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14th March 2014, 08:56 PM
Sukanya ji
aapki rachna ka pravah kabile tareef tha ..bahut achi tarah
se bayan kiya aapne tasveer ka safar...Goid effort indeed.


aur Mere pyare chote Nawab of Bihar
Ashok bhai aap itne sanjeeda likhte hain ,maine socha na tha.

Bahut ache

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15th March 2014, 09:49 AM
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aapki rachna ka pravah kabile tareef tha ..bahut achi tarah
se bayan kiya aapne tasveer ka safar...Goid effort indeed.

aur Mere pyare chote Nawab of Bihar
Ashok bhai aap itne sanjeeda likhte hain ,maine socha na tha.

Bahut ache

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Sanjay Ji

Shukriya mere rachna ko sarahne ke liye....aapki rachna bhi kabeel-e-tareef thi.....Aapki rachna ki yeh lines mughey behad pasand aayi......

Tinka tinka jor kar bari shiddat se banaya tha ek Ghonsla ,
Ur gaye sab panchi mujhe tanha chorke , is baat ko sweekar lun.

Jab Zindagi ki saanjh mein ab saya hi mera saathi hai bas ,
Na dagmagun ek pal , apni nayiya ki khud khevan har banu

Well done work of poetry....

We must support the journey started by shad and aru......keep up the good work......

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15th March 2014, 08:39 AM
tik tik tik tik....karte karte waqt beet jaata hai aur pata hee nahin chalta.....dekhiye na fir se winner announce karne ka waqt bhi aa gaya...
Waise abki baar mods team ko thodi pareshaani hui winner choose karne mein...kyonki saare participants ne kalam tod dee thi likhne mein...
But winner must be only one.....
To dil thaam ke baithiye
And the award goes to....

SUKANYA JEE...

Very very congratulations sukanya jee...


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Congratulations! Sukanyaji.........
Sahi me aapkee rachna qabile daad thee....


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Thanks - 15th March 2014, 09:21 AM
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Congratulations! Sukanyaji.........
Sahi me aapkee rachna qabile daad thee....
Thanks aadeil...

Tumhari Rachna ki kuch lines jo mughey bahut pasand aayi

chaltee rahee ghadee kee tarah zindagee meree
bakee bache yahaan pe kuchh dam azaab ke


Khoobsurat rachna...daad Kabul karna...

God bless you.

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Thanks aadeil...

Tumhari Rachna ki kuch lines jo mughey bahut pasand aayi

chaltee rahee ghadee kee tarah zindagee meree
bakee bache yahaan pe kuchh dam azaab ke


Khoobsurat rachna...daad Kabul karna...

God bless you.

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bas aate rahiye aur yun hi huasla bahdhate rahe.n...........


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tik tik tik tik....karte karte waqt beet jaata hai aur pata hee nahin chalta.....dekhiye na fir se winner announce karne ka waqt bhi aa gaya...
Waise abki baar mods team ko thodi pareshaani hui winner choose karne mein...kyonki saare participants ne kalam tod dee thi likhne mein...
But winner must be only one.....
To dil thaam ke baithiye
And the award goes to....

SUKANYA JEE...

Very very congratulations sukanya jee...
sukanya didi bahot bahot mubaarawbaad dil ko chhu gayi aapki rachna

aapka

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aapka

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Kaise ho.......Thanks....dil ko chuu gayi rachna ...chalo maine apni rachna ki aakhiri line mein poocha tha kya kuch aser choda mere rachna ne....kuch asar to chod gayi.....acha laga after a long time participated in such initiative on shayri.com....mughey yaad hay almost 5-6 years back aise kisey initiative mein participate kiya tha shayri.com par...chalo waqt beet jata hay par karvaan chalta rehta hay.U too keep writing

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dear all hppy holi to yu nd to yur full fmily.. - 17th March 2014, 08:46 AM
SHAAD :: sir ji bahut bahut sukriya..


ARU :: sukriya aru bhai..


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...: CONGRRRRRRTTTT SUKANYA JI :...
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15th March 2014, 09:07 AM
aapko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad Sukanyaa dee..... waaqai agar kisii kalaam ne us tasweer ke saath insaaf kiyaa to aapki hi shaayri thii.... meri taraf se aapko bahot shubhkaamnaaen...

Duaaon me yaad rakhiyega....

baaki members ke liye bhi main kahnaa chahungaa ke aap sab ne waaqai behad se bahd khoob taraah se is muqaable me hissa liyaa aur jaisaa ke mere faazil dost aru kah rahe hain kalam todd dee... beshaq sach kah rahe hain

sabhi members ko meri taraf se bahot bahot badhaaiyaan... and better luck next time, kyonki koi nahi jaantaa kab kiski kalam jaadu dikhaa de.... to guys mashk karte rahen, mehnat jaari rakkhen.... kya pataa agle khushnaseeb aap hon.... all the best


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Thanks - 15th March 2014, 09:18 AM
Thanks Aru

Aaj to subah subah Award Mil gaya ..Arrey yeh kya hua ...Lagta hay mere rachna kuch asar chod gayi dilon par......Iss rachna ko likhte huay maine khud to uss tasveer ki jagah rakh socha ki main uss waqt kya soch rahi honge....aur kalam nikal gaya apni udaan par.......competition ka soch nahin likhi this rachna........I wanted to support the initiative started by you and Shaad Congratulations to both of you too...who are doing justice to this initiative ....well done.......Iss forum mein likhe sari rachna itni khoobsurat hay....sabki tareef mein shayad shabd kum ho jaein....will reply to each one by one......

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aapko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad Sukanyaa dee..... waaqai agar kisii kalaam ne us tasweer ke saath insaaf kiyaa to aapki hi shaayri thii.... meri taraf se aapko bahot shubhkaamnaaen...

Duaaon me yaad rakhiyega....

baaki members ke liye bhi main kahnaa chahungaa ke aap sab ne waaqai behad se bahd khoob taraah se is muqaable me hissa liyaa aur jaisaa ke mere faazil dost aru kah rahe hain kalam todd dee... beshaq sach kah rahe hain

sabhi members ko meri taraf se bahot bahot badhaaiyaan... and better luck next time, kyonki koi nahi jaantaa kab kiski kalam jaadu dikhaa de.... to guys mashk karte rahen, mehnat jaari rakkhen.... kya pataa agle khushnaseeb aap hon.... all the best

Shaad....
Dear Shaad

Thanks for so much appreciation...yeh rachna to award le gayi ...socha na tha ..iss tasveer ko dekh main to ek lambi udaan par nikal gayi thi...aur yeh rachna likh di issey udaan par....I must congratulate all the people who have written commendable poetries....Shaad your initiative is becoming a success...keep up the good work...Duaon mein kya hamesha yaad rakhaingey... u are a great poet...keep writing...

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Sukanya ji...dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye, bahut accha lga aapko winner dekh kar aur arse baad aapko hazir dekh kar. khush rahiye



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Sukanya ji...dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye, bahut accha lga aapko winner dekh kar aur arse baad aapko hazir dekh kar. khush rahiye


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Kaise hain aap?Aap ki Mubarakbad mere liye bahut khaas hay....Arson baad hazir hui ..Sorry ...Chalo abb koshish karungi aati rahun......It's so nice to see u....aap bhi aaj kal bahut kum likhti hain...I miss ur poetry even...asha karungi jaldi aapki ek khoobsurat rachna parhne ko milegi ...Apna khyal rakhiyega.....Kal holi hay socha aapko yahin wish kar duun.....Happy Holi

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Thanks for the beautiful congratulations....kahan se dhonda itna sundar mubarakbad aur flower....waise I know poets are creative people.....It's so nice....waqt badal jata hay....waqt beet jata hay...par shayri.com aaj bhi waisa hi lagta jaisa kuch salon pehle lagta tha....God bless you.

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