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reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab (Ghazal) - 20th September 2015, 07:08 AM

aadaab dosto,

Ghazal mulaiiza kareiN:



reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab
mar mar ke maine lamhe bitaaye tam'aam shab

kam ho saka na dard-e-juda'ii ka aNdhera
maine, charaaGh-e-ashk jalaaye tam'aam shab

aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar meiN kaash ho
hum rooTh jaayeN ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raatoN ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiiN !!
kambakht dil ka zaKhm sataaye tam'aam shab

zaalim hai teri tar'he, terii yaad bhi jaanaaN
ashkoN ka zehar mujhko pilaaye tam'aam shab

voh khwaab ki duniya meN thi,baiThaa tha maiN yahaaN
palkoN ko raaste pe bichhaye tam'aam shab

kaise maiN maan luuN ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zaKhmoN pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeeN hui hai raqm "yooN hi" yeh Ghazal!
kaaGhaz pe baDe ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab


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20th September 2015, 02:22 PM

namaskaar maikash ji...

aapki is behatreen ghazal ko na jane kitni baar padh liya maine,tareef karne jitni samajh to nahi mujhme par bhi kahna chahoongi.. har sher itna pyara aur itna gahra ki bas kho hee gayi usme....bahut mubarakbaad aur daad aapko is khoobsoorat ghazal par..
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20th September 2015, 05:13 PM

Maikash Sahib...Adaab.

Wah janab bahut achchi peshkash rahi aapki.
Her ek sher apne meiN mukammal tha ...Aur rawangi
tau itni ghazab ki lagi mujhe ki dil kerta tha bus perta
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20th September 2015, 07:12 PM

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aadaab dosto,


aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar meiN kaash ho
hum rooTh jaayeN ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raatoN ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiiN !!
kambakht dil ka zaKhm sataaye tam'aam shab

kaise maiN maan luuN ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zaKhmoN pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeeN hui hai raqm "yooN hi" yeh Ghazal!
kaaGhaz pe baDe ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab
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20th September 2015, 07:13 PM

Maikash bhaiyaa

Pranaam ...SSA

dilkash Ghazal ...waaah... bahot hi umdaah andaaz-e-bayaaN....ehsaas dil ko behad pasand aayen..khaas kar ke Ghazal ka maqtaa bahot hi pasand aayaa...bhaiyaa aap yuunhi bazm ko sajaate rahiye yahee chaahataa huun...dil se dheron saari daad...apni sehat kaa khayaal rakhiye...khush rahen

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22nd September 2015, 11:09 PM

behtreen ghazal likhi hai maikash bhai.............................


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24th September 2015, 11:33 AM

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aadaab dosto,

Ghazal mulaiiza kareiN:



reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab
mar mar ke maine lamhe bitaaye tam'aam shab

kam ho saka na dard-e-juda'ii ka aNdhera
maine, charaaGh-e-ashk jalaaye tam'aam shab

aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar meiN kaash ho
hum rooTh jaayeN ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raatoN ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiiN !!
kambakht dil ka zaKhm sataaye tam'aam shab

zaalim hai teri tar'he, terii yaad bhi jaanaaN
ashkoN ka zehar mujhko pilaaye tam'aam shab

voh khwaab ki duniya meN thi,baiThaa tha maiN yahaaN
palkoN ko raaste pe bichhaye tam'aam shab

kaise maiN maan luuN ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zaKhmoN pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeeN hui hai raqm "yooN hi" yeh Ghazal!
kaaGhaz pe baDe ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab
wah bhaiyaa wah!

Har sher par aah aur wah ek saath nikali, this is undoubtedly one of your best.

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24th September 2015, 11:46 AM

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aadaab dosto,

Ghazal mulaiiza kareiN:



reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab
mar mar ke maine lamhe bitaaye tam'aam shab

kam ho saka na dard-e-juda'ii ka aNdhera
maine, charaaGh-e-ashk jalaaye tam'aam shab

aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar meiN kaash ho
hum rooTh jaayeN ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raatoN ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiiN !!
kambakht dil ka zaKhm sataaye tam'aam shab

zaalim hai teri tar'he, terii yaad bhi jaanaaN
ashkoN ka zehar mujhko pilaaye tam'aam shab

voh khwaab ki duniya meN thi,baiThaa tha maiN yahaaN
palkoN ko raaste pe bichhaye tam'aam shab

kaise maiN maan luuN ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zaKhmoN pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeeN hui hai raqm "yooN hi" yeh Ghazal!
kaaGhaz pe baDe ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab


Maikash ji....aapki kalam ke mureed to ham shuru se hi hai, ab kaun se lafzoN mein tareef kare gazal/dard ki...bas etna kahuNgi ki hamesha ki tarah aapki yeh gazal bhi dil ke dard ke kareeb rhi.

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aadaab dosto,

Ghazal mulaiiza kareiN:



reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab
mar mar ke maine lamhe bitaaye tam'aam shab

kam ho saka na dard-e-juda'ii ka aNdhera
maine, charaaGh-e-ashk jalaaye tam'aam shab

aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar meiN kaash ho
hum rooTh jaayeN ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raatoN ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiiN !!
kambakht dil ka zaKhm sataaye tam'aam shab

zaalim hai teri tar'he, terii yaad bhi jaanaaN
ashkoN ka zehar mujhko pilaaye tam'aam shab

voh khwaab ki duniya meN thi,baiThaa tha maiN yahaaN
palkoN ko raaste pe bichhaye tam'aam shab

kaise maiN maan luuN ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zaKhmoN pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeeN hui hai raqm "yooN hi" yeh Ghazal!
kaaGhaz pe baDe ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab
Behtreen ghazal huyi hai Ustaad Ji, mazaa aa gaya padh kar kuch ghazal jitni baar padhi jaayein kam hai aur yeh unmein se ek nayaab nageena hai. zor-e-kalam aur badhtaa jaayein yahi duaa hai.....



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aadaab dosto,

Ghazal mulaiiza kareiN:



reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab
mar mar ke maine lamhe bitaaye tam'aam shab

kam ho saka na dard-e-juda'ii ka aNdhera
maine, charaaGh-e-ashk jalaaye tam'aam shab

aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar meiN kaash ho
hum rooTh jaayeN ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raatoN ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiiN !!
kambakht dil ka zaKhm sataaye tam'aam shab

zaalim hai teri tar'he, terii yaad bhi jaanaaN
ashkoN ka zehar mujhko pilaaye tam'aam shab

voh khwaab ki duniya meN thi,baiThaa tha maiN yahaaN
palkoN ko raaste pe bichhaye tam'aam shab

kaise maiN maan luuN ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zaKhmoN pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeeN hui hai raqm "yooN hi" yeh Ghazal!
kaaGhaz pe baDe ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab

qatl ho gaye ham to is haseen kalaam ko padh kar huzoor.....
alfaaz nahi hain mere paas iski shaan me kahne ke liye... bas guzaarish ahi ke jaldi jaldi hame padhne ke mauqe dete raha kijiye...

shukriyaa.....


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namaskaar maikash ji...

aapki is behatreen ghazal ko na jane kitni baar padh liya maine,tareef karne jitni samajh to nahi mujhme par bhi kahna chahoongi.. har sher itna pyara aur itna gahra ki bas kho hee gayi usme....bahut mubarakbaad aur daad aapko is khoobsoorat ghazal par..
Bahut shukriya hamare sath share karne ka..

Salamat rahein....

namaskaar Madhu jee,


aapki dariyaa-dilli hai jo is haqeer Ghazal ko kisi qaabil samjha, maiN iNtehaayi shukurguzaar hooN aapne jo hauNslaa badhaaya hai, aapk daad aur mubarakbaad sar-aaNkhoN par, bohat hi shukriya


ek baat jo Ghazal post karte waqt kehna bhool gaya hooN ke yeh Ghazal koi 9-10 saal puraani hai


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aadaab dosto,

ghazal mulaiiza karein:



Reh reh ke bohat yaad voh aaye tam'aam shab
mar mar ke maine lamhe bitaaye tam'aam shab

kam ho saka na dard-e-juda'ii ka andhera
maine, charaagh-e-ashk jalaaye tam'aam shab

aisii bhi ko'ii raat muqaddar mein kaash ho
hum rooth jaayen ko'ii manaaye tam'aam shab

raaton ko jaagne ka mujhe shauq to nahiin !!
Kambakht dil ka zakhm sataaye tam'aam shab

zaalim hai teri tar'he, terii yaad bhi jaanaan
ashkon ka zehar mujhko pilaaye tam'aam shab

voh khwaab ki duniya men thi,baithaa tha main yahaan
palkon ko raaste pe bichhaye tam'aam shab

kaise main maan luun ke buri hai sharaab, yeh
marham mere zakhmon pe lagaaye tam'aam shab

"maikash" naeen hui hai raqm "yoon hi" yeh ghazal!
Kaaghaz pe bade ashk bahaaye tam'aam shab
bahut umdaah ! Waah !!!

Dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!!!!




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