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Muhabbat ko meri nazar lag gayi hai 6 50.00%
tere pyar ka asar mujh per itna phakat hua 1 8.33%
NiishaniyaN haiN ye kisi naye khumar ki 5 41.67%
lii kitaab haath me.n maine 0 0%
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TPT November Poll Thread - 26th November 2015, 12:07 PM

Namaskaar doston...

aap sab ke intzaar ki ghadiyaan khatm huyiin...ab tak jo bhi entreis aayiin unhe main post kar raha hoon....is ummeed se ki jis tarah se aapne abhi tak mera sath diya hai..voting me bhi wahi josh dekhne ko milega...tasweer par bahut hee pyare ehsason se bhari rachnayein aayi hain is baar bhi..bahut shukriya aap sab ka..aur sabhi ko meri taraf se shubhkamnayein....

Voting ki aakhri date hai... 1st December 2015.

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Muhabbat ko meri nazar lag gayi hai - 26th November 2015, 12:08 PM

Muhabbat ko meri nazar lag gayi hai
meri diary bhi yahi keh rahi hai

wo ulfat ka mausam kahi.n ho gaya gum
meri sookhi nazrein wahi.n reh gayi hain

ye parchaaiyan hain jo beete dino.n ki
chudaaun to daaman pakad si rahi hain

gale mein padi hai nishaani jo uski
ye sone ki maala bhi ab das rahi hai

Koi to bata de unhe bhi ye jaakar
ye dil hai humaara jo bas mein nahi hai

likhu.n kaise haalat mere dil ki ab main
kalam bhi nigodi nahi chal rahi hai
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tere pyar ka asar mujh per itna phakat hua - 26th November 2015, 12:09 PM

tere pyar ka asar mujh per itna phakat hua,
waqt tanhayee meiN ba-mushkil guzer hua.

reh reh ker teri yaad mujhko satati rahee ,
haal mera hamdam ye kaisa ajab hua.

na raat meiN neeNd hai na din meiN karar hai,
tujh se bicherne ke baad hai ye sab hua.

her ghari tassavur meiN ho sirf tum sanam,
tere pyar ka ye karishma kaisa gazab hua.

judaee meiN milne ki chahat berkarar hai,
dooriya jab bareeiN mera ye haal tab hua.

dil tumhe de ke ab tau sukh chaiN lut gaya
ikraare muhabbat ke baad sajan ye sab hua.

man mandir ke aaine meiN tera hi aqs hai,
her saans meiN sirf tera hi naam talab hua.
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NiishaniyaN haiN ye kisi naye khumar ki - 26th November 2015, 12:10 PM

NiishaniyaN haiN ye kisi naye khumar ki
NishaniyaN kisi se pahle pahle pyaar ki.

Ki baithe baithe yuN hee hoNth muskarate haiN
ShararateiN jo yaad aa gayi haiN yaar ki.

Suhane khwaab saj rahe haiN meri aaNkhoN me
Ye rukh pe dhoop chhayi ya chamak nikhar ki.

Kitab leke hath me bunu kahaniyaN
MileNge ham kabhi to hogi rut bahaar ki.

UNhi ki chahteiN hain, dil kirahtein vahi
UNhi se har vajah judi mere Qaraar ki.

Bita diye kai pahar iNhi khayaloN me
Na jane kab dhalegi shaam iNtzaar ki...
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lii kitaab haath me.n maine - 26th November 2015, 12:10 PM

lii kitaab haath me.n maine jab to puraanaa usme payaam tha
hua yu.n jo lafz the saamne vo harek me.n tera naam tha

jo palat rahe hai.n harek pal mere saamne ye kitaab me.n
meri zindagii ke vo biitte pal koi karvaa.n sar-e-shaam tha

jo ha.nsii mere iin labo.n pe hai vo merii nazar se judaa to hai
ki jo ab ruke nahi.n rukte hai.n unhi ashq ka vo maqaam tha

merii chilmano.n se yu.n taakte ii.n havaao.n se ye gumaa.n huaa
ki tu aa rahaa hai mere liye vo khayaal mera naa kaam tha

vo Gazal tune jo sunaaii thii jo tune likhii thii mere liye
jo rulaa diyaa mujhe yaad ne vo hamaare dil ka kalaam tha
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26th November 2015, 12:14 PM

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26th November 2015, 12:25 PM

Shukriya mast sahab...doston aap sab ko meri shubhkamnayein...sabhi tahreer ek se badh kar ek aur bilkul juda......bahut achcha laga sabko padhna....



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bahut khoobsurat khayaal padne ka mokka mila...sabhi ne bahut accha likha hai, maine apni pasand ko vote kar diya hai...baaki sabhi ko meri shub-kaamnaye


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27th November 2015, 04:12 PM

Doston,

Jaldi kijiye is baar voting ke liye jyaada samay nahi hai.....aapke votes ka humhe intezaar rahegaa



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28th November 2015, 11:19 PM

Aap sab se guzarish hai doston..thoda sa vaqt nikal kar vote zaroor dein..aur sabhi likhne walon ka hausla badhayein.....

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friends i have given my vote... pls aap sab bhi apne apne votes cast kijiye jaldi....


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30th November 2015, 11:35 AM

Bohat achchi kaavisheN. Maine vote kar diya hai.


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vote karne wale sabhi doston ka shukriya...aur jin members ke vote kisi vajah se nahi aa paye hain.. unse Request hai ki pls vote zaroor karein...aapke sath ki ummeed me...

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2nd December 2015, 12:22 AM

Doston,

Technical issues ke karan poll aaj sham close ho gaya tha, maine polling wapas khol di hai aur poll ab kal 12:00 PM tak open rakha jaayega, aap sab se guzaarish hai ki kal dopehar tak apna vote zaroor daal dein.



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Is baar bhi aapke diye gaye votes se yeh silsilaa kamyaab raha aur ek baar phir chahungaa ki aap sab apni peeth thapthapaaye...sabhi pratiyogon ka bhi shukrguzaar hoon jihone itni aachi rachnaayein bheji...

Is baar ki vijeyta jo marginal votes se is baar pratyogita jeeti hai vo hai 'Masti Ji'



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2nd December 2015, 10:20 PM

shukriya mast sahab...
bahut bahut mubarak ho sarika dear.......aapki ghazal wakai bahut achchi rahi aur tasweer pe alag khayaal liye huye hai.....likhti rahiyega..aur aise hee bazm ki shaan badhati rahiye......

Sabhi participants ko ek baar fir daad aur mubarakbaad..ummeed haivyun hee aapka sath hame milta rahega....aage bhi...

Ek baar fir aap sab ka shukriya....

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Doston,

Is baar bhi aapke diye gaye votes se yeh silsilaa kamyaab raha aur ek baar phir chahungaa ki aap sab apni peeth thapthapaaye...sabhi pratiyogon ka bhi shukrguzaar hoon jihone itni aachi rachnaayein bheji...

Is baar ki vijeyta jo marginal votes se is baar pratyogita jeeti hai vo hai 'Masti Ji'
Sabse pehle to aap sabka shukriya jo meri likhi kacchi sighazal ko itna pyar diya, ismen abhi kaafi kaam baaki tha aur samay mere paas kam tha iss liye aise hi post kar di. Khushi hui ye dekh kar ki mere ehsaas pasand aaye.

Aapne sahi kaha ki bohut hi marginal difference hai jise nazarandaaz kiya Jana chahiye kyunki ek do log bhi aur vote karte to baat badal jaati. Issliye mere hisaab se dono hi ghazalein winner hain.

Hamdam ji aur aadeil ji Ki ghazlein bhi mujhe bohut pasand aayi jinke liye mujh nacheez Ki daad kabool kijiye.

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bahut bahut mubarak ho sarika dear.......aapki ghazal wakai bahut achchi rahi aur tasweer pe alag khayaal liye huye hai.....likhti rahiyega..aur aise hee bazm ki shaan badhati rahiye......

Sabhi participants ko ek baar fir daad aur mubarakbaad..ummeed haivyun hee aapka sath hame milta rahega....aage bhi...

Ek baar fir aap sab ka shukriya....

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shukriya mast sahab...
bahut bahut mubarak ho sarika dear.......aapki ghazal wakai bahut achchi rahi aur tasweer pe alag khayaal liye huye hai.....likhti rahiyega..aur aise hee bazm ki shaan badhati rahiye......

Sabhi participants ko ek baar fir daad aur mubarakbaad..ummeed haivyun hee aapka sath hame milta rahega....aage bhi...

Ek baar fir aap sab ka shukriya....

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areee waahhhhh Sarika....yeh gazal tumhari thi bahut khoobsurat likha aapne, tasveer ke saath aik aik lafz mil rha tha. yu hi aage bhi likhti rho dil se mubarakbaad.

baaki logoN ne bhi bahut accha likha tha...par winner to aik ko hi hona hota hai so meri taraf se un sabko bhi mubarakbaad


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areee waahhhhh Sarika....yeh gazal tumhari thi bahut khoobsurat likha aapne, tasveer ke saath aik aik lafz mil rha tha. yu hi aage bhi likhti rho dil se mubarakbaad.

baaki logoN ne bhi bahut accha likha tha...par winner to aik ko hi hona hota hai so meri taraf se un sabko bhi mubarakbaad
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Sarika ji behad mubaarak ho aapko TPT ki winner hone ke liye..... main tahe dil se aapko daad aur shubh kaamnaaen denaa chahunga....

Malik kare ke aage bhi aap aise hi kaamyaabi ke paaydaan me chadhtii rahen.... shukriyaaa.........

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Sarika ji behad mubaarak ho aapko TPT ki winner hone ke liye..... main tahe dil se aapko daad aur shubh kaamnaaen denaa chahunga....

Malik kare ke aage bhi aap aise hi kaamyaabi ke paaydaan me chadhtii rahen.... shukriyaaa.........

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Is baar bhi aapke diye gaye votes se yeh silsilaa kamyaab raha aur ek baar phir chahungaa ki aap sab apni peeth thapthapaaye...sabhi pratiyogon ka bhi shukrguzaar hoon jihone itni aachi rachnaayein bheji...

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[QUOTE=aadeil;489371]Sharikaji,

aapko bahot bahot mubarak baad....
behad hi khubsurat gazal thi aapki..... [/QUOTE

Bohut shukriya adeil

Aap hain kahan aajkal? Sach poochiye to dil se Khushi hui prtiyogiyon Mein aapka naam dekh kar.

Aate raha kariye........

Yaha sab apki miss karte hain actually kabhi 2014 Ki raunak miss karti hun yahan....

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Sharikaji,

aapko bahot bahot mubarak baad....
behad hi khubsurat gazal thi aapki..... [/QUOTE

Bohut shukriya adeil

Aap hain kahan aajkal? Sach poochiye to dil se Khushi hui prtiyogiyon Mein aapka naam dekh kar.

Aate raha kariye........

Yaha sab apki miss karte hain actually kabhi 2014 Ki raunak miss karti hun yahan....

Aap aayenge to bohut Khushi hogi.
Sarikaji,
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