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"MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u always |
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"MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u always -
19th September 2006, 09:05 AM
samjhti hai wo mujhe achhi tarh se,
kyuki dil ki bahot hi sachchi hai wo................... sama badal jata hai uske aanese, meri is duniya ki ranginiyat hai wo.................. dil me basi hai sirf wohi har taraf, dil ki har dhadkn me basi hai wo.................. sanse bhi chalti hai uske ishare se, meri har sanso me chhupi hai wo.................... uske liye jitna likhu kam hai utna, bahot hi achhi aur pyaari hai wo................ ujala lati hai wo jindagi me meri, main hu jalta diya aur roshni hai wo.............. safar hai zindgi bhar ka ye hamara, main hu navik aur meri kashti hai wo.............. dil bahot sochta hai kyu uske liye itna, bas meri is zindagi ki har khusi hai wo.............. khwabo ki duniya sajayi hai usne, meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo................. A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ................... meri khwabo ki duniya ki sehzadi hai wo.................................... |
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Re: "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u alw -
19th September 2006, 09:07 AM
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bahut acche ab tumhari shayri main bahut nikhar aane laga hai..... ase hi hamesha likhte raho meri dua hamesha tumhare shath hai dil se merri daad kabool farmaiyega aapka ek begana sa dost dilip dhaval ji aapka massage box fiull hai pls use khali kigiye  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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19th September 2006, 12:23 PM
Dhaval ji,
bahut behtar likhane lage hain... dusere sher mein ranginiyat aur last sher mein sahjaadi shabd ka pryog nahi hona chahiye tha. aapki lekhani mein mein dheeme dheeme sudhar aa jayega.. phir ek din mukammal likhane legenge aap.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Re: "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u alw -
19th September 2006, 12:32 PM
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karni to paegi hi aapne itna achha jo likha hai. aaj aapki shayri me ehasaas ke saath shabd bhi bahot achhe hai. unhi likhte jaiye yahi dua hai. gratse aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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Re: "MERI KHWABO KI DUNIYA.................." a shayri for her............"with u alw -
19th September 2006, 01:58 PM
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take care tumhari di  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th September 2006, 05:02 PM
wel done dhaval
bahut acche ab tumhari shayri main bahut nikhar aane laga hai..... ase hi hamesha likhte raho meri dua hamesha tumhare shath hai dil se merri daad kabool farmaiyega aapka ek begana sa dost dilip dhaval ji aapka massage box fiull hai pls use khali kigiye ------------ ho gaya mera chota sa aakas bhee aseem. aap jabse hamare kareeb rahne lage he nissim "dilip" mere dost dilip bahot hi achha laga aaj tera jaldi se repluy aa gaya wah main nasib wala hu k jaldi reply mila aapka sach me aur tumhe meri ye peshkas pasand aayi bahot hi ahha laga aap jaise dosto k sahare hi kuch likh pa raha hu yaar ok aate rehne aur uhi har baar jaldi jawab de diya kar achha lagta ha apna khayal rakhna aapka dost dhaval |
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19th September 2006, 05:07 PM
Dhaval ji,
bahut behtar likhane lage hain... dusere sher mein ranginiyat aur last sher mein sahjaadi shabd ka pryog nahi hona chahiye tha. aapki lekhani mein mein dheeme dheeme sudhar aa jayega.. phir ek din mukammal likhane legenge aap.. Akant... ------------ ********* AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... akant ji achha laga ye janke k aapne jo suggations diye the aise hi likha maine aur aapko pasand aaya bahot hi achha laga akantji apne mujhe bahot help ki ye dost aapka abhari hai aise hi suggetions dete rahiyega achha lagta hai mujhe shukriya aapka bahot bahot aate rahiyega aapka dost dhaval |
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19th September 2006, 05:10 PM
aaj to sab ne tareef kar di aapki mein bhi karu kya???
karni to paegi hi aapne itna achha jo likha hai. aaj aapki shayri me ehasaas ke saath shabd bhi bahot achhe hai. unhi likhte jaiye yahi dua hai. gratse aapki dost pooja ------------ Lo Baha Di Kashti Humne Sehraa Me, Kya Khabar,Kab Tuffan Aa Jaye....... ~~~~~~~~Deepika~~~~~~~~ Humne To Sirf Aapko Apna Mana, Aapko Tanha Karke Hum Kaha Jayenge, Jinda To Hum Aaj Bhi Nahi, Hoke Aapse Juda Hum To Mar Hi Jayenge.... ~~~~~cute's love only~~~~~ pooja achha laga ye janke k aapko mere ehsas pasand aaye ye ehsas hi to hai mere jiski wajah se mujhe bahot mehnet nahi karni padti har peshkas banaen me asan ho jaiti hai ehsas ki wajah se aapko pasand aayi ye peshkas bahot hi achha laga ummid hai aage bhi aapko har peshkas pasand aaye aapka dost dhaval |
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19th September 2006, 05:13 PM
dear dhaval, bahut khoob , har share mukamal share hai. bahut accha lagta hai tumhey yu aagey badtey dekhna. yu hi likhtey raho hamesha.
take care tumhari di ------------ Sunita Virender Singh eh aasmaan wale jameen par uttar ke dekh, hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad ke dekh......... sister aapka jawab aate hi tasalli ho jati hai k peshkas wake h me achhi bani hai aur ye aapke ashirwad ka hi to natija hai jiski wajah semain aaj kuch likh raha hu bas yehi chahta hu k meri is sister ka aashirwad hamesha mere sath rahe apna khayal rakhiyega aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost dhaval |
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