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30th October 2014, 01:16 PM
Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..
Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar hee sachcha hai ek,sachcha ye apnapan hai..
Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda hai tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...
Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaati ho
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...
Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata hai Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me khush hota mera ye man hai...
Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...
Jeevan me sangeet ghula aur,sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar hee sachcha hai ek ,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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30th October 2014, 04:19 PM
wahh! wahh! waah! Madhu jee...
kia baat hai .... bohat umdaaH kalaam aur woh bhii apni piyaari isi gudiya ke naam..
beeti ke pyaar meiN kahe alfaaz dil chuu gaye...
tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik haiN...
Meri taraf bohat sii daad qabool kejiye...is haseeN kaawish ke liye...
Likhte rahiye,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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30th October 2014, 04:36 PM
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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..
Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..
Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...
Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...
Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...
Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...
Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
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waaahh madhu saahiba kyaa kahne aapki is kavitaa ke..... khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee huee ek dil ko choo lene waali kavitaa likhi hai aapne..... sach me man moh liyaa isne hamaaraa....... bahot saari daad pesh karta hoon aapko is kavita ke liye.... aati rahiye likhtii rahiye
Aur aapki gudiyaa ko hamaari taraf se dher saara pyaaaaar...
Shaad....
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31st October 2014, 02:37 PM
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Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...
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waaah waah bahut hi sundar........
aisaa lagtaa hai jaise dil nikaal kar rakh diyaa ho rachnaa meiN ........
bhagwaan aapki beti ko khushiyaaN hi khushiyaaN de
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31st October 2014, 09:45 PM
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wahh! wahh! waah! Madhu jee...
kia baat hai .... bohat umdaaH kalaam aur woh bhii apni piyaari isi gudiya ke naam..
beeti ke pyaar meiN kahe alfaaz dil chuu gaye...
tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik haiN...
Meri taraf bohat sii daad qabool kejiye...is haseeN kaawish ke liye...
Likhte rahiye,
Regards,
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Apki tareef ki shukraguzar hoon hassan ji...bachchon k liye pyaar ka koi paimana to nhi hota fir bhi kuch jazbaton ko alfazon me pirone ki koshish ki.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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1st November 2014, 05:59 PM
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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..
Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..
Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...
Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...
Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...
Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...
Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
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Wow... I just read this to my daughter and she is smiling.
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2nd November 2014, 03:10 PM
Madhu ji ...
bahut hi sachche aur pyare lage aap ke jazbaat aur ehsaas apni bachchi ke liye ..
yun hi likhte rahiye ..
Sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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waaahh madhu saahiba kyaa kahne aapki is kavitaa ke..... khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee huee ek dil ko choo lene waali kavitaa likhi hai aapne..... sach me man moh liyaa isne hamaaraa....... bahot saari daad pesh karta hoon aapko is kavita ke liye.... aati rahiye likhtii rahiye
Aur aapki gudiyaa ko hamaari taraf se dher saara pyaaaaar...
Shaad....
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Dhanyawaad shaad ji..apko meri kavita pasand aayi.khushi huyi jaankar.. apne meri beti ke liye jo sneh vyakt kiya uske liye apki abhari hoon.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th November 2014, 12:02 AM
Dear Madhu, bahut pyara likha hai, pyara hota Bhi kyu na...beti par jo likha hai
Betiyaa to hoti hi etni pyari hai ki enke bare mein sochne se hi chehre par muskaan aa jati hai. Ghar ki ronak hoti hai betiyaa...dil ka sakoon hoti hai betiyaa....emotional ho rhi hu ab mai
Bhagwan aapki bitiya ko Sada khush rakhe, usko zamane ki har khushi miley.
Bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
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Bohut badhiya Madhuji
Kalam bada dumdaar likha hai aapne.....mubarak ho.
Likhte rahiye aur hamen yun hi apne kalam se mehzooz karte rahiye.
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
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waaah waah bahut hi sundar........
aisaa lagtaa hai jaise dil nikaal kar rakh diyaa ho rachnaa meiN ........
bhagwaan aapki beti ko khushiyaaN hi khushiyaaN de
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aapke ashirwAad ke liye abhari hoon..Dhanyawaad rajeev ji..
aate rahein...
khush rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Outstanding....maa ke pyar ka to koi comparison nahin hota aur us muhabbat ko itni khoobsurat nazm ki shakl di hai aapne ki tareef keliye lafz kam pad rahe haiN....hamesha ki tarah aapki nazm ne dil ko chuu liya....aapki beti ko meri tarafse dher saara pyar dijiyega......stay happy (Aameen)
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shukriya naz..
achcha laga aapne merI feelings mahsoos ki..aur meri nazm ko pasand kiya...
apki kami khalti hai mujhe..apni post par...
Stay happy...
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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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28th March 2015, 12:56 PM
Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Wah Madhu jiii wah,,, A khyalath bas ek maa hi k mann me aa sakte hain,,, bahot khoob
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29th March 2015, 11:50 PM
Madhu jee
Namaste
dil ko bahot achchha lagaa aapki yeh koshish ko padh kar...dil se daad
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Madhu jee aapki kavita padke dil ko bahut sukoon phuncha.....very nice lyrics....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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13th April 2015, 10:09 PM
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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..
Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..
Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...
Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...
Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...
Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...
Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
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Bahut khoob madhu ji, chaliye aapki interview ke zariye meri nazar mein aapki yeh rachnaa aayi. Nacheez ki daad qubool farmiYeGaa
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Wow... I just read this to my daughter and she is smiling.
Keep writing
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Thank you sarika for liking it so much.....
keep coming. ...
Love...
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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Madhu ji ...
bahut hi sachche aur pyare lage aap ke jazbaat aur ehsaas apni bachchi ke liye ..
yun hi likhte rahiye ..
Sanjay sehgal
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Shukriya sanjay sahab....
aate rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..
Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..
Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...
Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...
Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...
Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...
Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
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wah bahut sunder bachon ke bholapan sahaj swabhaav nishchhal man me sakshaat prabhu darshan hai
dil ko chhoo gayee yeh rachna
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe
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Dear Madhu, bahut pyara likha hai, pyara hota Bhi kyu na...beti par jo likha hai
Betiyaa to hoti hi etni pyari hai ki enke bare mein sochne se hi chehre par muskaan aa jati hai. Ghar ki ronak hoti hai betiyaa...dil ka sakoon hoti hai betiyaa....emotional ho rhi hu ab mai
Bhagwan aapki bitiya ko Sada khush rakhe, usko zamane ki har khushi miley.
Bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
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Jee dii betiya to khuda ki di huyi saugat hoti hain...bahut masoom bahut pyari..jaise jaise vo badi ho rahi hai..usme khud ko badhte huye dekhti hoon main.....
Aapke asheerwaad aur pyaar ke liye bahut dhanywaad di...
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Bohut badhiya Madhuji
Kalam bada dumdaar likha hai aapne.....mubarak ho.
Likhte rahiye aur hamen yun hi apne kalam se mehzooz karte rahiye.
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
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ji bahut shukriya mujeeb sahab....
ummeed hai aage bhi apka sath milta rahega...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...
Wah Madhu jiii wah,,, A khyalath bas ek maa hi k mann me aa sakte hain,,, bahot khoob
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Shukriya sabhat khan ji......
Kahaan hain aajkal aap....ummeed hai jald jee apko padhne ka mauka milega ..
apna khayal rakhein...
Aate rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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13th November 2015, 09:57 AM
apko padkar shoor kavita subhadra kumari chauhan ki mashoor kavita jehan m a gai vakai kya khub alfaj likhe hai
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Madhu jee
Namaste
dil ko bahot achchha lagaa aapki yeh koshish ko padh kar...dil se daad
Aapka
Dhaval
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Aapke dil ko achcha laga...khushi huyi jankar.....
Shukriya aapke sath ka..
Aate rahiyega...
Take care ..
Madhu
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Madhu jee aapki kavita padke dil ko bahut sukoon phuncha.....very nice lyrics....
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Thank you aru ji.........
Aate rahiyega. ........
Takecare.
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Shukriya mast ji............
Bas aapki nazar e inayat yun hee bani rahe yahi chahti hain ham....
Khush rahiye....
Aate rahiye....
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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wah bahut sunder bachon ke bholapan sahaj swabhaav nishchhal man me sakshaat prabhu darshan hai
dil ko chhoo gayee yeh rachna
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe
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aapka uttar padhkar bahut anand mila rajinder ji...
satya hai bachche ishwar ka roop hote hain....
abhari hun aapke sath ki...
madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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