Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Missing Him..
Old
  (#1)
shayri12345
Registered User
shayri12345 is a jewel in the roughshayri12345 is a jewel in the roughshayri12345 is a jewel in the rough
 
Offline
Posts: 2,408
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: New York
Rep Power: 23
Missing Him.. - 13th July 2006, 07:41 PM

Friends,

I want to share this poem with you all

Missing Him


Soft as a breeze
He touches my hair.
Can't see his face
But I know he's there.

The softest words
Whispered in my ear.
He's so far away
Yet he's right here.

Stars shinning down
Casting beautiful light.
Though not together
We share this sight.

Awakened from sleep
By a soft, tender touch.
Wish he was here
I miss him so much.

Morning brings light
a knock at my door
He's standing right there
The man I adore.


Love
Priya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
   
Reply With Quote
well
Old
  (#2)
tanha_vaib
Registered User
tanha_vaib is on a distinguished road
 
tanha_vaib's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 37
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 0
well - 13th July 2006, 07:57 PM

main khush houn ke app angrgi bhi accha likh leti hai par yahi agar hindi main sunaati toh accha hota ................

any way good luck...................


deewana
[COLOR= VIOLET]
**************************
UNSE BHICHDE HUE EK JAMANA BEET GAYA
LEKIN AB BHI IS BAAT KI TAKLIF HAI MUZE KE
KAR GAYI JISKE LIYE TANHA WOH MUZE
PAA LIYA USE TOH MERE LIYE ROTI HAI
**************************
[/COLOR]
  Send a message via Yahoo to tanha_vaib  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
shayri12345
Registered User
shayri12345 is a jewel in the roughshayri12345 is a jewel in the roughshayri12345 is a jewel in the rough
 
Offline
Posts: 2,408
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: New York
Rep Power: 23
13th July 2006, 08:13 PM

For u in hindi

Hawa ke jaise pawan,
mere baalon ko sehrata hua
Cehra uska dhikta nahi saamne
par hai vo yahi kahi

Uske sureelay shabd
maine kaano me partey Hai
yu to hai vo dur bahut
Par hai vo yahi kahi

Taarey chamaktey raat mein
Chaandni si failatey hai
Aaj to hum saath nahi
Par hai vo yahi kahi

Subah sokar uth-they hi
Pyar se uska Chuna mujhey
DIl kehta hai kaash vo yaha hota
Par asal mein, hai to vo yahi kahi

SUbah ki ujli roshni
Ek dastak darwajey par
Yakeen nahi hota ye dekh kar
Jise me chahti hu, tah-e-dil se!!
Vo to hai, Yahi )

Love Priya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Last edited by shayri12345; 13th July 2006 at 08:16 PM..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
pallavi_here
to feel & to be felt...
pallavi_here has a spectacular aura aboutpallavi_here has a spectacular aura about
 
pallavi_here's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,311
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: On minds
Rep Power: 18
14th July 2006, 12:43 AM

hindi n english.. both fantastic n lovly hw sweet gf bahut dino baad dekha tumhe.. kahaan rehti ho tum ??? luvd to read u with this lovly poem
take care


Pallavi...

******
Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
Mukhra
Ishhh....
Mukhra will become famous soon enoughMukhra will become famous soon enough
 
Mukhra's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,698
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: USA
Rep Power: 17
14th July 2006, 05:21 AM



this was really really reallly cute


*(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´) ¸.·'´)*
»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~«
*(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)*


I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...

~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,936
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
14th July 2006, 03:31 PM

Priya,

Very beautifully written... both in hindi and in english.... i liked it a lot... ur feelings are well presented... and ur words show ur love....

do keep writing like this...

tc
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
it was luvly
Old
  (#7)
jzpassi
Registered User
jzpassi is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 23
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Punjab
Rep Power: 0
it was luvly - 14th July 2006, 04:28 PM

Hi priya.it was luvly.just mind blowing compo.if it is urs.

from ur sign i think ur also from punjab.so one from my side in punjabi

khushboo tere pyar di sanu mehka jandi
teri har ik kitti gal sanu behka jandi
saah taan der launde ne aaun jaan nu
har saah toon pehlan teri yaad aa jandi


Thanks & Regards
Jassi


Your Reach should exceed your Grasp, or whats a Heaven For...
  Send a message via Yahoo to jzpassi  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
mann_chand
Registered User
mann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud ofmann_chand has much to be proud of
 
mann_chand's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,089
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Toronto,Canada
Rep Power: 27
14th July 2006, 11:04 PM

ssa ji

haye oye !!! aaj bahut dina baad twade post dekh ke mann khush hogaya har ek lavz de wich pyaar nazar aanda hai!!! bahut hi chaga likhya c ...

hor kuri da ki haal hai? g/f bahut hi bizzi rehde ne ???

eda hi likhde reha karo .... fan v khush rehange
take care
love u alot



~ Mandeep Kaur ~
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
karthik
Registered User
karthik has a spectacular aura aboutkarthik has a spectacular aura about
 
Offline
Posts: 1,172
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: hyderabad
Rep Power: 17
15th July 2006, 12:18 AM

long time priyaa...
the poem is awsome...really good...
tc


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
Reply With Quote
hi!
Old
  (#10)
komal5
Eyes and Dreams..
komal5 will become famous soon enoughkomal5 will become famous soon enough
 
komal5's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,228
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 18
hi! - 15th July 2006, 04:17 PM

Superb!...Cute...Natural...pure.....romantic.....s oft .....touchy.....
....Lovely Expression ...Priya! ..........I luved it!.....Infact i am goin 2 save this one....in my favorites

Read u after a long time....it was refrshing!!!

tc
komal


~a tender touch~
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#11)
Qasid
Super Mod
Qasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant futureQasid has a brilliant future
 
Qasid's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,883
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 41
16th July 2006, 04:51 PM

Hmmm Hmmmm Hmmmm

Adorable priya ji

Quote:

Soft as a breeze
He touches my hair.
Can't see his face
But I know he's there.

The softest words
Whispered in my ear.
He's so far away
Yet he's right here.

Stars shinning down
Casting beautiful light.
Though not together
We share this sight.

Awakened from sleep
By a soft, tender touch.
Wish he was here
I miss him so much.

Morning brings light
a knock at my door
He's standing right there
The man I adore.
Behad pyaara ehsaas hai aur ek bahut gehraa bond ek connection bhi nazar aaya

keep it up as usual

-aapka apnaa



Qasid


___________________________________________

नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ

रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
  Send a message via Yahoo to Qasid Send a message via AIM to Qasid  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#12)
Dard-e-sush
Pal Do Pal Ka Shayar
Dard-e-sush is a jewel in the roughDard-e-sush is a jewel in the roughDard-e-sush is a jewel in the rough
 
Dard-e-sush's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 596
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Moscow, Russia
Rep Power: 19
19th August 2006, 01:08 AM

Hi Priya

How is life! Hope fine with all pains!!

Some can miss coz they have some ray of hope....

and Some

Well said .. What to do whn ppl return from where broken ends can meet.....

Tu Kisi Aur Ki Jageer Hai Ai Jaan-e-gazal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal

Pehele Haq Tha Teri Chahat Ke Chaman Par Mera
Pehele Haq Tha Teri Khushbu-e-badan Par Mera
Ab Mera Pyaar Tere Pyaar Ka Haqdar Nahi
Main Tere Gesu-o-rukhsar Ka Haqdar Nahi
Ab Kisi Aur Ke Shano Pe Hai Tera Aanchal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal.......


Main Tere Pyaar Se Ghar Apna Basaun Kaise
Main Teri Maang Sitaron Se Sajaun Kaise
Meri Kismat Men Nahi Pyaar Ki Khushboo Shayad
Mere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Men Nahi Tu Shayad
Apni Taqdeer Bana Mera Muqaddar Na Badal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal......


Mujhse Kehtin Hain Ye Khamosh Nigahen Teri
Meri Parvaaz Se Oonchi Hain Panahen Teri
Aur Gairat-e-ehsaas Pe Sharminda Hun
Ab Kisi Aur Ki Bahon Men Hain Bahen Teri
Ab Kahan Mera Thikana Hai Kahan Tera Mahal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal



Regards


DARD
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dil, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
  Send a message via MSN to Dard-e-sush Send a message via Skype™ to Dard-e-sush 
Reply With Quote
Re: Missing Him..
Old
  (#13)
mittal011
Registered User
mittal011 is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 6
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: delhi
Rep Power: 0
Re: Missing Him.. - 20th August 2006, 05:27 AM

the poem was really very sweet ....

ek khawab dekha hai kai baar maine
betha raho achacl ke saaye me tere
tu kaheti rahe mai sunta rahon
tu sunti rahe mai kaheta rahon
na aane do aab koi darmia hamare
ek khawab dekha hai kai baar maine

hai tu bahut badi phir kahi likhga


nitin
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#14)
masti
Moderator
masti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant future
 
masti's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,111
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 34
7th January 2016, 01:47 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dard-e-sush View Post
Hi Priya

How is life! Hope fine with all pains!!

Some can miss coz they have some ray of hope....

and Some

Well said .. What to do whn ppl return from where broken ends can meet.....

Tu Kisi Aur Ki Jageer Hai Ai Jaan-e-gazal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal

Pehele Haq Tha Teri Chahat Ke Chaman Par Mera
Pehele Haq Tha Teri Khushbu-e-badan Par Mera
Ab Mera Pyaar Tere Pyaar Ka Haqdar Nahi
Main Tere Gesu-o-rukhsar Ka Haqdar Nahi
Ab Kisi Aur Ke Shano Pe Hai Tera Aanchal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal.......


Main Tere Pyaar Se Ghar Apna Basaun Kaise
Main Teri Maang Sitaron Se Sajaun Kaise
Meri Kismat Men Nahi Pyaar Ki Khushboo Shayad
Mere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Men Nahi Tu Shayad
Apni Taqdeer Bana Mera Muqaddar Na Badal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal......


Mujhse Kehtin Hain Ye Khamosh Nigahen Teri
Meri Parvaaz Se Oonchi Hain Panahen Teri
Aur Gairat-e-ehsaas Pe Sharminda Hun
Ab Kisi Aur Ki Bahon Men Hain Bahen Teri
Ab Kahan Mera Thikana Hai Kahan Tera Mahal
Log Tufaan Utha Denge Mere Saath Na Chal



Regards
Amazing...................speechless


-Apki Dost
Sarika
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#15)
masti
Moderator
masti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant futuremasti has a brilliant future
 
masti's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,111
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 34
7th January 2016, 01:49 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by shayri12345 View Post
Friends,

I want to share this poem with you all

Missing Him


Soft as a breeze
He touches my hair.
Can't see his face
But I know he's there.

The softest words
Whispered in my ear.
He's so far away
Yet he's right here.

Stars shinning down
Casting beautiful light.
Though not together
We share this sight.

Awakened from sleep
By a soft, tender touch.
Wish he was here
I miss him so much.

Morning brings light
a knock at my door
He's standing right there
The man I adore.


Love
Priya
Beautiful..............................

Why you don't write anymore?


-Apki Dost
Sarika
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
missing u passionatelover Quotable Quotes 2 27th January 2006 11:50 PM
Missing you mohammed Shayri-e-Ishq 0 25th February 2005 01:52 PM
Missing you mohammed Shayri-e-Ishq 0 25th February 2005 01:32 PM
Missing You mrshaami Aapki Shayri 2 12th February 2005 02:22 PM
missing you so much!! ember English Lyrics 0 8th June 2001 02:14 AM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2020, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com