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Zindagii ... Abhi Tamrakar - 22nd July 2014, 11:49 AM

Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~



Binaa tere ... khudaa mere.. seher kaisii.. safar kaisaa..
KaheeN daryaa kaheeN pyaasaa idhar bhatkaa udhar bhatkaa ~
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22nd July 2014, 11:54 AM

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Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~


ummdah peshkash............ bahot khoob


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22nd July 2014, 12:21 PM

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Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~

behad khubsurat qalaam pesh kiya hai... dilse daad...



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22nd July 2014, 01:18 PM

Bohat khoob Abhi ji. ..

3rd aur 5th sher zyada pasand aaye mujhe

Yuhi likhte rahiye. ..




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22nd July 2014, 03:57 PM

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ummdah peshkash............ bahot khoob
thankyou Shaad bhai... sath rahiye....


Binaa tere ... khudaa mere.. seher kaisii.. safar kaisaa..
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24th July 2014, 02:01 AM

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Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~


zabardastttttt bhai.... maza aagaya .. bht din baad padha tumhe forum par... bht acha laga.....
.... purane din yaad aagaye..


Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..


   
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24th July 2014, 09:10 AM

thanks Anu dii.... par mai to aapko padhta rehta hu aap hain jo bhool jati hain..


Binaa tere ... khudaa mere.. seher kaisii.. safar kaisaa..
KaheeN daryaa kaheeN pyaasaa idhar bhatkaa udhar bhatkaa ~
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25th July 2014, 03:47 AM

wahhh Abhi jii,

Boht boht khoob...

Behad dilkash ghazal se nawaza hai aap ne...

DherooN daad....

Aate rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Very nice - 27th July 2014, 11:35 PM

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Yaad tumko bahut aayegii zindagii
Fir kaheeN jab chalii jaayegi zindagi

Tum kaho maiN kahooN baat badh jayegii
Umra bhar sirf pachhtaayegii zindagii


Aayega laut jab mausam-e-ishqiyaaN
RaNg kuchh fir nayaa paayegii zindagii

Aas ho pyaas ho tum merii tum merii
Aaogii paas to aayegii zindagii

Zindagii lutf hai lutf se jee chalo
Mauj ke geet sab gaayegii zindagii

Zindagii geet hai gaaye jaa gaaye jaa
Muskuraa.. din nayaa laayegii zindagii


Kaun hai hai koii jo '@bhi' jaan le
ChhaaNv kab Dhoop kab laayegii zindagii~

Wah wah ....bahut hi behtareen gazal ke liye dheron daad abhi ji...



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kya baat hai abhi jee......bahut hee sundar peshkash....daad kubul karein......



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30th July 2014, 12:51 PM

wah..bohut khoob.
Maza agaya.....
Achhi zameen hai ghazal ki...aur mafoom bhi bohut umdah.
Mubarak ho.
   
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31st July 2014, 11:54 AM

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wahhh Abhi jii,

Boht boht khoob...

Behad dilkash ghazal se nawaza hai aap ne...

DherooN daad....

Aate rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,
Hasan sahab bahut bahut shukriyaa..


Binaa tere ... khudaa mere.. seher kaisii.. safar kaisaa..
KaheeN daryaa kaheeN pyaasaa idhar bhatkaa udhar bhatkaa ~
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31st July 2014, 11:57 AM

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Bahot hi umda.......is behtareen ghazal keliye dheron daad.
bahut bahut shukriya Naazneen sahiba..

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Wah wah ....bahut hi behtareen gazal ke liye dheron daad abhi ji...
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji.

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kya baat hai abhi jee......bahut hee sundar peshkash....daad kubul karein......
Aru sahab shukraguzar hu aapka..

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wah..bohut khoob.
Maza agaya.....
Achhi zameen hai ghazal ki...aur mafoom bhi bohut umdah.
Mubarak ho.
Mujib sahab tahedil se aapka shukraguzaar hun..
ghazal ki zameen or ehsaasaat bahut kam log samajh paate hain..


Binaa tere ... khudaa mere.. seher kaisii.. safar kaisaa..
KaheeN daryaa kaheeN pyaasaa idhar bhatkaa udhar bhatkaa ~
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