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Thumbs up Awesome wordings by Dr Satinder Sartaj. - 6th July 2010, 07:51 PM

aam nayio hunde

Rasse chum k te hathi appe apna vajood
faahe tang jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde
jado paata hove seeneya ch shek honge ji
odo jung jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde

jihna roohan wich hunda hai ibadata da josh
sda ohna ch hi vekhiya hai shahadata da josh
ik soch nu bachaon layi hakumaata de agho
khang jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde
jado paata hove seeneya ch shek honge ji
odo jung jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde

kise kise nu hi dinda rabb dilan di ameeri
bade mehnge mull nal ehi mildi fakeeri
ghar baar te jageera chhad takat hajareya
ton jhang jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde
jado paata hove seeneya ch shek honge ji
odo jung jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde

kayia naina ch ajeeb jehi khich hundi aa ji
koi vakhri khumari ohna wich hundi aa ji
iko takni de naal lakha dilan nu ikatheya nu
dang jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde
jado paata hove seeneya ch shek honge ji
odo jung jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde

ithe sadaka te shaam te savere ghumde ne
ithe sartaaj warge bathehre ghumde ne
sache suche ehsaasa nal apneya ranga
wich rang jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde
jado paata hove seeneya ch shek honge ji
odo jung jaan wale bande aam nayio hunde
   
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7th July 2010, 12:41 AM

loveleen ji , achhi kavita haigiaega, kahin kahin wazan mei locha hai, thodi jhol jhaal theek keejie,

jeb khali hove dunia na changi lagdi ji,
hove aapni kameej,mangi mangi laggdi ji,
aise mousam de vich ji udhaar mangte de kolo'n mang jan wale bande aam nayo hunde.

lone laike bank kolo ji liandi gaddi hove,
haar paake mathha tekne nu bahr kaddhi hove,
gaddi mangke te hune hune aya yaro kahke, tang jaan vale bande aam nayo hunde.

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loveleen ji , achhi kavita haigiaega, kahin kahin wazan mei locha hai, thodi jhol jhaal theek keejie,

jeb khali hove dunia na changi lagdi ji,
hove aapni kameej,mangi mangi laggdi ji,
aise mousam de vich ji udhaar mangte de kolo'n mang jan wale bande aam nayo hunde.

lone laike bank kolo ji liandi gaddi hove,
haar paake mathha tekne nu bahr kaddhi hove,
gaddi mangke te hune hune aya yaro kahke, tang jaan vale bande aam nayo hunde.
Thankx for this loveleen

I m huge fan of sartaaj bhayee ..

mere khyaal se ise shayri-e-mashhoor shayer mai post karna chahiye
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woh pahle DR. satinder sartaaj ji ke bare mai padh leN

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7th July 2010, 08:54 PM

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mein Dr satinder sartaj....ki videos ke links post kar rahin hun......
   
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7th July 2010, 10:12 PM

thanks loveleen.....sartaaj jiii di poetry taan menu bhi bahut pasand hai....meri pasand di una di ek poetry....!


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yaa even mujhe bhi sartaj ji k gane bhot pasand hain abhi recently main unse milke aayi hun

sabse acha song mujhe laga unka sai or pani panja dareawa wala.....


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yaa even mujhe bhi sartaj ji k gane bhot pasand hain abhi recently main unse milke aayi hun

sabse acha song mujhe laga unka sai or pani panja dareawa wala.....


lo ji tuhanau Satindar jii da eh song pasand hai taaN asi Link de rahe aa, suno bhi te dekho bhi


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thanx sunita ji......apni pasand share karne ke liye.....mujhe bhi ye...poetry dil se pasand hai....dhanyawad
   
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Thankx for this loveleen

I m huge fan of sartaaj bhayee ..

mere khyaal se ise shayri-e-mashhoor shayer mai post karna chahiye
aur aapse ye bhi request hia ki inke video ke link ya kuch bhi post kare.... i really want read and listen him ..

mai bhi post karunga ....

agar koe aur dost bhayee karne chahe to plzz....

-- Baaqi jinko aisa lag raha hia ki isme "locha" hai .... in typical mumyaee stlye ...

woh pahle DR. satinder sartaaj ji ke bare mai padh leN

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Thanx loveleen, sunita ji, ghazal....

I will to post....

agar aapke pas unki latest mehfil ki jaankaari ho to woh bhi deN plzz.

agar delhi mai hone wlai ho to aur bhi acha rahega

I want to meet him....

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KariN ka kam koe aisa ki magroN pandiyaaN hovan
murdaabaad likh lokaan ne fadiaaN jhandiyaaN hovan

unke nayee video haiN

I will post today at eve ....
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awesome song by sartaaj bhayee


BILLO JI ..............!!!!


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maiN parsoN amb te do baithiyaaN chidyaaN bula laeeyaaN
ki khud panchi jeha banke o maiN galla chi laa laiyaaN

maiN parsoN amb te do baithiyaaN chidyaaN bula laeeyaaN

maiN eh darde jehe puchyaa ki karan chah'chahone da
unha mennu bhi puchya ki tera matlab puchyaa ki matlab hai goune da
fir aapna ik dooje nu nazmaaN sunaa laeeyaaN


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