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18th December 2002, 11:34 PM
ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
meena;-) ;-)
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17th January 2003, 06:23 PM
arre waah
jwaab nahi apka
aur aapki shayari ka
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22nd August 2003, 04:31 PM
ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
waah waah meena ji, bahut khub man khush ho gaya. aapki es rachana per man mein jo aaya yahi likh raha hoon.
dil ke aaine mein yaha
pyar ko sajate dekha,
talash to thi mujhe eski hi,
jo aapki nigaho mein palte dekha
shubhkamnao sahit,
Akant....
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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22nd August 2003, 05:16 PM
MeeNa Ji
DHOOP me Sahare ki zurorat nahi hoti
BhikRi Hai jo savarne ki zurorat nahi hoti
ZulF Hi too hai Koi Uljhi Hui Sada To Nahi
Sulajh JayeGi kisi Din abhi zurorat nahi hoti
Har baar jab bhi likhti HaiN aap wah wah karne ko Dil chahta Hai .. khair wah wah na kahte hue kahunga ..
Tareef khairiyat se rakhiye .. bahut khoobsurat klikha hai
Apna khyal rakhiye ..
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22nd August 2003, 06:18 PM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI
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23rd August 2003, 09:21 PM
beeeeeeaaaaaaaaautifullllllllll.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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23rd August 2003, 10:15 PM
pyaraji,
sabse pahlaey aapse maafi chahti hu......
aapne yaha aa kar waah ki aur mera dhyaan tak nahi gaya
bahot sharminda hu.....
aur pasand ki is liye shukria
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24th August 2003, 01:41 AM
Meenaji
nice lyric
achcha likha haiiiiiii LEKIN .... My advice..........
Julfo me ulajne ki aadat mat daliye
kal kahi sar pe bal na rahe to..
aap ki ye aadat aapke liye uljaan ho jaayegi???
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24th August 2003, 01:50 AM
akant dost,
tumne yah kab dhundh nikali? mere college k dino ki yaad tumne muje dila di....
doosri baat... tumne ise dhundha to maine pyaraji ko reply kiya...
warna kab karti?
waise tum yaha aaye woh bhi muje pata n chala....... yah to ksitiz se pata chala
tisri baat ... tumhara jawabi sher
dil ke aaine mein yaha
pyar ko sajate dekha,
talash to thi mujhe eski hi,
jo aapki nigaho mein palte dekha
waah kya baat hai daad kubul karo
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24th August 2003, 01:53 AM
kshiiz dost,
DHOOP me Sahare ki zurorat nahi hoti
BhikRi Hai jo savarne ki zurorat nahi hoti
ZulF Hi too hai Koi Uljhi Hui Sada To Nahi
Sulajh JayeGi kisi Din abhi zurorat nahi hoti
waahhhhh
tumhaara shayrana andaaj sar aanhko par.
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24th August 2003, 01:54 AM
mita,
aa to college ni masti chhae....... gami jaani aanand thhayo
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24th August 2003, 01:56 AM
aviralji
aap ne pasand kiya aap ka shukriaa.
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24th August 2003, 01:58 AM
drgulieji,
aap ko lyric pasand aaye..... aap ka shukriaa.
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1st September 2005, 07:03 PM
Meena Bahen!
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
Wah!!
Ghana samay pachi aa site per avel chun! Thoda smay pehla ahin 2 vyakti ney PM kariney temni ghani rachnaoo matey ek sathey prasansha karel hati pan tena badla maa kaink naa samjay tevu teoye lakhel, jethi thodu dukh thayel!! Etley ahin avvanu thodu ochu kari dedhel aney PM karta pan dar jevu lagey chey!!!!
Pan tamari lakhel rachna o baraber vanchto rahish!
All the best!!
Rajan!!!
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1st September 2005, 07:16 PM
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Meena Bahen!
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
Wah!!
Ghana samay pachi aa site per avel chun! Thoda smay pehla ahin 2 vyakti ney PM kariney temni ghani rachnaoo matey ek sathey prasansha karel hati pan tena badla maa kaink naa samjay tevu teoye lakhel, jethi thodu dukh thayel!! Etley ahin avvanu thodu ochu kari dedhel aney PM karta pan dar jevu lagey chey!!!!
Pan tamari lakhel rachna o baraber vanchto rahish!
All the best!!
Rajan!!!
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bhai rajan,
koi na kahewa thhi dukh na lagadsho. kadach bhul thhai hoi.
jawa do ae waat...
tame ahi fari aawya. ne aawta rahejo.
mari kavita pasand karwa badal aabhar
meena
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1st September 2005, 07:25 PM
Meena Bahen,
Tamoney bahen kahel chey, tamaroo maan jaroorthi raakhish !!
Rajan!!!!
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1st September 2005, 07:47 PM
ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
Sader Namaskar Di
Kitney Sweet si baat kahi hay di .....so sweet and beautiful
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2nd September 2005, 08:20 AM
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ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
Sader Namaskar Di
Kitney Sweet si baat kahi hay di .....so sweet and beautiful
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priy sukanya,
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Re: kadi dhoop -
1st December 2005, 09:13 AM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
meena
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Coffee Mitr,
yunh kadak dhup se bachne ka acha tarika hai...
magar rata lagana bhi mushkil hai
Take Care
Rohin
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1st December 2005, 09:26 AM
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Coffee Mitr,
yunh kadak dhup se bachne ka acha tarika hai...
magar rata lagana bhi mushkil hai
Take Care
Rohin
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mere rohin,
rata lagana or wo bhi kuch aise waqt jab kitne sapne batorne chale ho.. lol
mai ooski haalat par itna hasi thi.. or wo .. ooska bas chalta to muje maarta.. lol
rohin... in yaado ke lamhe tumahre sath bitaana achha laga...
tumhari coffee mitr
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Re: kadi dhoop -
1st December 2005, 02:33 PM
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Originally posted by meena chheda
ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.
meena
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maa aapki kavita to bahoot achhi hai.. aur jispar likha wo bhi khoobsurat hogi..
lekin baaki ki baare.. mera hasate hasate pat me dard hone laga hai.. hahahahaha
aapki laadali
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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1st December 2005, 08:28 PM
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as you write more and more personal
it becomes more and more universal.
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11th December 2005, 08:29 AM
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maa aapki kavita to bahoot achhi hai.. aur jispar likha wo bhi khoobsurat hogi..
lekin baaki ki baare.. mera hasate hasate pat me dard hone laga hai.. hahahahaha
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meri garima,
mithhi yaade......
maa
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11th December 2005, 08:30 AM
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