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[B] ek haseen bhool [/B] - 5th December 2009, 02:07 PM
Adawat ke sholon me jab jalte the yaaron,
Khabar na thi wo bhi humpe marte the yaron.

Abki jo tanhaai hai wo pahle na hua karti thi,
Shabe-gham chaand taare to nikalte the yaaron.

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jab na raha kuch dil me to kyon aas lagaate ho,
Aise bhi kuch kalaam likhe ki log marte the yaaron.

Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.
   
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Adawat ke sholon me jab jalte the yaaron,
Khabar na thi wo bhi humpe marte the yaron.

Abki jo tanhaai hai wo pahle na hua karti thi,
Shabe-gham chaand taare to nikalte the yaaron.

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jab na raha kuch dil me to kyon aas lagaate ho,
Aise bhi kuch kalaam likhe ki log marte the yaaron.

Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.



Sameer Bhai.............aaapki gazal padkar jo phela lafz jubaaN par aaya woh hai....WAH.........kya khoob likha hai.

har sher dil ke kareeb raha....sahi baat hai ki humko aapse shikayat to thi ki aapki kalam khamosh kyuN hai...aapne apni safai mein etni khoob gazal kah di, ab to hum aapse shikayat karte raha kareNge...badle mein hume nayaab gazal padne ko milla karegi

aapki kalam kabhi khamosh na ho.....yeh hi dua hai hamari, aur bhagwaan aapki kalam ko chalte rahne ka ashirwaad deN.

bazm meiN aapki gazal ne chaar chaand laga diye haiN
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Shaad Ji...Aadaab ! aapka khayal bahut acha laga mujhe....

yeh sher khaas pasand aaya....

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

daad kabul kare....

likhte rahiye...
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Adawat ke sholon me jab jalte the yaaron,
Khabar na thi wo bhi humpe marte the yaron.

Abki jo tanhaai hai wo pahle na hua karti thi,
Shabe-gham chaand taare to nikalte the yaaron.

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jab na raha kuch dil me to kyon aas lagaate ho,
Aise bhi kuch kalaam likhe ki log marte the yaaron.

Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.
Sameer Bhai salam.........

Bhai aap to humare hi naamwale hai, aapki tarif karun to apni hi lagengi......
Behad khoobsurat gazal kahi hai aapne sabhi sher kafi achche hai, but highlighted sher bahut khoob lage...... Daad kabool kijiye....

Keep writting.......
Khush rahiye,
Khuda Hafez.......
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Sameer Bhai.............aaapki gazal padkar jo phela lafz jubaaN par aaya woh hai....WAH.........kya khoob likha hai.

har sher dil ke kareeb raha....sahi baat hai ki humko aapse shikayat to thi ki aapki kalam khamosh kyuN hai...aapne apni safai mein etni khoob gazal kah di, ab to hum aapse shikayat karte raha kareNge...badle mein hume nayaab gazal padne ko milla karegi

aapki kalam kabhi khamosh na ho.....yeh hi dua hai hamari, aur bhagwaan aapki kalam ko chalte rahne ka ashirwaad deN.

bazm meiN aapki gazal ne chaar chaand laga diye haiN
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aate raha kijiye, accha laga aapko padna kush rahiye.

duao.n ke saath

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aati rahiega.. duaaon me yaad rakhen.
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naresh bhai aadaab.. aaj bahot accha laga aapko apni post par pake.
aap ke reply padhke man ko bahot sukoon hasil hua hai.
aate rahie aur aapki besh keemti raayon se hame nawazte rahen.

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Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.



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janab khwahish kahoon ya sameer/.. aadaab arz hai.
aaapne agar is ada se hamara istaqbaal kiya to sar aankhon me huzoor...
agli baar se hume aur bhi zyada mehnat karni hogi lagta hai .. kyonki ab isse aapko aur bhi zyadaa tareef karne ka mauka milegaa.. sahi kaha na bhai

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Adawat ke sholon me jab jalte the yaaron,
Khabar na thi wo bhi humpe marte the yaron.

Abki jo tanhaai hai wo pahle na hua karti thi,
Shabe-gham chaand taare to nikalte the yaaron.

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jab na raha kuch dil me to kyon aas lagaate ho,
Aise bhi kuch kalaam likhe ki log marte the yaaron.

Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.

Shaad,
wahhhhhhhhh..... kya baat hai janab... aapke lafzon me ek ajeeb si kashish hai... ye kashish hume aapki mehfil me khich lati hai.. ehsaason se sarabor aapke lafzon ne to hamara dil chhu liya... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko dilkash banate rahiye... khush rahiye....

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Adawat ke sholon me jab jalte the yaaron,
Khabar na thi wo bhi humpe marte the yaron.

Abki jo tanhaai hai wo pahle na hua karti thi,
Shabe-gham chaand taare to nikalte the yaaron.

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jab na raha kuch dil me to kyon aas lagaate ho,
Aise bhi kuch kalaam likhe ki log marte the yaaron.

Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.

shaad bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob dad dil se hai kubul karen aise hi likhte rahe aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahen

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wahhhhhhhhh..... kya baat hai janab... aapke lafzon me ek ajeeb si kashish hai... ye kashish hume aapki mehfil me khich lati hai.. ehsaason se sarabor aapke lafzon ne to hamara dil chhu liya... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko dilkash banate rahiye... khush rahiye....
pyari lamha,

Ummeed karta hoon khush hogi... aaj sdc pe aate hi is purani gazal pe aapke commets padhe aur aapko khushi hui jaankar accha laga.. aapne is layak samjha hamri khushnasebi hai... aur hausla afzaai ka shukriya.. aati raha karen
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shaad bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob dad dil se hai kubul karen aise hi likhte rahe aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahen

ishq bhai ko shaad ka aadaab.. aap ki taraf se daad ka behad shukriya. aate rahiega.. aap sabhi ke saath ka muntazir.
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Bohat khoob Sameer Saheb...........kuch apne se halaat nazar aaye is sher me

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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Bohat khoob Sameer Saheb...........kuch apne se halaat nazar aaye is sher me

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.
Tahreef laane ke liye behad shukriya sajid saahab.. ama jab ek hi jagah se dono talluq rakhte hain .. ek jaise hi jazbaat hain to halaat khud bakhud ek jaise ho jaate hain... aapko pasand aaya jaankaar khushi hui aate jate raha karen..
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dard ki baate na hi kare to accha hai!!! dard bada bedard hai....dard de jata hai....

acchi lagi ye aada aapki...dard ki kushi ka nasha badi haseen rahi.....

daad kabool kare janab....

aur aate raha kijiye...dard me jeena keval aapko hi nahi hume bhi accha lagta hai.....is bahane kuch guftagu hi ho jayegi...

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Shaad Sahib,,

Wah Janab, aap nay kia khoob likha hai...

Daad hi daad.....

DuaooN k saath,,

Faqat,,

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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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dard ki baate na hi kare to accha hai!!! dard bada bedard hai....dard de jata hai....

acchi lagi ye aada aapki...dard ki kushi ka nasha badi haseen rahi.....

daad kabool kare janab....

aur aate raha kijiye...dard me jeena keval aapko hi nahi hume bhi accha lagta hai.....is bahane kuch guftagu hi ho jayegi...

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Shaad Sahib,,

Wah Janab, aap nay kia khoob likha hai...

Daad hi daad.....

DuaooN k saath,,

Faqat,,
pyare hassan bhaai ko shaad ka aadab. aaapne pasand kiya yahi hamari khushnaseebi hai.. daad khaj ke liye behad shukriya.. aate raha karen
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Adawat ke sholon me jab jalte the yaaron,
Khabar na thi wo bhi humpe marte the yaron.

Abki jo tanhaai hai wo pahle na hua karti thi,
Shabe-gham chaand taare to nikalte the yaaron.

-- Waah kyaa baat hai... khoobsoorat bayaani

Karte hain wo shiqayat teri kalam kyon khamosh hai
Koun batae tab lafz nahi jazbaat nikalte the yaaron.

Jab na raha kuch dil me to kyon aas lagaate ho,
Aise bhi kuch kalaam likhe ki log marte the yaaron.

-- bahut khoob...

Na rakhun shiqva kisi se na karun shiqayat magar,
Wo kyon-kar har baat me mera zikr karte the yaaron.

Tu kyon us lamhe ko dil se lagae baitha hai "shaad"
Wo to pahle se hi ise,ek haseen bhul kahte the yaaron.

----- Behad khoobsoorat...pehla sher khaaskar pasand aaya mujhe...

Sameer dost,

Aaj ek arse baad tumhe padha aur padhkar dil khush ho gaya. Behad asarsdaar tareeke se dil ke ehsaas bayaan kiye hain tumne... meri daad kubool karna... yun hi likhte raho... apna khayal rakhna....

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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