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Love kadi dhoop - 18th December 2002, 11:34 PM

ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.

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thanks ji - 22nd August 2003, 04:31 PM


ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.


waah waah meena ji, bahut khub man khush ho gaya. aapki es rachana per man mein jo aaya yahi likh raha hoon.


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pyar ko sajate dekha,
talash to thi mujhe eski hi,
jo aapki nigaho mein palte dekha


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22nd August 2003, 05:16 PM

MeeNa Ji

DHOOP me Sahare ki zurorat nahi hoti
BhikRi Hai jo savarne ki zurorat nahi hoti
ZulF Hi too hai Koi Uljhi Hui Sada To Nahi
Sulajh JayeGi kisi Din abhi zurorat nahi hoti

Har baar jab bhi likhti HaiN aap wah wah karne ko Dil chahta Hai .. khair wah wah na kahte hue kahunga ..

Tareef khairiyat se rakhiye .. bahut khoobsurat klikha hai

Apna khyal rakhiye ..


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bahot khub - 22nd August 2003, 06:18 PM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI


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ohh - 23rd August 2003, 10:15 PM

pyaraji,
sabse pahlaey aapse maafi chahti hu......
aapne yaha aa kar waah ki aur mera dhyaan tak nahi gaya
bahot sharminda hu.....
aur pasand ki is liye shukria
   
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24th August 2003, 01:41 AM

Meenaji
nice lyric
achcha likha haiiiiiii LEKIN .... My advice..........

Julfo me ulajne ki aadat mat daliye
kal kahi sar pe bal na rahe to..
aap ki ye aadat aapke liye uljaan ho jaayegi???


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24th August 2003, 01:50 AM

akant dost,
tumne yah kab dhundh nikali? mere college k dino ki yaad tumne muje dila di....
doosri baat... tumne ise dhundha to maine pyaraji ko reply kiya...
warna kab karti?
waise tum yaha aaye woh bhi muje pata n chala....... yah to ksitiz se pata chala
tisri baat ... tumhara jawabi sher
dil ke aaine mein yaha
pyar ko sajate dekha,
talash to thi mujhe eski hi,
jo aapki nigaho mein palte dekha


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kshiiz dost,

DHOOP me Sahare ki zurorat nahi hoti
BhikRi Hai jo savarne ki zurorat nahi hoti
ZulF Hi too hai Koi Uljhi Hui Sada To Nahi
Sulajh JayeGi kisi Din abhi zurorat nahi hoti
waahhhhh
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aa to college ni masti chhae....... gami jaani aanand thhayo
   
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aap ko lyric pasand aaye..... aap ka shukriaa.
   
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1st September 2005, 07:03 PM

Meena Bahen!

yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.

Wah!!

Ghana samay pachi aa site per avel chun! Thoda smay pehla ahin 2 vyakti ney PM kariney temni ghani rachnaoo matey ek sathey prasansha karel hati pan tena badla maa kaink naa samjay tevu teoye lakhel, jethi thodu dukh thayel!! Etley ahin avvanu thodu ochu kari dedhel aney PM karta pan dar jevu lagey chey!!!!
Pan tamari lakhel rachna o baraber vanchto rahish!

All the best!!

Rajan!!!


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Meena Bahen!

yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.

Wah!!

Ghana samay pachi aa site per avel chun! Thoda smay pehla ahin 2 vyakti ney PM kariney temni ghani rachnaoo matey ek sathey prasansha karel hati pan tena badla maa kaink naa samjay tevu teoye lakhel, jethi thodu dukh thayel!! Etley ahin avvanu thodu ochu kari dedhel aney PM karta pan dar jevu lagey chey!!!!
Pan tamari lakhel rachna o baraber vanchto rahish!

All the best!!

Rajan!!!

bhai rajan,

koi na kahewa thhi dukh na lagadsho. kadach bhul thhai hoi.
jawa do ae waat...
tame ahi fari aawya. ne aawta rahejo.
mari kavita pasand karwa badal aabhar

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1st September 2005, 07:25 PM

Meena Bahen,

Tamoney bahen kahel chey, tamaroo maan jaroorthi raakhish !!

Rajan!!!!


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ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.


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ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.


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priy sukanya,


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Re: kadi dhoop - 1st December 2005, 09:13 AM

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ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.

meena
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yunh kadak dhup se bachne ka acha tarika hai...
magar rata lagana bhi mushkil hai

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Re: Re: kadi dhoop - 1st December 2005, 09:26 AM

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yunh kadak dhup se bachne ka acha tarika hai...
magar rata lagana bhi mushkil hai

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mere rohin,

rata lagana or wo bhi kuch aise waqt jab kitne sapne batorne chale ho.. lol

mai ooski haalat par itna hasi thi.. or wo .. ooska bas chalta to muje maarta.. lol

rohin... in yaado ke lamhe tumahre sath bitaana achha laga...

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Re: kadi dhoop - 1st December 2005, 02:33 PM

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ek to yah sunhari kadi dhoop,
ispe aapki bikhri hui julf;
n sawaro ise, ulje hi rahne do,
in mai ulaj kar, sare gam mitne do;
yahi hai khwaish, yahi hai tammanna,
saye mai tumhare zindgi ko palne do.

meena

maa aapki kavita to bahoot achhi hai.. aur jispar likha wo bhi khoobsurat hogi..

lekin baaki ki baare.. mera hasate hasate pat me dard hone laga hai.. hahahahaha

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maa aapki kavita to bahoot achhi hai.. aur jispar likha wo bhi khoobsurat hogi..

lekin baaki ki baare.. mera hasate hasate pat me dard hone laga hai.. hahahahaha

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