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aab par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana (Ghazal) - 26th January 2016, 07:40 AM

aab* par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana
be’reham, voh teri chaahatoN ka zamaana

aab* = paani

chaley jaaiye, ke, ajab sa lagegaa
kaaNToN pe phuuloN ka pehra biThaana

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

teraa dar hai jaanaN ya phir maikada hai
kahaaN aur hum dil'jaloN ka thikaana

duniya tamaasha bana degi “maikash”
isey daaGh dil ke na harGhiz dikhaana


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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26th January 2016, 03:02 PM

maikash ji..har sher dard ki dastan suna raha ho jaise.......kya tareef kar sakti hun main....chhote muh badi baat hogi....
Bas padhne ka mauka dete rahiyega....

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28th January 2016, 09:36 AM

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aab* par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana
be’reham, voh teri chaahatoN ka zamaana

aab* = paani

chaley jaaiye, ke, ajab sa lagegaa
kaaNToN pe phuuloN ka pehra biThaana

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

duniya tamaasha bana degi “maikash”
isey daaGh dil ke na harGhiz dikhaana
dard jab had se guzartaa to tarannum ban jaata hai aap SDC ki shaan hai aur umeed hai yeh chaand sada chamaktaa raheGaa



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28th January 2016, 07:05 PM

Maikash bhai bahut kamaal ka likha hai...............


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maikash ji..har sher dard ki dastan suna raha ho jaise.......kya tareef kar sakti hun main....chhote muh badi baat hogi....
Bas padhne ka mauka dete rahiyega....

Salamat rahein..

Madhu jee namaskaar

aapke ek jumle ne sharmiNda kar diya hai

ba-har-haal, khaadim ka shukriya Tikaa lijiye


rab raakha jee
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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aab* par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana
be’reham, voh teri chaahatoN ka zamaana

aab* = paani

chaley jaaiye, ke, ajab sa lagegaa
kaaNToN pe phuuloN ka pehra biThaana

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

teraa dar hai jaanaN ya phir maikada hai
kahaaN aur hum dil'jaloN ka thikaana

duniya tamaasha bana degi “maikash”
isey daaGh dil ke na harGhiz dikhaana
Maikash ji....aap jo likhtey ho uska koi saani nahi...har ehsaas dil ko cheerta hua niklta hai...likhtey rhiye aur bazm meiN aate rhiye.

rabb raakha


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aab* par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana
be’reham, voh teri chaahatoN ka zamaana

aab* = paani

chaley jaaiye, ke, ajab sa lagegaa
kaaNToN pe phuuloN ka pehra biThaana

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

teraa dar hai jaanaN ya phir maikada hai
kahaaN aur hum dil'jaloN ka thikaana

duniya tamaasha bana degi “maikash”
isey daaGh dil ke na harGhiz dikhaana


waah saahab waahh kyaa kahne aapki is dilkash kalaam ko padh kar ham ek baar fir aapke mureed ho gaye hain saahab.... kya kya sher kahen hain subhaan Allah...

is ek sher me itni aag hai ke main bayaan nahi kar saktaa... bas baar baar padhe hi jata hoon..... aur kamaal bemisaal kahe jata hoon..

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana


nihaaytee khoob kalaam hua hai mere bhai... ummeed hai aage bhi aapko padhte rahne ka mauqa milta rahega... shukriyaa

Shaad....


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Waah - 22nd February 2016, 06:48 PM

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aab* par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana
be’reham, voh teri chaahatoN ka zamaana

aab* = paani

chaley jaaiye, ke, ajab sa lagegaa
kaaNToN pe phuuloN ka pehra biThaana

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

teraa dar hai jaanaN ya phir maikada hai
kahaaN aur hum dil'jaloN ka thikaana

duniya tamaasha bana degi “maikash”
isey daaGh dil ke na harGhiz dikhaana
Waah waah Maikash Bhai

Kya khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne. Har sher lajawaab.

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

Kya kehne!!

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Maikash ji namaste,

Aapki gazal dil ko choo gai....behad khoobsurati se jazzbatoN ko alfaaz dete hain aap.

Daad kubul farmaiyega

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aab* par re’t se khwaab ke Ghar banaana
be’reham, voh teri chaahatoN ka zamaana

aab* = paani

chaley jaaiye, ke, ajab sa lagegaa
kaaNToN pe phuuloN ka pehra biThaana

maiN kohshish karooNga tumhe bhuulne ki
mera naam tum bhi laboN pe na laana

bhujhegi tere jism ki jab chamak
mere ishq ki raushn’ii aazmaana

teraa dar hai jaanaN ya phir maikada hai
kahaaN aur hum dil'jaloN ka thikaana

duniya tamaasha bana degi “maikash”
isey daaGh dil ke na harGhiz dikhaana
behad khoob likha hai maiskash jee aap ne, aap ko padha to kuchh aage likhna ka man kiya.

mujhe aadat sii ho gayi hai mushkurane kii,
zakhm tu deti rahe mujhe use seene se lagana.

ye imtihaan hai o khudaya mahobbat ka meri,
teri bewafaayi ko chaah kar, mahobbat nibhana.


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29th February 2016, 05:21 PM

Aap kyu humesha rula dete ho bhai...

Ye tadap kahaa se laate ho...

Har ek sher baat karta sa laga...

Aur ye to main pehle bji leh chuki hu ki apki tareef ka matlab hai suraj ko diya dikhana.

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