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phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye (Ghazal) - 6th January 2016, 06:38 AM

kaNdhey pe zaraa haaTh dharo maiN nashe meiN hooN
maikash do kadam saath chalo maiN nashe meiN hooN




phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye
tujhe aazmaane waale tujhe aazmaa ke roye

muqeem ik chiraaGh e hasrat do diloN ke darmiyaaN tha
maiN jalaa jalaa ke roya voh bhujhaa bhujhaa ke roye

meri aah ko ataa kar voh balaa ka dard ya rab
mere Gham pe haNsne waala mere paas aa ke roye

aashnaayi apni Gham se is darjaa ba-wafaa thi
kabhi mil gayi khushi to bahaana banaa ke roye

phir saath aa gaya hai yeh zehan ka khalall saaqi
kuch de’r is ko keh de kahiiN aur jaa ke roye

maqta maiN paDh ke thehruuN, kuch aisa mojezaa* ho
hoNThoN meiN voh sitamgar dupatta dabaa ke roye

mojezaa* = karishma

is haal meiN haiN lauTe kuu-e-yaar* se ai “maikash”
jo liye KhaDe the paTThar voh galey lagaa ke roye

kuu-e-yaar* = yaar ki gali


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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kaNdhey pe zaraa haaTh dharo maiN nashe meiN hooN
maikash do kadam saath chalo maiN nashe meiN hooN




phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye
tujhe aazmaane waale tujhe aazmaa ke roye

muqeem ik chiraaGh e hasrat do diloN ke darmiyaaN tha
maiN jalaa jalaa ke roya voh bhujhaa bhujhaa ke roye

meri aah ko ataa kar voh balaa ka dard ya rab
mere Gham pe haNsne waala mere paas aa ke roye

aashnaayi apni Gham se is darjaa ba-wafaa thi
kabhi mil gayi khushi to bahaana banaa ke roye

phir saath aa gaya hai yeh zehan ka khalall saaqi
kuch de’r is ko keh de kahiiN aur jaa ke roye

maqta maiN paDh ke thehruuN, kuch aisa mojezaa* ho
hoNThoN meiN voh sitamgar dupatta dabaa ke roye

mojezaa* = karishma

is haal meiN haiN lauTe kuu-e-yaar* se ai “maikash”
jo liye KhaDe the paTThar voh galey lagaa ke roye

kuu-e-yaar* = yaar ki gali
aahhhhh.....kya gazal pesh ki hai Maikash ji....superb

phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye
tujhe aazmaane waale tujhe aazmaa ke roye

bahut ki khoobsurti se aapne poori gazal ko anjaam tak pahunchaya hai...dil ke bahutttttttt kareeb rhi gazal.

Rabb Raakha


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6th January 2016, 11:36 AM

waah !!kya ghazal pesh ki hai..
tamaam ashaar dil par chot karte huye..

daad qubool kijiyega...

rab raakha..



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6th January 2016, 12:38 PM

Wah maikash bhaiyya.....

Ek ek sher par hum bhi aapke saath saath roye......
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6th January 2016, 03:37 PM

har ek ashar lajwaab Maikash jee bahut khoob......................................


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waahhh mere bhai waahhhh.... kamaal agar kahin hota hai to maikash saahab ki bazm me hotaa hai...
sach kahun to agar aaj din bhar me kuch acchaa huaa to aapki ghazal padhne ki khush naseebi haasil hona...

is kalaam kii jitnii tareef ki jaae wo kam hai bhai.. aap jitne saral insaan hain aapki shayari ka hunar utnaa hi gahraa hai... this is an example of classic form of shayri like we use to read 50-100 years back.

allah aapko majeed nawaaze bhai aur hame aisi khushnaseebi haasil hoti rahe..

daad ke phool aapko nazr karta hoon bade bhai.

duaaon ki darkhaast.

shaad...


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9th January 2016, 04:29 AM

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aahhhhh.....kya gazal pesh ki hai Maikash ji....superb

phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye
tujhe aazmaane waale tujhe aazmaa ke roye

bahut ki khoobsurti se aapne poori gazal ko anjaam tak pahunchaya hai...dil ke bahutttttttt kareeb rhi gazal.

Rabb Raakha

aapse sdc ki waahid aisi member haiN jinhone "pehle din se" mujh naalaayiq ka hauNslaa badhaaya hai aur sach kahuuN to aap jaise dostoN ki hi ba'daulat itni himmat ho paati hai ke jo TooTa-PhooTa likha ho idhar post kar duuN

bohat shukriya

rab raakha jee
maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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Waah - 9th January 2016, 07:14 PM

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kaNdhey pe zaraa haaTh dharo maiN nashe meiN hooN
maikash do kadam saath chalo maiN nashe meiN hooN




phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye
tujhe aazmaane waale tujhe aazmaa ke roye

muqeem ik chiraaGh e hasrat do diloN ke darmiyaaN tha
maiN jalaa jalaa ke roya voh bhujhaa bhujhaa ke roye

meri aah ko ataa kar voh balaa ka dard ya rab
mere Gham pe haNsne waala mere paas aa ke roye

aashnaayi apni Gham se is darjaa ba-wafaa thi
kabhi mil gayi khushi to bahaana banaa ke roye

phir saath aa gaya hai yeh zehan ka khalall saaqi
kuch de’r is ko keh de kahiiN aur jaa ke roye

maqta maiN paDh ke thehruuN, kuch aisa mojezaa* ho
hoNThoN meiN voh sitamgar dupatta dabaa ke roye

mojezaa* = karishma

is haal meiN haiN lauTe kuu-e-yaar* se ai “maikash”
jo liye KhaDe the paTThar voh galey lagaa ke roye

kuu-e-yaar* = yaar ki gali

Wah Wah Maikash Bhai

Kya khoob Ghazal kahi hai aapne. Meri daad iss sher ki shakl meiN pesh hai. Qubuul farmaayen.

Maikash tere kalaam ke qayal to yuN bhi hum haiN
Ik ek sher padh ke hum muskuraa ke roye


Aur ye sher yaani maqta KhususaN kamaal laga.

is haal meiN haiN lauTe kuu-e-yaar* se ai “maikash”
jo liye KhaDe the paTThar voh galey lagaa ke roye

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15th January 2016, 10:45 AM

Maikash bhaii

Mera kuch bhi kehna wazib nahi hoga.. mujhe meri hasti kamzor nazar aati hai aise kalaam padh ke..

Maasha allah maiN har sher ko do do baar padh ke baitha huN.. aur yahi sochta huN ki aisi soch kab aayegi humaare paas..

Ye sab aasaan nahi.. koun kehta hai khayaal mar jaate hai ye aur wo.. aapki ghazal sabak hai ek har talib-e-sukhan ke liye..

Meri dheroN mubarakbaad aapko..

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Maikash bhaii

Mera kuch bhi kehna wazib nahi hoga.. mujhe meri hasti kamzor nazar aati hai aise kalaam padh ke..

Maasha allah maiN har sher ko do do baar padh ke baitha huN.. aur yahi sochta huN ki aisi soch kab aayegi humaare paas..

Ye sab aasaan nahi.. koun kehta hai khayaal mar jaate hai ye aur wo.. aapki ghazal sabak hai ek har talib-e-sukhan ke liye..

Meri dheroN mubarakbaad aapko..

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baaqi dostoN se ba-sad-mazrat Kunaal bhai ke khat ka jawaab pehle de raha hooN


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facebook par aapke bayaan paDhe, unka jawaab to maiN haazir na kar saka lekin ba-das-tuur aapki be-panaah muhabbat ka shukriya adaa karne ki ek adna si kohshish maine zaroor ki thi, ab yeh pataa nahiiN ke meri voh kohshish aap taq pahuNchii ya nahiiN kyoNke do din pehle maine facebook ka account delete kar diya tha


jaise ke aapne bhi tasleem kiya, sach baat hai ke khat-o-khitabat ke hawaale se aap se koi musalsal raabta nahiiN raha lekin aap hi ki tarah maine bhi apne aap ko aapke bohat qareeb paaya hai, dil se dil ko raah hoti hai mere bhai baaqi duniyadaari apni jagah

aapse guzaarish hai ke apne phone number pm meiN bhej dijiye, gaahe-ba-gaahe aapse baat hoti rahegi to mujhe badi khushi hogi


rahi is Ghazal par aapki faraaKh'dilee ki baat to bhai Ghazal itni achchi nahiiN thi jitni ta'reef, mohabbat aur ehteraam se aapne ise nawaaza hai, maiN zer-e-baar hooN aapka, iNtehaayi shukurguzaar bhi


raabta banaaye rakhiye, mere liye bade hauNsley ki baat hogi


bhagwaan aapko khush rakkhe


rab raakha
maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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kaNdhey pe zaraa haaTh dharo maiN nashe meiN hooN
maikash do kadam saath chalo maiN nashe meiN hooN


phir aaiinoN se "maikash" nazreN churaa ke roye
tujhe aazmaane waale tujhe aazmaa ke roye

muqeem ik chiraaGh e hasrat do diloN ke darmiyaaN tha
maiN jalaa jalaa ke roya voh bhujhaa bhujhaa ke roye

meri aah ko ataa kar voh balaa ka dard ya rab
mere Gham pe haNsne waala mere paas aa ke roye

aashnaayi apni Gham se is darjaa ba-wafaa thi
kabhi mil gayi khushi to bahaana banaa ke roye

phir saath aa gaya hai yeh zehan ka khalall saaqi
kuch de’r is ko keh de kahiiN aur jaa ke roye

maqta maiN paDh ke thehruuN, kuch aisa mojezaa* ho
hoNThoN meiN voh sitamgar dupatta dabaa ke roye

mojezaa* = karishma

is haal meiN haiN lauTe kuu-e-yaar* se ai “maikash”
jo liye KhaDe the paTThar voh galey lagaa ke roye

kuu-e-yaar* = yaar ki gali
Laajawab peshkash maikash ji....

Kya baat hai

Kabhi mil gayi khushi to bahana bana ke roye


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waah !!kya ghazal pesh ki hai..
tamaam ashaar dil par chot karte huye..

daad qubool kijiyega...

rab raakha..
Ghazal ki paziraai ke aapka behadd mashkoor hooN madhu jee, sad shukran


rab rakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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