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Naya Saal -
31st December 2009, 05:35 PM
Naye saal ka jaam
Naya saal, mere liy.n khushi manaane ka ek aur moqa
Wajh, shayad mujhay mere guzre huway kal se behtar
Ki umeed
Ho bhi kyu.n na zahir hai is zamee.n par janm lia hai
Haq banta hai mera ki mein wo sab sochu.n aur wo
sab kuch pa sakhu.n jis par mera adhikaar hai, ye meri
Dharti hai, mere log, meri jaaye paidaaish, jise maa
Kehte hain, is poori kaayenaat ki sabse khoobsurat
Sheh, isi ki mitti mai khaila hu.n, mere badan se aisi
Mehek aati hai ki naa chahte huway bhi log mud ke
Daikhte hai.n, meri soch meri udaan, wahan jo, wo jo,
ufaq daikh rhe ho na wahan usko choona hai, tum has
rahe ho is baat ko sun kar shayad tumhe yaqeen nhi hua,
Daikho zara nazar daalo mere in par e hoslo.n par ye lai
Jaayenge wahan mujhko, choona hai, zaroor choona hai,
Haq banta hai mera, haan bas ye zara saaf safaaii karni hai
Warna maalik naraaz ho jaayega aur phir zara si mushkil hogi
Raat bhooko soni padegi, abhi jo bachaha mere liyn is
dhaabe be chaaye laikar aaya tha shayad yahi kaha tha
uski aankho.n ne mujhse,
wo ye keh kar mere pass se chala gaya
usi lamhe aasmaan par thirakti huii roshini ne
Naye saal ka eylaan kar dia, kahan bhatak gaya mein bhi
Aap sabko naya saal Mubarak ho, Fiamaan Allah
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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31st December 2009, 06:34 PM
Aslam Jii,,
Wah sahib.... kia andaaz hai,,
Mujhe aap k qalam ka yeh rukh bhi boht pasand aaya,
Aap ki is tehreer ne shuru se aakhir tak haqeeqat se ru-ba-ru
karaya,,, is mein, main ne qatra bhar bhi jhoot ki milaawat shamil
nahi dekhi....
Aap ka yeh andaaz waqai daad k qabil hai,,,
qabool kijiye ga......
Allah se duaa hai k naya saal hum sab k liye
khushiyaan le kar aaye (Ameen)..
Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,
Allah Hafiz
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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An Incomplite Dream
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1st January 2010, 05:12 PM
Aslam sahab AadaaB!
Aapki yeh kalam kal hi padhi thi but kuch khaas nahi lagi thi, per jab main office se nikal raha tha kal raat 2010 ki party ke liye to office ke get keeper se nazar mili aur aapka kalam nazar ke samne aa gaya, coz use kuch hi der pahele boss ne bahut sunaya tha, wajah itni thi ke do kutte aapas mein ladte hua office compound tak aa gaye the.......
Aur bechare ko dant dilane ka sabab ban gaye ........ Khair jaane dijiye...... Ise kisse se aapki tehreer samjh mein aayi ke sachai aisi bhi hai............
Keep writting,
Khuda Haefz.........
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Anshumali
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3rd January 2010, 09:32 AM
Aslam Bhaai........Aadaab ! naye saal ka janam hue do roz beet gaye....aapki tehreer par nazar abhi abhi padhi......so padhne baith gaya........pehle pehel toh uljhi si lagi......phir dubara padhi toh sab samajh aata gaya......acha laga padhkar........dil se daad hazir hai......yuhi likhte rahiye.....
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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