aftab_killar

[aftab_killar]

DUNIYA SE NIRALA HAI MERA RUNG -E-TABIYAT

TU MERI MOHABAT KO SAMJH HI NAHI SAKTI,

JAB TAK KI MOHABAT KI HAQIKAT KO NA SAMJHO

FANKAR KI ULFAT KO SAMJH HI NAHI SAKTI,,,

KEYA KHAK MUDAWA -E-GUM-E-HIZR KAROGI,

TUM SADMA-E-FURKAT KO SAMJH HI NAHI SAKTI................
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ITNI SIDAT SE TO BARSAT BHI KUM KUM BARSE,,

JIS TRHAN ANKH TERI YAAD MEN CHHM CHHM BARSE,,,

MINNAT KON KARE AAB EEK GHRONDE KE LIYE,,

KAH DO BADAL SE KE BARASTA HAI TO JUM JUM BARSE ,,,,,
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AANKH ROTI RAHE DIL TADAPTA RAHE,,

YAAD TERI SATAYE TO MEN KEYA KARU,,,

MUJHKO DUNIYA SE "AFTAB" SIKAYAT NAHI ,,

KOI MERA BANE YE MERI KISMAT NAHI ,,,

AUR JINPE MENE LUTA DI MATTA -E- KHUSI,,

WO HI DAMAN BACHYE TO MEN KEYA KARU,,,

JISNE BAKHSHA HAI DARDE MOHABAT MUJE ,,

AAB WAHI BHUL JAYE TO MEN KEYA KARUN,,,

KHAL MERI KHICHI SAR MERA KATAA,,

ILZAAM TUJH PAR AAYE TO MEN KEYA KARUN,,,,
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MANA AAP SAB KO MERE SAHER PASND NAA AAYE HON PAR

MERA KAAM HAI KOSHIS KARNA OR ACCHA LIKHNA ....

(((((((((((AFTAB_KILLAR))))))))))))))

[guriya82]

aftab ji aap kaafi accha likhte hai
aapki abhi starting hai phir bhi kaafi aacha likha hai
aaise hi likhte rahiyega
aap zaroor ek din success honge
bbye take care
guriya

[Uday]

aap achhaa likhte hain.But post in correct forum yaar.