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Pita parmeshvar - 4th June 2010, 07:03 PM

pita parmeshvar


yaad har pal aate hai vo apne

unke sach kiye humne sab sapne

kitna diya unhone hume gyan

unhi ki khatir hai apna maan

tyag kiya, hume jina sikhaya

tab hai jivan me satya samaya

ye jindagi unhi ki khatir hai

unki duao ki ab bhi jagir hai

unhi ke pyar se mili takat hai

jivan me sab hai aur rahat hai

mere sabse bade vo rajdar the

guru aur pita dono ke didar the

kese chale gaye yo akela karke

khayalo me rahte, sanso me baste


dr shakuntala vyas


   
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5th June 2010, 11:20 AM

Shakuntala Ji......Aapki rachna ke eshaas ....kahi mere mann ko bhi draviit kar gaye........bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh rachna .....aise hi aur behtar rachnaao ke saath aate rahiye......aapko padhna accha lagta hai....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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5th June 2010, 04:57 PM

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Shakuntala Ji......Aapki rachna ke eshaas ....kahi mere mann ko bhi draviit kar gaye........bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh rachna .....aise hi aur behtar rachnaao ke saath aate rahiye......aapko padhna accha lagta hai....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
tahedil se suker guzar hu

mene jo bhi likha un sab me se yah rachana mujhe bahut priy he

aapne ish rachana ko pasand kiya mera ahobhagy he

apki abhari hu

sath dete rahe

mujhe bhasha ka bahut kum gyan he pardesh me he 19 saal se fir job bhi

busy he doctor ka

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5th June 2010, 05:22 PM

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pita parmeshvar


yaad har pal aate hai vo apne

unke sach kiye humne sab sapne

kitna diya unhone hume gyan

unhi ki khatir hai apna maan

tyag kiya, hume jina sikhaya

tab hai jivan me satya samaya

ye jindagi unhi ki khatir hai

unki duao ki ab bhi jagir hai

unhi ke pyar se mili takat hai

jivan me sab hai aur rahat hai

mere sabse bade vo rajdar the

guru aur pita dono ke didar the

kese chale gaye yo akela karke

khayalo me rahte, sanso me baste


dr shakuntala vyas
Shakuntala jee,
Mata-pita har kisi ke liye peepal ki thaNdi chhao.N ke jaise hote hai.N aur fir betiya.N to pita ki laDli hoti hai.N.
yeh baat to ek pita aur ek beti hi samajh paati hai.
par vidhi ka vidhan kuch aisa hai ke aksar ye companionship toot jati hai aur kabhi kabhi to samay se bahut pehle.
aapki is rachna ne bahut kuch yaad dila diya.
vo beeta waqt jo ab kabhi nahi.N aayega.
kabhi nahi.N
Aapki rachna acchi lagi.
Jab maine apne pita ko khoya tha tab maine apne bhagvan se pucha tha,

" Taraste dil me.N ab koi aas nahi.N hai,
Baraste naino.N me.N ab koi pyas nahi.N hai,
Suni hai ye duniya teri saari,
kya khush hai? ab tu udas nahi.N hai?? "

Jawab aaya,
" Tu beti hai meri, maiN tere pas hi to rahuNga,
Kabhi saya kabhi maaNjhi ban,tere sath hi chaluNga..."

Aur yeh sach hai.
Vo humesha mere sath rehte haiN humesha.
Aapki rahcna ne bahut bhavuk kar diya,jaane kya kya keh rahi hooN.
ab chalti hoo.N,
God Bless You,
Apki Dost
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Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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Shakuntala jee,
Mata-pita har kisi ke liye peepal ki thaNdi chhao.N ke jaise hote hai.N aur fir betiya.N to pita ki laDli hoti hai.N.
yeh baat to ek pita aur ek beti hi samajh paati hai.
par vidhi ka vidhan kuch aisa hai ke aksar ye companionship toot jati hai aur kabhi kabhi to samay se bahut pehle.
aapki is rachna ne bahut kuch yaad dila diya.
vo beeta waqt jo ab kabhi nahi.N aayega.
kabhi nahi.N
Aapki rachna acchi lagi.
Jab maine apne pita ko khoya tha tab maine apne bhagvan se pucha tha,

" Taraste dil me.N ab koi aas nahi.N hai,
Baraste naino.N me.N ab koi pyas nahi.N hai,
Suni hai ye duniya teri saari,
kya khush hai? ab tu udas nahi.N hai?? "

Jawab aaya,
" Tu beti hai meri, maiN tere pas hi to rahuNga,
Kabhi saya kabhi maaNjhi ban,tere sath hi chaluNga..."

Aur yeh sach hai.
Vo humesha mere sath rehte haiN humesha.
Aapki rahcna ne bahut bhavuk kar diya,jaane kya kya keh rahi hooN.
ab chalti hoo.N,
God Bless You,
Apki Dost
Ritu
priy ritu

sada khush raho

sabd nahi kin sabdo me apka sukriya kahu

apane meri ish rachana ko padhaaur adar diya kabhi nahi bhulungy

me yaha nayi hu ish site per

meri yah rachana mujhe itani pasand he

mere pita 1995 me swaglok ko sidhar gaye tub me abudhabi me thy

unke antim darsan bhi na huye

third day pahunchy thy

mene jindagy me jo bhi paya unke sahash se unhone rajasthan me ush

vaqt mujhe doctor banaya mene MBBS 1976 ME KIYA

MERE PAPA KI ME BAHUTI HI LADALI THY

LVVVVVVVU

SADA KHUSH RAHO

APKI YAH LINES

" Tu beti hai meri, maiN tere pas hi to rahuNga,
Kabhi saya kabhi maaNjhi ban,tere sath hi chaluNga..."


BAHUT HI ACHI LAGY

SATH DETE RAHE

APKI

DR SHAKUNTALA VYAS

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14th June 2010, 04:38 PM

Shakun didi:

Pranaam!

pita ji ko lekar aapne jo apne ehsaas bayaa.n kiye hai.n .. dil un ehsaaso.n mei.n Doob saa gayaa.. baDii hi gehrii soch ko bayaa.n karti hu'ii aapki ye rachana mujhe pasaNd aayii.n!

yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.n!

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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Shakun didi:

Pranaam!

pita ji ko lekar aapne jo apne ehsaas bayaa.n kiye hai.n .. dil un ehsaaso.n mei.n Doob saa gayaa.. baDii hi gehrii soch ko bayaa.n karti hu'ii aapki ye rachana mujhe pasaNd aayii.n!

yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.n!

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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19th June 2010, 11:20 AM

Bohat hi sundar rachna hai Shakuntala ji....yuhi likhti rahiye............




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