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Main kab tumsa ban paaunga - 23rd November 2016, 10:08 AM

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Kab apne hindustan ko main
Apni pehchaan banaaungaa

De saktaa main balidaan nahi
Ho saktaa main qurbaan nahi

Aam aadmi khud ko kehkar
Kya apna karz chukaaungaa?

Is desh ke samvidhaan ko main
Aandha kanoon bataata hoon

Dhuvidhaa jab mujhpe aati hai
Main bas ilzaam lagaata hoon

Kab tak khokhali baaton se
Udddhaar desh ka chaahungaa

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Tera bhi to parivaar tha na
Tu bhi to zimmedar tha na

Main kab tak is sachchaai se
Yun nazrein apni chuuraaunga

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Is desh ke hit ki jab baat huyi
Ab phir se nayi shuruvaat huyi

Kya is baar bhi apne kadmon ko
Bas baandh ke main reh jaaunga

Ya dungaa judkar saath tera
Ab hindustani kehlaaungaa

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Main kab tumsa ban paaunga...??

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23rd November 2016, 11:05 PM

very nice kavita bhai...............


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24th November 2016, 05:17 PM

Umda khayaal anu....apke khayaal ko salaam.....

Vandematram...

Bahot shukriya video ke sath share karne ke liye..apki awaaz me kavita me kahi gayi gahri baat bakhoobi bayaan hori hai.....



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very nice kavita bhai...............
inayat ka shukriya mere bhai......



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24th November 2016, 07:50 PM

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Umda khayaal anu....apke khayaal ko salaam.....

Vandematram...

Bahot shukriya video ke sath share karne ke liye..apki awaaz me kavita me kahi gayi gahri baat bakhoobi bayaan hori hai.....
Pasand karne ka shukriya Madhu, yunhi saath dete rahiyega



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Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Kab apne hindustan ko main
Apni pehchaan banaaungaa

De saktaa main balidaan nahi
Ho saktaa main qurbaan nahi

Aam aadmi khud ko kehkar
Kya apna karz chukaaungaa?

Is desh ke samvidhaan ko main
Aandha kanoon bataata hoon

Dhuvidhaa jab mujhpe aati hai
Main bas ilzaam lagaata hoon

Kab tak khokhali baaton se
Udddhaar desh ka chaahungaa

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Tera bhi to parivaar tha na
Tu bhi to zimmedar tha na

Main kab tak is sachchaai se
Yun nazrein apni chuuraaunga

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Is desh ke hit ki jab baat huyi
Ab phir se nayi shuruvaat huyi

Kya is baar bhi apne kadmon ko
Bas baandh ke main reh jaaunga

Ya dungaa judkar saath tera
Ab hindustani kehlaaungaa

Sarhad par mar mitne waalon
Main kab tumsa ban paaunga

Main kab tumsa ban paaunga...??

#Vandemaataram




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Shukriyaa mere bhai, aapki daad sar aankhon par..aate rahiyegaa



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Bohot bohot khoob likha hai aapne....

Waaaaah
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