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Love judaai ka dard bhala kaise adaa hota hai - 27th September 2009, 09:43 PM

judaai ka dard bhala kaise adaa hota hai
na pucho hamase koi kaise judaa hota hai.

har baat me yaad aa jaati hai teri mujhko
ye kaisa dard jo tujhse hi adaa hota hai

kya kahti hai aakhe meri teri tasveer se
har tanhaai me vo mera hi khuda hota hai


ab de koi aawaz mere kano me pyar se
ek aahat par dil ka ahasaas fida hota hai

hamne chaha hai chhanewaalo ke tarah
ab aakhari saas me dil vo vida hota hai.


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27th September 2009, 10:07 PM

ajay sahab .aadaab............
apki peshkash bahut khoob hai.........
kaha chupa rakha tha is ratna ko?

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Originally Posted by ajay nidaan View Post
judaai ka dard bhala kaise adaa hota hai
na pucho hamase koi kaise judaa hota hai.


kya baat hai.........
bahut duur ki kaudi laaye hai ap .......nahi to do itni aam line ko perfect rabt dena koi aam baat nahi........
bahut acha adaa hua hai...........
apki bhi to adaa acchi hai

har baat me yaad aa jaati hai teri mujhko
ye kaisa dard jo tujhse hi adaa hota hai


bahut khoob.........
yaha bhi meri pahle wali baat lagu hoti hai........
same case hai........
bahut umda .....bahut badiya..........


kya kahti hai aakhe meri teri tasveer se
har tanhaai me vo mera hi khuda hota hai


shubhan alllah.........
kya kahe iske agee

ab de koi aawaz mere kano me pyar se
ek aahat par dil ka ahasaas fida hota hai

bahut acche........


hamne chaha hai chhanewaalo ke tarah
ab aakhari saas me dil vo vida hota hai.

bahut accha............
apki is ghazal me ek naya chehra dekha apka........
bahut acccha laga.....
bahut hi alag andaz me apne sab sher adaa kiya hai.........

MERI DAAD KABUUL KIJIYE.......SIR

i am privileged to hear this ghazal.....sir








   
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