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2nd September 2014, 06:37 PM
Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi baat baaton me....
Kaho Kya sochti ho tum nahi soti jo raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba kar tumne rakhi hai...
chchipa rahta hai hardam dard koi teri baton me
mujhe khamosh kar dete hain ye sare sawaal uske....
Jawabon se bhara vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Mere sare Jawabon me vo hi to hai hamesha se....
Vahi surat dikhi ab bhi sawali un nigahon me....
Badi hasrat se aaya tha vo mujhse guftgu karne....
Main phir se kho gayi thi aaj bhi uske khayalon me....
Isi dar se ki mujhse door ho jayega sach sunkar
Use bahlaya hai phir aaj maine baton baton me
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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2nd September 2014, 07:16 PM
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me..
Bohat khoob madhu ji................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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2nd September 2014, 07:35 PM
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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....
Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....
Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
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clap clap clap...... beautifully expressed Madhu ji........
likhtii rahen
Shaad....
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2nd September 2014, 08:15 PM
thanks for sharing it. apna pan sa laga aapki peshkash se... behad khubsurat
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3rd September 2014, 02:51 AM
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
waaahhh! Madhu jee,
Jazbaat aur ehsaasaat ko ba-khoobi bayaaN kiya hai aap ne
apne kalaam meiN....
DherooN dherooN daad iss besh-qeemati kaawish ke liye!
Likhti rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me..
Bohat khoob madhu ji................
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Pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriya zainy ji...........
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th September 2014, 12:29 PM
baaton baaton me.....Bohut khoob Madhuji......a good poetic writing.
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clap clap clap...... beautifully expressed Madhu ji........
likhtii rahen
Shaad....
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Thank u very much for appreciation. ....shaad ji.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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baaton baaton me.....Bohut khoob Madhuji......a good poetic writing.
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.......thank u very much...mujib ji.....yoon hi aate rahein....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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7th September 2014, 12:26 PM
Madhu ji ,
Kya baat hai.bahut khoob ...jab parne wala vohi mehsoos kare jo likhne wala
keh raha hai , tau meri nazar mein aap ka likhna purn ho gaya.
Aap jis gehrayi mein bari saral andaz mein pahumch jaate ho , vo
kabile tareef hai.
Yun hi likhte rahein .
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Bahut khushi huyi naaz ji ye jaankar ki meri likhi nazm aapke dil tak pahunchi......meri koshish kaamyaab huyi agar isne kisi k dil ko chchua.....meri har ek koshish ko dil se samajhne k liye main aapki bahut shukraguzar hoon...aap ko jitna jana hai maine aap behad khushmizaz hain...aise hi hamesha muskrate rahein khush rahein...duaon k sath....
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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9th September 2014, 11:39 PM
Bohut khoob madhu...... Loved it.
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10th September 2014, 10:56 AM
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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....
Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....
Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
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Bhut khoob andaaz-e-bayan hai aapka madhu ji.....gaheri soch aur uski adaayagi bhi kamaal ki hai.....mubarakbaad aapko!!!
Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
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Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
waaahhh! Madhu jee,
Jazbaat aur ehsaasaat ko ba-khoobi bayaaN kiya hai aap ne
apne kalaam meiN....
DherooN dherooN daad iss besh-qeemati kaawish ke liye!
Likhti rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
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Bahut bahut shukriya hassan ji pasandgi k liye....yoon hi sath dete rahein aate rahein..
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Madhu ji ,
Kya baat hai.bahut khoob ...jab parne wala vohi mehsoos kare jo likhne wala
keh raha hai , tau meri nazar mein aap ka likhna purn ho gaya.
Aap jis gehrayi mein bari saral andaz mein pahumch jaate ho , vo
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Yun hi likhte rahein .
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Sanjay ji bahut dhanywaad aapki baton se bahut hausla mila...yoon hi sath dete rahein...
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Madhu ji
Aaj pehle baar aapko padha.bahut khoobsurat rachna hay.mere daad kabul kijeyega
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Bohut khoob madhu...... Loved it.
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Bahut bahut shukriya..sarika ji....yoon hi aate rahiye..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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thanks for sharing it. apna pan sa laga aapki peshkash se... behad khubsurat
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Shukriya madhishanu ji..
aate rahein..
khush rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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[QUOTE=Pankaj Mishra;468269][COLOR="DarkOliveGreen"][SIZE="3"][B]Bhut khoob andaaz-e-bayan hai aapka madhu ji.....gaheri soch aur uski adaayagi
Hausala afzai ka behad shukriya pankaj jii....aap doston ke sath ki hamesha zaroorat hai....
aate rahiye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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27th April 2015, 07:55 PM
Madhu ji ,
Kya baat hai.bahut khoob .waah
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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27th April 2015, 08:48 PM
originally posted by Madhu
Originally Posted by Madhu 14 View Post
Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....
Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....
Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
fully appreiated........ek massom si,masoomiat se likhi hui kavita
well written and well expressed.
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28th April 2015, 06:05 PM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....
Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....
Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
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Madhu ji, yeh meri nazroN se chhuut gaya thaa.
Kyaa anmol khazaana hai jo aapki qalam se nikalta hai.
Bohot baDhiya.
Likhte raheiN.
Sagar Aashna
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Madhu ji
Aaj pehle baar aapko padha.bahut khoobsurat rachna hay.mere daad kabul kijeyega
keep smiling
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Bahut bahut shukriya sukanya ji aapko yahaan dekhakar bahut khushi ho rahi hai.....
Aage bhi aate rahiyega.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Madhu ji ,
Kya baat hai.bahut khoob .waah
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Shukriya Arvind................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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originally posted by Madhu
Originally Posted by Madhu 14 View Post
Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....
Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....
Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
fully appreiated........ek massom si,masoomiat se likhi hui kavita
well written and well expressed.
rajinderseep
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Bahot bahot shukriya apka rajinderseep ji..........
Regards
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Madhu ji, yeh meri nazroN se chhuut gaya thaa.
Kyaa anmol khazaana hai jo aapki qalam se nikalta hai.
Bohot baDhiya.
Likhte raheiN.
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Bahot shukriya janaab ...khajane ki parakh karne Wala jauhri hee hota Hai....
Achcha laga aapne padha....aate raha kariye aap doston ka sath likhte rahne ka hausla deta Hai....
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3rd April 2018, 11:20 AM
bahut khub likhaa hai madhu ji.
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Badi masoomiyat se usne poochi ek baat baaton baaton me....
Kya sochti rahti ho tum jo soti nahi ho raaton me...
Kya khwahish hai jo seene me daba rakhi hai...
Kya chchipa rakha hai jo ye dard hai zazbaaton me....
Uske sawaal mujhe khamosh kar gaye the....
Jo de sake jawab vo dil bhi to tha uske hathon me....
Har jawab me vo hi hai mere hamesha se....
Usi ki surat dikhi aaj bhi sawalaton me....
Vo der tak dekhta raha ki aaj kuch kahoongi main....
Main der tak khoyi rahi uske hi khayalaton me....
Phir vahi darr ki vo door na ho jaye gar jawab doon to...
Lo Aaj phir bahlaya usko baaton baaton me.....
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bahut khub likhaa hai madhu ji.
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Manoj ji.. Ehsaason Ko mahsoos kiya aapne Behad khushi huyi... Mere kalaam Ko padhne Aur sdc me shirkat karne ke liye dil se shukriya...
Points ke liye phir se shukriya..☺️aate rahiyega
Khush rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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