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Result Of Gtm "Dec 09" -
16th January 2010, 01:01 PM
Aaadaab DostoN,
Lijiye is mahine ke winner ka naam announce kiye dete haiN,..Is mahine sab se zyada votes se Hassan saheb ne jeet haasil karli hai.. Hassan saheb aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho, kyunki is baar ke vijeta aap haiN, aapki ghazal ko sabse zyada votes miley haiN, waise is baar muqabla kuch mushkil tha, aap sabhi ne bahut hi umda likha hai, humeiN sabhi ki ghazaleiN behad pasand aayee, par winner tou votes se hi announce hona hota hai ,tou is baar winner ka khitaab Hassan saheb ko hi jata hai. Hassan saheb ko sdc join kiye huye, abhi kuch der pehle ki hi baat hai,aur aaj aapko is Muqaam per dekh ker bohat hi hairani ke saath khushi bhi ho rahi hai... Ek proverb suna tha "slow and steady wins the race"...janaab aapne tou is proverb ko hi disprove kar diya..."one need not be slow and steady to win the race"...  .. Ek baar phir se tah-e-dil se mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.... DostoN, aap ke support ke liye maiN aap sab ki shukrguzaar huuN .. Chaliye sab ke naam bata deti hooN... 1. Woh mera naam lete hai by Mast (anu ji)...votes ( 7 ) 2. Main too bhakt banaa raam tera by Nihar ji...votes ( 3 ) 3. Mandir bane ya maszid kayam uska naam rahe by Janumanu (vikas) ji ... votes ( 14 ) 4. Gham-e-tanhai mere naam kar diya by Praneeta ...votes ( 4 ) 5. Tere naam se juda mere naam ka karwa.n, by Hasrat... votes ( 5 ) 6. Khaak se bana, khaak hi tera anjaam hoga, by Naadaan jii ... votes ( 5 ) 7.Har ek nazar mai ishq ka, ehtraam chaahiye by Noor_noor(Aslam saheb)... votes ( 7 ) 8.AshQ aankhoN se tapak pade sar-e-shaam dheere dheere by Hassan saheb... votes ( 20 ) 9. Zehmat na ki gawaaara, dua-o-salaam ki by Zidd ji ...votes ( 14 ).. Aur yeh rahi winner ki ghazal.... AshQ aankhoN se tapak pade sar-e-shaam* dheere dheere atish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam* dheere dheere nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz nikamma yeh dil ho gaya un ka ghulaam* dheere dheere dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam* dheere dheere hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat! woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam* dheere dheere jaahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah* guzeen khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam* dheere dheere Ummid hai "Gtm" me sabhi dost yooN hi shamil hote rahenge........! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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16th January 2010, 01:58 PM
Mubarak ho bhayee
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16th January 2010, 05:14 PM
Mubarak Ho Hassan Bhai,
But yeh karishma kuch samjh nahi aaya........  kal is waqt tak main yahan tha to aap, ek vote piche chal rahe the, aur raato raat aapne bazi marli...... kya siyaasi chal chal diye janab.......  
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16th January 2010, 05:47 PM
Hassan aapko bhut bhut mubarak ho is maah ka GTM "Dec.2009" hone par, bhut bhut mubarak ho you.n hi likhte rahiye,
aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th January 2010, 06:03 PM
hassan bhai....aapko bahut bahut badhai....aapki i's jeet par..
bahut achha likha hai aapne... This ghazal deserved to win....congrats, once again. take care... vikram... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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16th January 2010, 06:59 PM
Mubarak ho Hasan bhai
aaise hi likhte rahiye apka dost nihar Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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16th January 2010, 09:07 PM
Meri nazar mai Zidd Saahab aap winner hai .. aur aapki ghazal jeet ka haq rakhti thi ... aur ek baat mai saaf karna chahunga apni jaanib se... ki aur koi ghazal aapke aas paas bhi nahi dikhai deti... meri taraf se aapko mubarakbaad....
Phir bhi hassan ne Hakim taur pe muqabila jeeta hai .. to bas meri janib se unke liye sirf badhai hai .. aapko mubaraq ho... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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16th January 2010, 09:51 PM
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Boht boht shukria.... Haan jaa party due rahi....... Jahan kahiye, jo kahiye,,, ho jaye ga  Stay Happy,, Ur brother,,, Quote:
Boht boht shukriya.... Bas bhai Allah ka karam hai... Aur kia kahooN.... Itni izzat milne per khud bhi hairaan hooN...... Take care, Ur brother,,, Quote:
Aslam Bhai,, Teh-e-dil se shukarguzaar hooN, Aur aap ka saath aur piyaar milta rahe yahi umeed rahe gi hamesha ...... Regardz,, Quote:
Zaroori nahi k jo ghazal sab ko achi lage woh aap ko bhi achi lage... hur kisi ki soch alag, nazariya alag... shayed aap k hisaab se meri ghazal aap k mayaar per poori nahi utri.... Agar mujh se pocha jaye to main best ghazal "Vikaas Jii" ki maanta hooN.... Lekin haqeeqt ko bhi jhutlayaa nahi jaa sakta k jo sab ki nazrooN ko pasand aaye,,, jeet ussi "koshish" ki hi hoti hai.... Behrhaal,, aap ki taraf se milne wali mubaarak-baad sir aankhooN per.... Regardz,, Quote:
Dear Nihar,, Aap ka boht boht shukriya janab... Boht khushi hui aap ko yahan dekh kar.... Stay Happy Regardz,, Quote:
Boht boht shukriya... Aap ki mubaarik-baad paa kar boht khushi hui,, Stay Happy, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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16th January 2010, 10:33 PM
Hassan Bhaai ......Bahut Bahut Mubarak Aur Badhaai .... !
Aapki Jeet se Jaha ek aur Khushi hai... Wahi Aisha bhi laga... Chamatkaar ko Namashkaar..... Aise hi kamiyaab bane rahen... aur likhten rahen... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th January 2010, 10:45 PM
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Aapki baat 100 feesdi sahi hai hai jise maiN maanta hun .. par aapne ek baat to dekhi hi nahi .. maine ye aapke liye nahi likha tha saahab .. ye sab zidd saahab ke liye likha tha maine... phir bhi aapne reply kiya hai to bata deta huN .. aap nazroN ki kasauti se chalte hai .. aur maiN takneek ko uper rakhta huN .. baat ghazal of the month ki ho rahi hai .. tehreer of the month kee nahi ... ho sakta hai aapka ilm mere ilm se jyada ho .. is baat se inkaar nahi kiya jaa sakta... phir bhi aap hi ki baat ko saaf karta huN ki mujhe bhi vikas jee ki ghazal pasand hai .. isi liye mera vote unko bhi hai ... aur maine aapko alag se mubarakbaad ata farmayi hai .. kyuNki aap uske haqdaar hai .. kyuNki aap ba qaida muqabila jeet chuke hai .. aap sirf us baat pe dhyaan dete to mujhe lagta hai wo jyada behtar lagta .. aur aaj naam isliye bhi khole gaye hai ki pata chal sake kisne kya likha tha.. aur jo jisko chahe mubarakbaad de sake ... khuda aapko khushi ata farmaaye .. apna khyaal rakhen .. aur aate rahe .. aur koi talkh mijaazi mujhse hui ho to uske liye maz'rat chahunga Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th January 2010, 11:22 AM
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Raaz ki Baat keh doon tou Janey mehfil mein phir kya ho........???? hehehehe...... I love creating nuisance....... |
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16th January 2010, 09:41 PM
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Aap ka teh-e-dil se mashkoor hooN, Aur mujhe khud bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai ke waqai main "winner" ban gaya hooN...... aap ka proverb acha hai :- "one need not be slow and steady to win the race" I must say at this moment :- "HAPPY TO ME" Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th January 2010, 12:22 PM
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HSN bhai kya aap sach meiN KHUSH haiN es jeet par ??????? par meri nazar meiN yeh JEET nahi HAAR hai JANUMANU aur ZIDD saheb asal winner haiN...meri taraf se aap dono ko dil se mubarakbaad..... aur ZAINY GTM ki saalgirh ki tumhe aur GTM join karne wale har member ko mubarakbaad. tumne bahut acchi tarah handle kiya hai es thread ko...weldone. pyar aur duao.n ke saath dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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17th January 2010, 10:06 AM
Hassan bhaa'ii aur sabhee dostoN ko bahot bahot mubaaraQbaad .. aap sabhee dostoN ne bahot hi mehnat ki hai apnii koShiSh par.. aur Ghazal of the month ko kaamyaab banaane meN..!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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17th January 2010, 04:33 PM
congrats hassan bhai....
suna hai aap winner ban gaye ho fir to party banti hai meri.. koi jaadoo tona kiya hai kya jo aapko itne votes mile hain waise itni achi ghazal likhi kaise..mujhe tricks do...shayad main bhi gtm me participate karne layak likh sakun.... ist nahi to last to aa hi jaunga... ab to aap bhi ek recognised shayar ban gaye ho to aap humein bhi ghazal likhna sikhayenge na... baaki baatein baad me pehle meri party do... warna or baaki sabne bhi acha likha tha but winner to ek hi hota hai so keep it up frndzzz... khush rahiye rabb raakha vicky |
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18th January 2010, 12:27 PM
Assalam o Alaikum - 15th January 2010, 09:15 AM
Dear Baqs, I want ur support..... coz some un-seen people i think mods do not want that I win the GTM. As u see my ghazal was very ahead from amongst, now u can see other's are going away...with fake ids likhe mehra126 etc... I want ur support this time bro, plz vote for me and also ask "Nazneen" to do so:- http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68326 Title: AshQ aankhoN se tapak pade sar-e-shaam dheere dheere Ur favourable response is highly needed.... time kam hai jaldi kuch karo.....  With sanguine hope, Regards *hSn* : paraStaar Yeh maiN kya dekh rahi huun Hassan saheb..??..aap jaise khabil shayar se aysi ummid nahi thi mujhe,..mods per is tarah ka ilzaam lagaana theek baat hai kya??...hamaari kisi se koi zaati dushmani tou nahi hai ke usay haraaye....yeh mehez ek ittefaq ki baat hai ke mods ke votes kisi ek ghazal ko mile, kyun ki woh ghazal meri nazar me behad acchi thi,shayed baqi mods ko bhi acchi lagi hogi...aapne tou is baat ko bahana hi bana liya, khud ko jitana ka...is tarah ke mails karke, members ke votes haasil karke,… haasil ki gayi jeet se kya aap waqay khush hain?....apne aap se yeh sawaal zarur kijiyega...kyun ki meri nazar me tou yeh jeet koi mayine nahi rakhti.... Mujhe shak tou tha ki raaton raat kaise aapko taqreeban 10-12 votes mil gaye per yaqeen bhi tha ke aap koi aysa kaam nahi karenge, bharosa tod diya aaj aapne mera...bohat afsos hua mujhe yeh post dekh ker... Agar aap yeh samajhte haiN ke zainy ko kuch pata nahi chalega tou yeh aapki bhool hai, har waqt meri nazar sdc per rehti hai, .... YahaaN kaun kaun kaise kaise khel khel raha hai, har baat ki khabar hai mujhe, ek poora group hai yeh, aur inka ek group leader bhi hai,yeh log Gtm ko tabah karne per tule haiN,samajh me nahi aata inka koi zameer bhi hai ya nahi...kaise itne saare log kisi ek insaan ke ungliyoN per nachta haiN, i dont understand , jab inhone apna alag se forum bana hi liya hai tou wahiN kyuN nahi khelte yeh sab khel, jo marzi me aaye karo wahaaN , yahaan kyun hamari naak me dam kiye huye haiN, Afsos tou is baat ka hai, ke yahaaN ke jaane maane reputed members bhi unke mails milne per, unke kahe members ko votes de raha haiN...maiN aaj aap sab se ek sawaal poochti huuN, jo kisi ke kehne per kisi ko bhi votes de rahe haiN, aapka zameer yeh baat kaise gaNwara kar raha hai,? kya aapko ek pal ke liye bhi yeh ehsaas nahi hota keh aap dusre masoom members ke saath nainsafi kar rahe haiN, jo raat din mehnat karke yahaaN hame apni ghazal bhej rahe haiN....dosti nibhana acchi baat hai, per ghalat logoN ka saath dena gunaah hai, yeh baat hamesha yaad rakhiye..how can u let someone use you….i don’t understand….kya aapko yeh ehsaas nahi ho raha hai ke koi aapko use kar raha hai??? Aaj poore sdc ke saamne maiN us group leader ko yeh warning deti huuN, ke woh khud aur uske group ke saare members,Gtm thread per hi aana chhod de aur is tarah ke mails kar kar ke apne dostoN ko jitaana chhod de,agar maine agle kisi bhi Gtm per , is saare group ko, kisi ek ghazal ko vote karte dekha, aur woh participant bhi usi group ka member hai, tou I promise, mai us ghazal ko hi neutralize kar dungi,aur jo member 2nd position per hai, usay winner declare karungi….bet on that….. Yeh mat samajhna ke zainy is helpless,woh aapka kuch nahi bigaad sakti, I can go any far to make Gtm a better place…maiN Gtm me hissa lene waale kisi bhi member ke saath na insafi nahi hone dungi… YahaaN log mujh per bharosa karke apni ghazaleiN bhehte haiN, maiN chup chaap baith ker tamasha nahi dekhugi,bohat karli aapne apni man maani, ab dekhna maiN kya kar sakti huuN... JUST WAIT AND WATCH..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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18th January 2010, 12:59 PM
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Is baar aapne Hassan ki gazal ko disqualify karke 2nd best (actually the best) ghazal ko winner declare kyu nahin kiya??? That creation deserves respect.... |
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18th January 2010, 05:48 PM
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Yeh bhi hoga......pehle zara Hassan saheb se sun tou leiN, unhe apni safaai me kya kehna hai.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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18th January 2010, 03:11 PM
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yeh kehte hue mujhe bura lag raha hai...lekin maine i's poll meiN vote kiya hai...aur meri vote bhi hassan saheb aapko hi gayee hai...lekin jab vote di thi tab maloom nahi tha ki yeh ghazal aapki hai.... aur yeh kehne ka haq bhi maiN isiliye rakhta hooN ki maine vote kiya tha... mujhe i's kaam par, i's soch par aur aisi jeet par taras aa raha hai... JEET....ka matlab hi nahi samjhte aap....mujhe sakht afsoos hai...i's se zyada kuch bhi nahi kehna...... Zainy ji badhiya ho agar aap ehsaas saheb ki baat pe gaur kareN.... shukriya...!!! Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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7th February 2010, 06:02 PM
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18th January 2010, 02:34 PM
hahahahahaha.. waise main us leader ko jaanta huN ... kyuNki soniya gandhi ko koun nahi jaanta
Aur haaN hasan.. itne sabke baad bhi tum mujhe jawaab de bhi kaise sakte ho itne eitbaar ke saath ... Aur Zainy sis ... GTM ke 1 saal hone pe tumhe goya dil se badhaai.. khuda kare ye kaarwaaN aise hi chalta rahe ...! Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th January 2010, 04:23 PM
Oh...... God! yaar yeh kya chal raha hai............
Kya Hasan Bhai, tum bhi is bazm mein aakar wohi kaam karne lage jo dil gawara nahi karta........ main bhi tab hi samajh gaya tha........ par mujhe ummid thi ke aap aisa nahi arenge, but aapne bhi bharosa tod diya aur mere woh dost jinhe main kai baar samjha chuka hun ke aisa karne se aapko kya hasil hua kuch pal ke liye khushi mili hogi per, ab yeh dard se aap ka dil kitna pasijega yeh aap hi janege............. Kahir main bhi un doston se yehi ilteja karunga ke aisi jeet na dil ko khushi deti hai aur na hi jeetne wale ko........... SO aap apni kalabazi dikhaker khud ko chota kar rahe hai bada nahi, meri nazar mein to bahut chote ho gaye aap log.......... Quote:
Achcha yeh yahan ki soniya gandhi ki baat ar rahe hai aap  ..........SIyaasi chal chalne aadat hia madam ki usse shayad baaz nahi aayengi woh........ Ummid karunga ke ab baaz aa jaye,
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18th January 2010, 05:16 PM
Koi mujhe bhi is Sonia Gandhi ka naam bata do yaar. Kaun hain ye mahanubhav????
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19th January 2010, 02:32 PM
Hassan bhaa'ii:
Adaab! sabhee dostoN ki baateN paRhii.. maiN aapse kuch nahiiN kehnaa chaahtaa ees mudde par.. bas yeh Khayaal haMeShaa apne dil meN raKhiye.ngaa.. Shayri.com sirf ek Shayri kii site nahiiN hum sab ke liye.. yeh aik Parivaar hai.. aur aap bhee aik zimmedar sadasya hai ees parivaar ke... yahaaN sabhee apne hai.n .. aap ko aur aapki liKhi huii koShiShoN ko sabhee dostoN ne haMeShaa saraahaa haii .. hausilaa'h afzA'ii kii hai aur aapko aur aapki koShiShoN ko apne dil meiN jaGah dii haii sabhee ne.. yeh hai Shaa'iiree Parivaar.. tou jaane-anjaane meiN hi saHeeH Gar aap se yeh Ghaltii ho ga'ii hai tou Khul ke keh deejiYe.. sabhee yahaaN apne haii... sab dost haii yahaaN ...har kisi se kabhee na kabhee Ghalti ho jaatee haii.. bas aap se darKhaaSt yahee haii ki Parivaar ko aur sabhee sadasyoN ko apnaa maan ke chaleN ! baaqee aapko jo Theek lageN! ummid kartaa huuN aap merii baat ko samjheNge dil se! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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20th January 2010, 11:27 PM
maiN koi aqal-e-kul nahi ke sirf sahi baat hi karooN,
khata ka putla hooN, khata'waar bhi ho sakta hooN... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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21st January 2010, 09:17 AM
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HSN bhai muje umeed thi ki aap apni galti ko mahsoos kareNge, galtiyaN ensaan.o se hi hoti hai, apni galti ko mahsoos karna bahut badi baat hai....shukriya par hsn bhai ainda galti ko repeat ko mat kijiyega, aap bahut accha likhtey hai, bhagwaaN aapki kalam ko aur nikhaar de.....! aur GTM mein poori imaandaari se hissa lete rahiye.....! duao.n ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st January 2010, 04:03 PM
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koi baat nahi, yeh to zindagi ka ek chhota sa pehlu hai... yahaN na to hmari saza ki ehmiyat hai, na hmari muafi ki... lekin aapki galati maan ne ki ehmiyat zaroor hai....sabse zyada aapke khud ke liye.... jeet haar ka koi matlab hi nahi is zindagi meiN...sikhna hi sab kuch hai... yehi ek cheez hai jo aapke, hmare aur sabke saath kafan dafan ke baad bhi rehegi... agar aapko waqi ehsaas hua hai to shayad aapne is galati se bahut bada inaam paya hai, jiska abhi pata bhi nahi chalega...lekin chalega zaroor... meri dua aapke saath hai.... All The Best...! vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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21st January 2010, 04:20 PM
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Mera maqsad sirf aapke zameer ko jagana tha, jo pura hua ....aapko pata hai aagey aapko kya karna hai.... Meri sabse guzarish hai ke ,is mudde ko yahin per khatm kar deiN.... Shukriyah... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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21st January 2010, 07:59 AM
der aayad... durust aayad ..............!!!
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21st January 2010, 12:30 PM
hassan saheb.....
meri nazar mai aaj aap jeete hai......kyuki aapne jis tarah beena baat ko bhadate hue apni bhool ko mana puri duniya ke saamne,ye koi bade dilwala hi kar pata hai...... aap ek acche shayar aur ek acche insaan hai......yehi bahut badi baat hai....aise hi rahiye.... dhnyavad aapka islyie ki aapse kuch sikhne ka mauka mila.... Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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21st January 2010, 12:42 PM
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I am proud of you, Hassan Ji...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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21st January 2010, 01:01 PM
Sorry Hassan,
Filhaal main aapko ek nek insaan nahin maanta Boss.. Galti saabit ho jaane ke baad usse accept karne mein koi badappan nahin hai... Main aisa tab maanta agar aap aisa karte hi nahin, ya fir jeetne ke baad sabko sachh batate ki aap kaise jeete aur deserving candidate ko uska haq dete... Ab jabki itna sab ho hi chuka hai, toh aap ek sahi insaan tab kehlayenge jab aap dobara aisi koi galti na karein.. Dohraye jaane par galti paap ban jaati hai... |
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22nd January 2010, 11:24 AM
koi bhi harf-e-muzammat kaargar us per nahi
zaalim apne ravayye ko badalta hi nahi ghair k ghar meiN basaa hai aur itna dheet hai ho chukaa be-aabroo lekin nikalta hi nahi.... Thank u so much, all my friends, for ur support and encouragement. Take care. Luv u All... Good Bye SDC.........!! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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22nd January 2010, 12:28 PM
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agar aapko dil se galati ka ehsaas hai to samjho koi baat hui hi nahi... kuch kalaamoN par aapke reply ki wait kar raha hooN....reply karenge to achha lagega....dost mat jao.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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22nd January 2010, 11:44 AM
Ye tera ghar hai ye mera ghar hai
chhod de tera jane ka faisla gar hai maine ki hai choriyaan ma se bahut hai bajah aur jiske liye jhuka sar hai ghar bas ek hi hai sanjha hai dost woh manzil khuda ka dar zeest to safar hai mere bhayee mere dost bhool ja na sab manega meri baat mohabat agar hai mai kaun hun jo kahu tu bura ya bhala na aaina saaz na meri paarkhi nazar hai buzurg humare lad chuke kitni hi ladaiaan ab hume laani nayee pyaar ki sahar hai Dont go plzz.... |
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22nd January 2010, 12:24 PM
Hassan bhaa'ii:
Aadaab! yeh riShtaa itnaa bhee kamzor nahiiN ki aapko yahaaN se jaanaa paReN... aapne hi to apne jawaab meiN kahaa haii kii sabhee dostoN ne aapkaa haMeshaa hauslaa'h baRhaayaa aapko haMeShaa support kiyaa .. aap apne dostoN se bahot pyaar bhee karte hai.n.. tou fir aap yeh faislaa kaise le sakte ho bhaa'ii? aap aik bahot hi achchhe Shaayar haii... aapki Shaa'iiree bazm meiN aage bhee sabhee paRhte raheN yahee KhaahiSh haii.. ummid kartaa huuN aap apnaa faislaa badal deNge... Parivaar se aapko haMeshaa pyaar aur saath milaa haii... aage yeh pyaar aur saath miltaa rahe.ngaa ! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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22nd January 2010, 03:38 PM
bazm ko mera aadaab,
Zainy ji agar aapko yaar ho to jab gtm shuru kiya jaa raha tha maine tabhi kaha tha ki aisa hona laazmi hai, kyunki maiN nahin maanta ki ehsashoN ko muqaable me utaarna chahiye...!! Fir mujhe doosri is baat pe hansi aa rahi hai ki galti karo aur fir khoti dhamkiyaan v do ki maiN jaa raha huN aur fir sab maauf karke bula v lenge, kab tak hum yuNhi raheNge, hume kuch sakht kadam uthaane padenge, jo v is tarah ki harkateN kare...!! newayz jaanta ki waise hi bahut mashoor huN talkh mizaazi ke liye ab aur kuch kahunga to fir shayad jyada ho jaaye, par haaN ab shayd high tym aa chuka hai ki hum thodi sakhti baratna shuru kareN...!! aur agar meri baaton ka kisi ko bura lage to us shakhs se maiN maaufi ka talabgaar rahuNga, mujhe nadaan samajh kar maauf kar dijiyega...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th February 2010, 07:45 PM
jo bhi hua aacha nahi tha ..lekin .. Zainy ji appreciate ur delication towards work , God BlessTake care ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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