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9th September 2004, 02:09 AM
Aaya hi si hale te dildaar mera..
Aaya hi si hale o khayaal tera.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Aaya hi si hale taan pyar mera.. Gal karni hale taan shuru vi na keeti si.. Akha hi akha vich hale taan gal si.. Haaye, Kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Hale taan jii parr ke vekhya vi na si.. Aake mere kol bae gaya o.. Akha to hi boleya yaad karda hai o.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Dil diya gallan karan hi lageya si o.. Mera hath fadke dil de kol lae gaya.. Tere vaajo dil nahi lagda hun, aakhda si o.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Haal dil de sunavan hi lageya si o.. Akha ch akha paake mainu aakhya.. Kiven rahi jaani ae mere bina tu? Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Hale taan main apna pyar zaahir vi na keeta si.. Onu main akhan ch vasaaya si.. Onu vekh ke jun dil kabraaya si.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Hale taan saan vi na aaya si.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Eh sachaai to taan mera sapna hi chaga si.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th September 2004, 07:25 PM
hehehhee!
Very nice Didi, Neend mein hi rehte, uthne ko kisne kaha tha, koi baat nahi main jiju ko bol doongi woh aa jaayenge sach mein aise. Good one! ~Sabi!!!!!!! |
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9th September 2004, 11:09 PM
priiiiiiiii
bahut soonder khush raho di |
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10th September 2004, 12:25 AM
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take care! "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th September 2004, 12:27 AM
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Thanku hai....  love u diii! Take care ~Priiiiiiiiiiiiiii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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10th September 2004, 12:46 AM
Bahut acha likha hai tumne.
Aur plz mujhe reply karne se mat rokna. i ain't gonna hurt u ok. 'tera saaya' Forgive someone, to make 'em smile Forgive someone, to make u smile |
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10th September 2004, 10:14 AM
Aaya hi si hale te dildaar mera..
Aaya hi si hale o khayaal tera.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Aaya hi si hale taan pyar mera.. Gal karni hale taan shuru vi na keeti si.. Akha hi akha vich hale taan gal si.. Haaye, Kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Hale taan jii parr ke vekhya vi na si.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Eh sachaai to taan mera sapna hi chaga si.. Haaye, kyun meri aakh khul gayi.. Dear sis, Tusi to punjabi bhi vadi changi likhte ho ji  Really nice words priya... I am not too good at punjabi but good enough to understand this post...(Learnt a bit with so many pretty punjabi kudis around ) Kiddin... I just love the appeal of this language.Loved this post of urs too... Do keep it up.. TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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11th September 2004, 01:16 AM
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Bada changa lagyeyaa jaanke ki thonu meri punjabi vi vadiya lagi... koi gal nahi Bhai, je mushkil lage punjabi saamjhni, taan mainto pooch layi.. main dass davangi...Chalo hun jaani aa.. tusi apna khayaal rakhiyo.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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13th September 2004, 10:28 PM
Saaya... thanx
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th September 2004, 09:50 AM
nice one chahat
aivay hee likhde raho apni chahat dee khushboo thodi saday kol v aan do aapa v do kadi gee layie zindagi enni pyari nahi, asi kee kariya |
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Hi Priyaji... |
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14th September 2004, 11:46 AM
Very Nice Priyaji....
Meri to samajh me nahi aata ke mai aapki taarif me kya likhu???? u r really great.... Hindi.....Gujrati.....Aur phir punjabi bhi.....too goood yaar..too goood.... Mai ye jaanane ke liye betaab hu ki aapki mother tongue kya hai....kya mai jaan sakti hu.....haa but only if u dont mind.... Bye...Take Care..... A personal request......kya aap ye kavita mujhe Hindi me samjha sakte ho.....Please Priyaji.... Bye..Take Care.... Megha....... |
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14th September 2004, 07:33 PM
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Bada changa lageya eh jaan ke ki thonu mera likhya pasand aaya. Tusi saare dostan karke hi taan, hor likhan di chaah bad-di raindi ae... Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: Hi Priyaji... |
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Sabse pehle to aapka bahut bahut shukriya ki aapko mere kalaam pasand aate hain.. Doosri baat yeh ki maine kabhi bhi Gujrati mein kuch bhi nahi likha.. mujhe khud Gujrati nahi aati, to usmein kuch bhi likhne ka to sawaal nahi hota. Shaayad aap Punjabi ko mix na kar rahe ho, ya phir kisi aur ki rahcna padh ke, rachaiyta mujhe samjh rahe ho. Meri mother tongue Hindi hai, par Punjabi bhi kaafi had tak jaanti hun, kyunki 85%zindagi Punjab mein hi nikli hai.. Aur rahi baat is kavita ki hindi version ki.. to yeh leejiye... Aaya hi tha abhi dildaar mera.. Aaya hi tha abhi woh khayaal tera.. Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Aaya hi tha abhi to pyar mera.. Baat to abhi shuru bhi na kee thi.. Aankhon hi aankhon mein ho rahi baat thi.. Haaye, Kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Abhi to jee bhar ke dekha bhi na tha.. Aake mere paas baith gaye woh.. Aakhon se hi bole yaad karte hain woh.. Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Dil ki baatein karne hi lage the woh.. Mera haath pakadke dil ke paas le gaye.. Tere bina dil nahi lagta ab, keh rahe the woh.. Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Haal dil ka sunaane hi lage the woh.. Aankon mein aankhen daal ke bole woh.. Kaise jee rahi hai tu mere bina? Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Abhi to maine apna pyar zaahir bhi na kiya tha.. Unhe maine aankhon mein basaaya tha.. Unhe dekh ke yun dil ghabraaya tha.. Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Abhi to saansein bhi na thaami thi.. Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. Haaye, kyun meri aaknh khul gayi.. Is sachaai se to mera sapna hi acha tha.. Haaye, kyun meri aankh khul gayi.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Many Many Thanks..... |
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Many Many Thanks..... -
15th September 2004, 09:52 AM
Priyaji....
Thank you very very much for urs hindi translation... its really very nice.... Punjabi me to ye kavita itni samajh me nahi aayi thi......but hindi me padhkar kafi acchi lagi hai...... & i m very sorry shayad maine kisi aur ki gujrati kavita ko aapki rachna samajh liya......sorry......please dont mind..... Bye..keep writing.... Take Care... Megha.... |
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15th September 2004, 12:44 PM
bahoot achhe priya ji ! Really nice :-)
maine aapki or bhi rachnaaye padhi hai , har baar ki tarah ye bhi bahoot sundar likha hai ... ------------------------------------ Men may come , Men may go .. But i will go on forever ... :-) |
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16th September 2004, 03:06 AM
Megha ji..
Sry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi.. galatiyan insaan se hi hoti hain.. that's ok! Aapko pasand aayi, yehi bahut hai... Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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16th September 2004, 03:08 AM
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Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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16th September 2004, 09:28 AM
plz yeh tareef ka silsala khatam karke
kuch naya kabil-e-tareef kaam keejiye and plz dont mind my wordings |
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16th September 2004, 07:41 PM
Vikrant ji..
Well u said don't mind ur words so I won't. But they were very rude. If any one says's something nice to you, then u r bound to say atleast a Thankyou. That's what I think. Don't know bout u. And now u plz don't mind my words. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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