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meri gudiya tujhme mujhko.. - 30th October 2014, 01:16 PM

Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..

Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar hee sachcha hai ek,sachcha ye apnapan hai..

Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda hai tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...

Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaati ho
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...

Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata hai Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me khush hota mera ye man hai...

Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...

Jeevan me sangeet ghula aur,sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...

Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar hee sachcha hai ek ,sachcha ye apnapan hai...



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30th October 2014, 04:19 PM

wahh! wahh! waah! Madhu jee...

kia baat hai .... bohat umdaaH kalaam aur woh bhii apni piyaari isi gudiya ke naam..
beeti ke pyaar meiN kahe alfaaz dil chuu gaye...
tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik haiN...

Meri taraf bohat sii daad qabool kejiye...is haseeN kaawish ke liye...

Likhte rahiye,

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30th October 2014, 04:36 PM

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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..

Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..

Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...

Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...

Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...

Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...

Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...

Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...


waaahh madhu saahiba kyaa kahne aapki is kavitaa ke..... khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee huee ek dil ko choo lene waali kavitaa likhi hai aapne..... sach me man moh liyaa isne hamaaraa....... bahot saari daad pesh karta hoon aapko is kavita ke liye.... aati rahiye likhtii rahiye

Aur aapki gudiyaa ko hamaari taraf se dher saara pyaaaaar...

Shaad....


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Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...

waaah waah bahut hi sundar........
aisaa lagtaa hai jaise dil nikaal kar rakh diyaa ho rachnaa meiN ........
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wahh! wahh! waah! Madhu jee...

kia baat hai .... bohat umdaaH kalaam aur woh bhii apni piyaari isi gudiya ke naam..
beeti ke pyaar meiN kahe alfaaz dil chuu gaye...
tamaam ashaar aik se bhaD kar aik haiN...

Meri taraf bohat sii daad qabool kejiye...is haseeN kaawish ke liye...

Likhte rahiye,

Regards,
Apki tareef ki shukraguzar hoon hassan ji...bachchon k liye pyaar ka koi paimana to nhi hota fir bhi kuch jazbaton ko alfazon me pirone ki koshish ki.....



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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..

Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..

Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...

Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...

Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...

Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...

Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...

Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
Wow... I just read this to my daughter and she is smiling.

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Madhu ji ...
bahut hi sachche aur pyare lage aap ke jazbaat aur ehsaas apni bachchi ke liye ..

yun hi likhte rahiye ..

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waaahh madhu saahiba kyaa kahne aapki is kavitaa ke..... khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee huee ek dil ko choo lene waali kavitaa likhi hai aapne..... sach me man moh liyaa isne hamaaraa....... bahot saari daad pesh karta hoon aapko is kavita ke liye.... aati rahiye likhtii rahiye

Aur aapki gudiyaa ko hamaari taraf se dher saara pyaaaaar...

Shaad....
Dhanyawaad shaad ji..apko meri kavita pasand aayi.khushi huyi jaankar.. apne meri beti ke liye jo sneh vyakt kiya uske liye apki abhari hoon.



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Dear Madhu, bahut pyara likha hai, pyara hota Bhi kyu na...beti par jo likha hai
Betiyaa to hoti hi etni pyari hai ki enke bare mein sochne se hi chehre par muskaan aa jati hai. Ghar ki ronak hoti hai betiyaa...dil ka sakoon hoti hai betiyaa....emotional ho rhi hu ab mai

Bhagwan aapki bitiya ko Sada khush rakhe, usko zamane ki har khushi miley.

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Bohut badhiya Madhuji

Kalam bada dumdaar likha hai aapne.....mubarak ho.

Likhte rahiye aur hamen yun hi apne kalam se mehzooz karte rahiye.

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waaah waah bahut hi sundar........
aisaa lagtaa hai jaise dil nikaal kar rakh diyaa ho rachnaa meiN ........
bhagwaan aapki beti ko khushiyaaN hi khushiyaaN de
aapke ashirwAad ke liye abhari hoon..Dhanyawaad rajeev ji..
aate rahein...
khush rahein..



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Stay happy...



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Madhu jee aapki kavita padke dil ko bahut sukoon phuncha.....very nice lyrics....



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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..

Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..

Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...

Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...

Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...

Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...

Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...

Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...
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yun hi likhte rahiye ..

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Ek kavita apni beti ke naam..

Meri gudiya Tujhme mujhko,dikhta Apna bhachpan hai...
tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai..

Is jhoothi duniya me ek,Teri muskaan hi sachchi hai..
Mere dil ka tukda tu,Tu hi dil ki dhadkan hai...

Machal machal ke zid karke,Apni baatein manwaana
Rone ki awaaz goonjti,Nahi kanhi soonapan hai...

Tu hansti hai to jaise,khil jata Ye dil mera..
Tere naaz uthane me,khush hota mera man hai...

Kabhi sataye maa ko khoob,Natkhat muskaan lubhati hai..
Dooje pal mera man mohe,jo tera bholapan hai...

Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...

Meri gudiya tujhme mujhko,Dikhta apna bachpan hai.....
Tera pyaar ek sachcha,sachcha ye apnapan hai...

wah bahut sunder bachon ke bholapan sahaj swabhaav nishchhal man me sakshaat prabhu darshan hai
dil ko chhoo gayee yeh rachna
duaon ke saath

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Dear Madhu, bahut pyara likha hai, pyara hota Bhi kyu na...beti par jo likha hai
Betiyaa to hoti hi etni pyari hai ki enke bare mein sochne se hi chehre par muskaan aa jati hai. Ghar ki ronak hoti hai betiyaa...dil ka sakoon hoti hai betiyaa....emotional ho rhi hu ab mai

Bhagwan aapki bitiya ko Sada khush rakhe, usko zamane ki har khushi miley.

Bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath
Jee dii betiya to khuda ki di huyi saugat hoti hain...bahut masoom bahut pyari..jaise jaise vo badi ho rahi hai..usme khud ko badhte huye dekhti hoon main.....

Aapke asheerwaad aur pyaar ke liye bahut dhanywaad di...
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Bohut badhiya Madhuji

Kalam bada dumdaar likha hai aapne.....mubarak ho.

Likhte rahiye aur hamen yun hi apne kalam se mehzooz karte rahiye.

Mujeeb Parwaaz.
ji bahut shukriya mujeeb sahab....
ummeed hai aage bhi apka sath milta rahega...



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Jeevan me sangeet ghula,Sanwar gaya ye ghar mera..
Nahne kadam badati jab tu,Karti payal chan-chan hai...

Wah Madhu jiii wah,,, A khyalath bas ek maa hi k mann me aa sakte hain,,, bahot khoob
Shukriya sabhat khan ji......
Kahaan hain aajkal aap....ummeed hai jald jee apko padhne ka mauka milega ..
apna khayal rakhein...
Aate rahein...



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Madhu jee

Namaste
dil ko bahot achchha lagaa aapki yeh koshish ko padh kar...dil se daad

Aapka

Dhaval
Aapke dil ko achcha laga...khushi huyi jankar.....
Shukriya aapke sath ka..

Aate rahiyega...

Take care ..
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Madhu jee aapki kavita padke dil ko bahut sukoon phuncha.....very nice lyrics....
Thank you aru ji.........

Aate rahiyega. ........

Takecare.
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Bahut khoob madhu ji, chaliye aapki interview ke zariye meri nazar mein aapki yeh rachnaa aayi. Nacheez ki daad qubool farmiYeGaa
Shukriya mast ji............

Bas aapki nazar e inayat yun hee bani rahe yahi chahti hain ham....

Khush rahiye....

Aate rahiye....

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wah bahut sunder bachon ke bholapan sahaj swabhaav nishchhal man me sakshaat prabhu darshan hai
dil ko chhoo gayee yeh rachna
duaon ke saath

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