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behatar hai k..... - 17th May 2009, 01:13 AM
pad k kuj aapne geet main purane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane.
sochia k ajj tainu fer likh lva,
par akhar ni jud'de maitho marjane.

shayeri da safar sada kadam hai chaar.
aina uccha haini mera ta miyaar.
tainu likhu koi karma wala,
sade hisse reh ju sada ikpasad pyar.
duava sadia e lag jan,sda khushiyaan tu maane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane....

langhde waqt nu rok ni sakda.
nal waqt de turna aaukha.
mera tere piche aauna aaukha.
tera hun par mudna aaukha.
behtar hai k bhul jayiye "deep" guzre zmaane...
   
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just hune likhia ji raat de 1.30 vje... pta ni keho ja likhia gya..reply kario..galtia dasio
   
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17th May 2009, 08:34 AM
pad k kuj aapne geet main purane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane.
sochia k ajj tainu fer likh lva,
par akhar ni jud'de maitho marjane.

shayeri da safar sada kadam hai chaar.
aina uccha haini mera ta miyaar.
tainu likhu koi karma wala,
sade hisse reh ju sada ikpasad pyar.
duava sadia e lag jan,sda khushiyaan tu maane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane....

langhde waqt nu rok ni sakda.
nal waqt de turna aaukha.
mera tere piche aauna aaukha.
tera hun par mudna aaukha.
behtar hai k bhul jayiye "deep" guzre zmaane..

DEEP tusi har vaar hi hor vadhere sohna likhde ho, is vich koi shaq nahi tusi iss section de best poet ho..
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17th May 2009, 08:52 AM
thanx ababbu g,,,, ena maan satikar den lyi... tsi e post kita c k main kyi dina to kuj likhiaa nai... ta raat e likhta c..
   
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paaji ki opening aah tuvaadi! bahoot khoob. tuvaade eh ehsaas saanu bahot chaange lage... edha hi likde raho...

Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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22nd May 2009, 05:13 AM
awesome post man
specially loved the opening three lines

pad k kuj aapne geet main purane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane.
sochia k ajj tainu fer likh lva,

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22nd May 2009, 06:53 AM
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pad k kuj aapne geet main purane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane.
sochia k ajj tainu fer likh lva,
par akhar ni jud'de maitho marjane.

shayeri da safar sada kadam hai chaar.
aina uccha haini mera ta miyaar.
tainu likhu koi karma wala,
sade hisse reh ju sada ikpasad pyar.
duava sadia e lag jan,sda khushiyaan tu maane.
fer beh gya haan yad teri rakh k sirhaane....

langhde waqt nu rok ni sakda.
nal waqt de turna aaukha.
mera tere piche aauna aaukha.
tera hun par mudna aaukha.
behtar hai k bhul jayiye "deep" guzre zmaane...
hay ji itna sona likha
aap ne kya kahe..
keep it up

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22nd May 2009, 07:42 PM
thanx gggggggggggg sb nu................................................ ....... thanx alot... aina maan pta ni kio bakshdeo.. pr chnga lagia thnu pasand aaya sb nu..
   
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2nd June 2009, 03:39 PM
Bahut Hi Khoobsoorat Hai Deep Ji

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tsi pad lya tilkji.. te comment dita ta koi shak nahi k kuj vadia likhia gya maitho.. thnx ji
   
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