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2212, 2212, 2212, 2212
Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid)
Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi
Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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24th May 2016, 10:50 AM
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Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun
2212, 2212, 2212, 2212
Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid)
Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi
Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu)
waaahhh kamaal ke sher raqam kiye hain aap dono ne...... nacheez ki daad qubool kijiye.....
jab hasraton kaa qatl karke chal diye tum be-wajah,
larze hain mere honTh bhii us din shiqaayat ke liye... (Shaad)
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24th May 2016, 11:44 AM
waaahhh...bahut khoob shaad ji.................
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24th May 2016, 06:31 PM
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Behar: Behar-e-rajaz musamman salim
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Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun
2212, 2212, 2212, 2212
Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid)
Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi
Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu)
waaahhh kamaal ke sher raqam kiye hain aap dono ne...... nacheez ki daad qubool kijiye.....
jab hasraton kaa qatl karke chal diye tum be-wajah,
larze hain mere honTh bhii us din shiqaayat ke liye... (Shaad)
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24th May 2016, 07:07 PM
3rd sher
Ab kya karu ya rab ke aa jaaye usey mujh par yaqeen
Ke cheer du ab dil bhi asbaat- e -sadaaqat ke liye
Asbaat-e-sadaaqat= proof of honesty
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25th May 2016, 12:47 AM
vaah sab hee ney buhet achey asaar likhe hain
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25th May 2016, 12:49 AM
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Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun
2212, 2212, 2212, 2212
Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid)
Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi
Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu)
jab hasraton kaa qatl karke chal diye tum be-wajah,
larze hain mere honTh bhii us din shiqaayat ke liye... (Shaad)
Ab kya karu ya rab ke aa jaaye usey mujh par yaqeen
Ke cheer du ab dil bhi asbaat- e -sadaaqat ke liye
Asbaat-e-sadaaqat= proof of honesty
Mujahid
dil ke pemaane jab muhabbat ke liye khaali huye
milte hen pher to loug lougon se zaroorut ke liye
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25th May 2016, 06:51 AM
kya baat hai saba ji aur mujaahid ji... aapke sher to ek se badh kar ek hain...
waahhhh likhte rahiye
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25th May 2016, 12:19 PM
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Behar: Behar-e-rajaz musamman salim
Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun
Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun
2212, 2212, 2212, 2212
Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid)
Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi
Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu)
jab hasraton kaa qatl karke chal diye tum be-wajah,
larze hain mere honTh bhii us din shiqaayat ke liye... (Shaad)
Ab kya karu ya rab ke aa jaaye usey mujh par yaqeen
Ke cheer du ab dil bhi asbaat- e -sadaaqat ke liye
Asbaat-e-sadaaqat= proof of honesty
Mujahid
dil ke pemaane jab muhabbat ke liye khaali huye
milte hen pher to loug lougon se zaroorut ke liye
sabaa
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Waah......khoob sher kahe saba ji...mujahid sahab...
Bahut khoob..
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26th May 2016, 01:04 AM
shuqria madhu ji apkaa..........
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26th May 2016, 01:31 AM
jis naam pr jaltey rahe meree muhabet ke diye
zinda hun main to aaj bhi usski hi ulfut ke liye
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26th May 2016, 03:09 PM
Imkaan-e-vasl-e-yaar bhi mumkin nahi merey khuda
Phir bhi jalaata hu chiraag-e-ishq hasrat ke liye
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26th May 2016, 06:41 PM
buhet achaa shair hey mujahid ji
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26th May 2016, 10:59 PM
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Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun
2212, 2212, 2212, 2212
Matla: Zauq-o-tamanna bhi nahi dil mai mohabbat ke liye
Mashgool itna hu nahi fursat adaavat ke liye(Mujahid)
1sher
Furqat me unki yaad ki dastak jo sun le dil kabhi
Sar khud b khud jhuk jaye hai us pal ibadat ke liye(madhu)
2nd sher
jab hasraton kaa qatl karke chal diye tum be-wajah,
larze hain mere honTh bhii us din shiqaayat ke liye... (Shaad)
3rd sher
Ab kya karu ya rab ke aa jaaye usey mujh par yaqeen
Ke cheer du ab dil bhi asbaat- e -sadaaqat ke liye
Asbaat-e-sadaaqat= proof of honesty
(Mujahid)
4th sher
dil ke pemaane jab muhabbat ke liye khaali huye
milte hen pher to loug lougon se zaroorut ke liye
(sabaa)
5th sher
jis naam pr jaltey rahe meree muhabet ke diye
zinda hun main to aaj bhi usski hi ulfut ke liye
(sabaa)
6th sher
Imkaan-e-vasl-e-yaar bhi mumkin nahi merey khuda
Phir bhi jalaata hu chiraag-e-ishq hasrat ke liye
(Mujahid)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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27th May 2016, 12:01 AM
ghazal mukamal hui
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27th May 2016, 11:02 AM
Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu mai nayi behar ke saath
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Mus'taf'ilun, Faa'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Faa'ilun
2212, 212, 2212, 212
Matla:
Bikhrey hue gesuu hai tasveer-e-ahbaab mai
Hum dhoob jaatey terey zulfo ke sailaab mai
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Dosto pesh-e-khidmat hu mai nayi behar ke saath
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Mus'taf'ilun, Faa'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Faa'ilun
Mus'taf'ilun, Faa'ilun, Mus'taf'ilun, Faa'ilun
2212, 212, 2212, 212
Matla:
Bikhrey hue gesuu hai tasveer-e-ahbaab mai
Hum dhoob jaatey terey zulfo ke sailaab mai
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27th May 2016, 02:55 PM
2nd sher
Tafreeq se itna bhi ghamgeen mai hu nahi
Aatey ho tum aye sanam har shab mere khwaab mai
Tafreeq= judayi(separation)
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28th May 2016, 06:53 PM
terey judaayi mujhey toh raas aayi nahen
ke dil kahen ab to lagta naa ye ahbaab mai
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28th May 2016, 07:50 PM
Bohat khoob sher kaha saba ji
Baaqi membraan se bhi darkhuwast hai shirkat karey aur mehfil ko aagey baraye
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30th May 2016, 11:27 PM
4th sher
Ab toh nikal aa sanam tasveer se tu kabhi
Itni tahammul kaha iss qalb-e-be-taab mai
Qalb-e-be-taab= impatient heart
Tahammul= patience
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vaah buhet achaa sher likhaa hey aap ney mujahid saheb
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1st June 2016, 12:44 PM
Mehfil mai shirkat badhaye
Pur-khuloos guzarish hai sab se
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1st June 2016, 12:54 PM
madhu , shaad saheb mast saheb ,dhaval saheb purvi ji
likhain aap sab bhee aor ghazal complete kariye please
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1st June 2016, 03:27 PM
Aisa lagta hai saba ji
Maujuda ghazal aur di gayi behar baaqi sukhan ke shaaiqeen ko kuch khaas pasand nahi aayi
Isliye aise ghazal pe koi rad-e-amal ya sher kehna nahi chahte
Muaafi chahta hu agar kuch zyada bol gaya
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1st June 2016, 04:21 PM
such bol ke mazrut nahee karte
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1st June 2016, 09:05 PM
Chaliye ye ghazal ikhtataam karte hai iss aakhri sher ke saath
5th sher
Jo saut-e-bulbul kabhi aati merey baagh se
Ab aa gaye voh terey gulzaar-e-shadaab mai
Saut-e-bulbul= voice of the nightingale
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1st June 2016, 09:17 PM
Chaliye ek naye ghazal ka aaghaaz karte hai nayi behar ke saath.
Umeed hai sab membraan kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge aur isey ek kamyaab ghazal bana ye ge.
Behar: Behar-e-mutadaarik musammam salim
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun
212, 212, 212, 212
Matla
Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi
Dard toh hai magar lutf- e -tanhaayi bhi
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1st June 2016, 11:31 PM
buhet achaa shair likha hey aap ney mujahid saheb .....
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Chaliye ye ghazal ikhtataam karte hai iss aakhri sher ke saath
5th sher
Jo saut-e-bulbul kabhi aati merey baagh se
Ab aa gaye voh terey gulzaar-e-shadaab mai
Saut-e-bulbul= voice of the nightingale
Mujahid
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1st June 2016, 11:33 PM
vaah buhet acha matlaa hey aor sheir bhi
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Chaliye ek naye ghazal ka aaghaaz karte hai nayi behar ke saath.
Umeed hai sab membraan kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge aur isey ek kamyaab ghazal bana ye ge.
Behar: Behar-e-mutadaarik musammam salim
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun
212, 212, 212, 212
Matla
Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi
Dard toh hai magar lutf- e -tanhaayi bhi
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1st June 2016, 11:35 PM
us ki baaton pe kyo ker yakeen ho humey
voh to mosum ke jaisa hey harjaayi bhi
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2nd June 2016, 09:06 AM
Bohat aala darje ke sher hai saba ji
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2nd June 2016, 07:04 PM
buhet shukriaa mujahid saheb ..........................
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2nd June 2016, 09:59 PM
saans lena bhi ab to sazaa saa lagey
uske bin soona aangun bhi purwaayi bhi
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5th June 2016, 09:57 PM
Mujh pe rakhtey hai voh nazr-e-tanqeed par
Waqt dar waqt kartey pazeeraayi bhi
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8th June 2016, 04:20 PM
buhet acha sheir mujahid saheb ....
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14th June 2016, 07:50 PM
Mehfil kuch ruk si gayi hai
Iss dhoobti hui safeena ka khuda hi na-khuda hai
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14th June 2016, 10:47 PM
Mafi chahti hun doston..kuch personal vajahon se thoda busy rahi hun kuch dino se...par aapke sath hun hamesha..ek badhkar ek sher pesh kiye hain saba ji aur mujahid ji aap dono ne
Main koshish karoongi jald hee kuch pesh karun..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Hum sabhi muntazir hai aapke sher k liye
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14th June 2016, 11:43 PM
Behar: Behar-e-mutadaarik musammam salim
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun
Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun Faa'ilun
212, 212, 212, 212
Matla
Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi
Dard toh hai magar lutf- e -tanhaayi bhi(mujahid)
First sher
us ki baaton pe kyo ker yakeen ho humey
voh to mosum ke jaisa hey harjaayi bhi
(sabaa)
2nd sher
Mujh pe rakhtey hai voh nazr-e-tanqeed par
Waqt dar waqt kartey pazeeraayi bhi
(Mujahid)
3rd sher
Vo nibhayega kya sath is daur me
Chhod kar ja juki mujhko parchhaii bhi.(madhu)
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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