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khwabon me ek jahan - 23rd March 2014, 02:04 PM


khwabon me ek jahan hai
us jahan me ek ghar
us ghar me tum rahte ho
per fir bhi ajnabi se hi lagte ho
us ghar ke aage hai ek aasiyana
aye kaash us aasiyane me bhi ho kabhi-2 tumhara aana jana
bus isi khwaish ko dil me dabaye baithe hain
aur tumhe is dil se lagaye baithe hain
is intezaar me jindagi ke pal gujar rahe hain
ki tum kabhi to apne jharokhe se us aasiyane ko dekhoge
aur hame pehchaan kar apne dil ki awaaz se pukarogi
per naa tumne dekha kabhi is aasiyane ko
naa hi dil se pukara
per fir bhi hum karenge intezaar tumhara
   
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24th March 2014, 10:07 AM

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khwabon me ek jahan hai
us jahan me ek ghar
us ghar me tum rahte ho
per fir bhi ajnabi se hi lagte ho
us ghar ke aage hai ek aasiyana
aye kaash us aasiyane me bhi ho kabhi-2 tumhara aana jana
bus isi khwaish ko dil me dabaye baithe hain
aur tumhe is dil se lagaye baithe hain
is intezaar me jindagi ke pal gujar rahe hain
ki tum kabhi to apne jharokhe se us aasiyane ko dekhoge
aur hame pehchaan kar apne dil ki awaaz se pukarogi
per naa tumne dekha kabhi is aasiyane ko
naa hi dil se pukara
per fir bhi hum karenge intezaar tumhara

bahot hi ache aur khoobsurat ehsaas hain Ajit ji.... keep writing.

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khwabon me ek jahan hai
us jahan me ek ghar
us ghar me tum rahte ho
per fir bhi ajnabi se hi lagte ho
us ghar ke aage hai ek aasiyana
aye kaash us aasiyane me bhi ho kabhi-2 tumhara aana jana
bus isi khwaish ko dil me dabaye baithe hain
aur tumhe is dil se lagaye baithe hain
is intezaar me jindagi ke pal gujar rahe hain
ki tum kabhi to apne jharokhe se us aasiyane ko dekhoge
aur hame pehchaan kar apne dil ki awaaz se pukarogi
per naa tumne dekha kabhi is aasiyane ko
naa hi dil se pukara
per fir bhi hum karenge intezaar tumhara
bahot hi umda soch, Ajitji...................
Bas unhi aate rahen aur mehfil ko aapke qalaam se rubaroo karte rahen...

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Gud Effort Ajith Ji...............................<,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,!!!!!

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khwabon me ek jahan hai
us jahan me ek ghar
us ghar me tum rahte ho
per fir bhi ajnabi se hi lagte ho
us ghar ke aage hai ek aasiyana
aye kaash us aasiyane me bhi ho kabhi-2 tumhara aana jana
bus isi khwaish ko dil me dabaye baithe hain
aur tumhe is dil se lagaye baithe hain
is intezaar me jindagi ke pal gujar rahe hain
ki tum kabhi to apne jharokhe se us aasiyane ko dekhoge
aur hame pehchaan kar apne dil ki awaaz se pukarogi
per naa tumne dekha kabhi is aasiyane ko
naa hi dil se pukara
per fir bhi hum karenge intezaar tumhara
   
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