, aashnaa = beloved) kahe ja rahaa tu sune ja rahaa maiN jo dil meiN hai ab to bataa kehne waale muzaamat naheeN wo naseehat thi tujh ko mere mashware ko anaa kehne waale (muzaamat = opposition, naseehat = advice, anaa = ego) uthe ab n kaanoN se baar-e-sataaish zubaaN ko bhi mat aazmaa kehne waale (baar-e-sataaish = burden of praise) n majboor hote agar sun’ne waale to waah waah yooN karte bataa kehne waale chale jaayeNge ye tawajjo n dena chale aate haiN baar’haa kehne waale (tawajjo = attention, baar’haa = repeatedly) barha sun’ne waaloN ko tha lutf aayaa magar reh gaye bemazaa kehne waale abhi saNg phooloN meiN badle naheeN haiN zaraa jaam doojaa uthaa kehne waale (saNg = stones) n tehseeN se khush tu n tohmat pe naashaad kaheiN “zarraa” tujh ko bhi kya kehne waale (tehseeN = praise, tohmat = slander, naashaad = displeased) - ZARRAA |
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5th September 2014, 11:26 AM
takalluf se milne se achchhaa milo mat
kabhi the mujhe aashnaa kehne waale Zarraa saheb... wahhh! waaah! waaah.. Behtareen akkaasi aur khoobsorat alfaazoN se saji yeH ghazal, dil ki gehraayi meiN dekhne aur sochne ka moQa deti hai... Ghazal meiN dard-o-karab aur lazzat-e-ishQ dono ayaa.N haiN.. Iss kamal-o-bemisaal ghazal ke liye saheb... dherooN daad-o-mubarakbaad with reps!  Shuker hai aap ne guftagu thread meiN yeH link de diya, warna hamari nighaoN se yeH ajooba chhhoot jata..... Allah aap ko khush rakhe.. Aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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5th September 2014, 12:02 PM
Zarraa ji,
Bhut acchha lga aapki gazal ko pdkar. Congrats for very good work. Regards, Baghbaan (Jaspal) |
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5th September 2014, 03:10 PM
takalluf se milne se achchhaa milo mat
kabhi the mujhe aashnaa kehne waale (takalluf = formality, aashnaa = beloved) kahe ja rahaa tu sune ja rahaa maiN jo dil meiN hai ab to bataa kehne waale muzaamat naheeN wo naseehat thi tujh ko mere mashware ko anaa kehne waale Masha Allah bohat khoob zarraa sahab Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain per yeh teen zyada pasand aaye mujhe. . Yuhi likhte rahiye Achcha kiya aapne interview per link post kiya warna hame milti nahi...aur isay padhne se mahroom reh jaate hamare members. .. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th September 2014, 08:59 PM
Beautiful gazal zarra ji........thanks for sharing d link.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th September 2014, 09:58 PM
Waaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Zarraa sahab kya baat hai...bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai...dheron daad humari jaanib se
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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6th September 2014, 12:28 PM
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khoob se khoobtar ghazal huii hai Zarraa mere bhai...... khaaksaar ki jaanib se daad ka chota sa nazraana qubool farmaaen.... Allaah majeed nawaaze.. ho zore qalam aur se aur....... mukhlis |
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9th September 2014, 11:47 AM
Bohut hi lajawaab Ghazal Zarraa ji.
Har ek sher pe dil se daad qubool kijiye. Khaas kar eh sher bohut hi touching laga. abhi saNg phooloN meiN badle naheeN haiN zaraa jaam doojaa uthaa kehne waale Agle kalam ka intezaar. Mujeeb Parwaaz. |
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17th October 2014, 10:59 AM
zarra ji...mubarak ho...es section (Gauhar-e-Shayri) meiN sabse pehli gazal aapki aaye hai
sabhi ashiyaar mukaamal hai...aapki gazal ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai...aik sher jo hame bemisaal lga aur dil ke khaas kareeb rha wo yeh hai. muzaamat naheeN wo naseehat thi tujh ko mere mashware ko anaa kehne waale.....! khhobsurat gazal ke liye dil se daad hazir hai. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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17th October 2014, 03:30 PM
bahot mubaarak ho zarrra saahab.... aapke naam se bismilla kiya gayaa hai Gauhar e SDC ka...
aapko bahot bahot mubaarak ho.... aage bhi aapki kavita ka intzar rahega... Shaad... |
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24th October 2014, 06:43 PM
Dotson ... aadaab .... ji main ne ye section aaj hi dekha, is liye shukriya ada karne mein taakheer huwee jis ke like behad maazrat khwaah bhi hoon.
Is izzat afzaayee ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon. Bas ye sirf aur sirf aap sabhi saathiyon ki beshumaar mohabbaton ka hi sila hai. Is naye section par ahl e bazm ko mubaarakbaad aur sabhi doston ko dil se dheron duaein Zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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24th December 2014, 02:50 PM
Waaah zarra sahab.....
Behad umda....... Laaaaajawaaab. Beshumar daad is gazal ki nazar....kubul farmaiyega Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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31st December 2014, 09:52 PM
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13th January 2015, 10:06 AM
Zarraa saahab, adaab.
Dil khush ho gaya yeh ghazal paRh kar. Kya kamaal ka expression hai. Baarha isko paRhne ka mann karta hai. Nacheez ko abhi shayari ki bareekiyoN ke baare itna knowledge nhi ke kuchh zyada kahooN. Bas dil ki gehrayioN se daad qubool farmaayein aur humein yunhi aise nayaab kalaam se shaad kiya karein. DheroN daad aur dua ke saath. Aapka khair andesh Sagar Aashna **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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15th January 2015, 10:36 PM
are miyaan ye kaise choott gayi thi mujhse, bahut umda peshkash hai saahib, bas dua hai ki zore kalam yuNhi badhta rahe...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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19th May 2015, 07:57 PM
Zarra bhai , salaam ...
kya samay bandha hai aapne apni ghazal meiN, yehi keh rahe haiN sab ghazal perne wale... Hamdam khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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27th May 2015, 02:30 PM
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wah zarraa jee bahut khoob rahi hai ye rachna daad kubul karen radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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13th July 2015, 02:45 PM
Wah wah.... Zarra ji kamaal hai ye.
Bohut khoob. Sarika |
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13th July 2015, 11:20 PM
Namaste saaheb
Kyaa khoob bayaan kiyaa hay aapne... har sher laa jawaab.. dil se daad Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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1st February 2016, 08:12 AM
My life’s biggest security is not just in loving you, but in knowing that you will always be there to love me back no matter what. I love you baby.
My life’s biggest security is not just in loving you, but in knowing that you will always be there to love me back no matter what. I love you baby. It is good to have a husband who forgives for the past. It is better to have a husband who forgives what you do in the present. Best of all is to have a husband who forgives everything and focuses on a future together. Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses. Happy Promise Day Quotes in Hindi Love Quotes for Husband from Wife in English I don't have words to describe what I feel for you. I fall deeper in your love with every passing day. Every moment I spend with you, feels like a dream. I'm madly in love with you. I think God made a woman to be strong and not to be trampled under the feet of men. I've always felt this way because my mother was a very strong woman, without a husband. All these years, you have been amazing. As a dad to our kids and as my lover, I have been happy in your arms and I could see that we’ll be happier for the rest of our days. Thank you for everything. Happy anniversary, my darling. It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. Marriage is like a song, where the Lord's sweet melody of love comes from two hearts joined as one, husband and wife. |
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28th March 2016, 04:42 PM
Bahut khoob
abhi saNg phooloN meiN badle naheeN haiN zaraa jaam doojaa uthaa kehne waale |
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