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Teri surat nahi miltii (Gazal) - 12th January 2017, 02:55 PM

Dosto aap sabhi ko Raj KA adaab namaskaar or sat sri akaal. Ek Gazal aapki nazar.


Patthro.n ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti
kabhi sang dil sanam se mohabat nahi milti

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti

zaroori nahi tu chahe jise wo bhi tujhe chahe
zamane mein kisi se kisi ki aadat nahi milti

janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal
kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti

yu.n to milta hai sabhi se muskura ke wo sitamgar
bas ek hami ko uski zara si kurbatt nahi milti

na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj'
yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti


Umaad hai aapka pyaar milega


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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12th January 2017, 04:33 PM

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Dosto aap sabhi ko Raj KA adaab namaskaar or sat sri akaal. Ek Gazal aapki nazar.


Patthro.n ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti
kabhi sang dil sanam se mohabat nahi milti

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti

zaroori nahi tu chahe jise wo bhi tujhe chahe
zamane mein kisi se kisi ki aadat nahi milti

janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal
kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti

yu.n to milta hai sabhi se muskura ke wo sitamgar
bas ek hami ko uski zara si kurbatt nahi milti

na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj'
yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti


Umaad hai aapka pyaar milega
Sat sri akaal Raj ji..

Bahot khushi huyi aapko yahaan dekhkar...kaise hai?

Waaah!! Bahot khoob peshkash aapki taraf se..padhkar achcha laga tammam ashaar tareef ke qabil. .aage bhi hame mauka dein ki ham aapko padhte rahein...

Aate rahiyega. .

Likhte rahein..
Khush rahein...



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17th January 2017, 11:18 PM

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Dosto aap sabhi ko Raj KA adaab namaskaar or sat sri akaal. Ek Gazal aapki nazar.


Patthro.n ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti
kabhi sang dil sanam se mohabat nahi milti

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti

zaroori nahi tu chahe jise wo bhi tujhe chahe
zamane mein kisi se kisi ki aadat nahi milti

janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal
kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti

yu.n to milta hai sabhi se muskura ke wo sitamgar
bas ek hami ko uski zara si kurbatt nahi milti

na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj'
yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti


Umaad hai aapka pyaar milega
kya rawaangi bhari ghazal pesh ki hai bhai aapne mazaa aa gaya har sher behad khoobsurat laga.....likhte rahiye



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Dosto aap sabhi ko Raj KA adaab namaskaar or sat sri akaal. Ek Gazal aapki nazar.


Patthro.n ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti
kabhi sang dil sanam se mohabat nahi milti

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti

zaroori nahi tu chahe jise wo bhi tujhe chahe
zamane mein kisi se kisi ki aadat nahi milti

janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal
kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti

yu.n to milta hai sabhi se muskura ke wo sitamgar
bas ek hami ko uski zara si kurbatt nahi milti

na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj'
yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti


Umaad hai aapka pyaar milega

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti



Kya baat hai..


janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal
kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti

na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj'
yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti


Behad khoobsurat.... ye hota hai siddat se kisi ko chah.na



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Aapko padhe ek arsa ho gaya tha aur pata nahi tha aapki kalam abhi tak chal rahi hai acha laga pyaar bhare ehsaaso ko padhna.

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Rajveer jee.....kya baat hai...khoobsoorat ghazal hui hai....daad qubool karein.



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Dosto aap sabhi ko Raj KA adaab namaskaar or sat sri akaal. Ek Gazal aapki nazar.


Patthro.n ke sehar mein nafasat nahi milti
kabhi sang dil sanam se mohabat nahi milti

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti

zaroori nahi tu chahe jise wo bhi tujhe chahe
zamane mein kisi se kisi ki aadat nahi milti

janmo se teri talash ka silsila hai musalsal
kisi se teri soorat to kisi se seerat nahi milti

yu.n to milta hai sabhi se muskura ke wo sitamgar
bas ek hami ko uski zara si kurbatt nahi milti

na dar is qadar tu badnaamiyon se ai 'Raj'
yahan badnaam huye bina sohrat nahi milti


Umaad hai aapka pyaar milega


aadaab Raj saahab..... kaise hain aap. arse baad aaj aapke kalaam par nazar paDee to paDhe binaa raha nahi gayaa.... behad hi asardaar kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne, dil baag baag ho uthaa meraa..

yuun to har sher qaabile daad hai, magar chaNdd aashar tareef se parey hain...

jinhe tu nahi milta unhe milti hai teri ibadat
jinhe milta hai tu unhe teri ibadat nahi milti

is sher pe nazar Thahar Thahar gayee ... aate rahiyegaa.. likhte rahiye

Shaad............


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