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ena naine nu ~~~ - 8th November 2004, 07:21 PM

Kehnde ne ki jine akhiyan to peeti hoye us bande nu sharaab da nasha ki hona he...aisi aankh de nashe di gal...

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..

tu meri soni heer kude
tenu eh do naina dasde ne
koi tere jayi tasveer nahi
dohe palka vich eh vasde ne

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

gal buliyan di hun aayi ta
aapa dove hi sharma baitha
tenu tak tak kamli hasne ha
asa khud nu seene la baithe

tere gore gore galan de
eh toye maari jaande ne
hun khad khad enj sharmaa vi na
sadi sud bud laayi jaande ne..

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

zulfaa'ch disde mukhde to
hun kive nazar hata laaiye
dil kaabo karke baaithe hai
es dil ni ki samjhaa laaiye

zulfaa de badal kholi na
na mar jaaiye asi boli na
aapan enj hi lukh chupp badalaa to
chann teri deed kara laaiye

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..



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8th November 2004, 09:31 PM

Haan yeh huyi na baat...

ek sundar seeee tasveer...mere hothon pe muskurahat aa gayi...

gal buliyan di hun aayi ta
aapa dove hi sharma baitha
tenu tak tak kamli hasne ha
asa khud nu seene la baithe

tere gore gore galan de
eh toye maari jaande ne
hun khad khad enj sharmaa vi na
sadi sud bud laayi jaande ne..


aise hee kuch arsa pehle likha thaa do akhiyon ke naam...tumse share karti hoon...shayad tumhein achha lage...

Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan

Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan

Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan

Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan

Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan


khush raho

paras


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Mast Ji - 9th November 2004, 01:48 AM

Mast Ji,
Kidda?Dua ai sada khush raho.Thwada likhya bohot changa lagya.Tussi lafzan nu badi changi tarah wakhaya ai.Dua ai sada hi aida hi likhdai rahogai.
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Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai.

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hi - 9th November 2004, 04:32 AM

aarey wah wah

mast bhai kiya baat hai bhoot khoob waise punjaabi to itni aati nahi but i tried my best to understand this poem aur jitna samjhi hoo usse yahi laga ke its beautiful bhut sundar aur piyaari, bilkul masoom kitni piyaari tasweer banai aapne lafzo se.

keep on writing
bye

vow paras jee

wot abeautiful poem aap loog dard, piyaar, dosti aur inncoence ko aik hi poem mai kaise likhte ho maloom nahilakin aapki shayri mujhe hamesha pasand rahi hai cos its unique and yet it makes u feel as if u r a part of what u read.

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hi - 9th November 2004, 05:16 AM

anu ji
tusi bahut hi sona likhiya !! dil nu chu gaya hamesha di taarha....inni tarif wow...har lafz whicho pyar dhul dhul painda aw!!
Very very nicely sweeetyy cutely....written by hrt...i luved it....I read it like 5 times dunoo how many more times i will read it!!


great great work

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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9th November 2004, 10:31 AM

Mast ji....

tuhadi waajh dil vichoo aayi ki uhdi aankan no bayan tusi yun kita.....


kujh cheta aaya saano vi...kithe sunya si.....

" MUDDAT BAAD JAMANE NE SAMJYA HAI...
PHUL NU SUNGIDA AE, PHUL NU KHAYEEDA NAHI....

PYAR BHAKSHDA HAI ZINDAGI NU ZINDAGI.....
PYAR PUJIDA AE, PYAR THUKRAIDA NAHI....."

Aedaan hi likhde raho......



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9th November 2004, 10:06 PM

bhai ...

aap to jante hio ... main punjabi main jara sa week hun ... par ye samajh main aa gaya mere ... bhai dil chu liya aapne .... yun hi likhte rahiye ....

aapkaapna

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15th November 2004, 11:50 PM

Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan

Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan

Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan

Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan

Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan


Kitni saral aur kitni sundar ankhiyon ka bayan kiya hai aapne paras ji mujhe reply mein itne komal aur aziz bhav dene ka shukriyaa...

aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiyeGaa

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15th November 2004, 11:53 PM

kavita Ji..

Mein theek ha..te naale umeed hai ki tusi vi theek hi hovoge...tuhada atoot saath paa ke hi mainu jyada to jyada punjabi vich aapne khayal dasan da mauka mildaa hai...aage bhi rab kare hamesha tusi mere saath dende raho te mein enj hi likhdaa ravaa

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15th November 2004, 11:58 PM

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16th November 2004, 12:00 AM

Priya ji...hamesha di tarah tusi dil khol ke mere khayaal padhe eh sun ke badi khushi hoyi.. yes it's writteb by hrt..and that's why u loved it...umeed hai aap bahut baar ise padhe aur har bar mein aapkar yeh ek asar chode...

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16th November 2004, 12:36 AM

Aman veer...

bahut khushi hoyi bhrava sun ke ki tuhanu eh waajah sunaayi ditiya..naale bahut hi sona khayaal tusi sade kol chad gaye ho..

PYAR PUJIDA AE, PYAR THUKRAIDA NAHI

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16th November 2004, 12:57 AM

kunal bhai tumhara dil chuna bahut asaan hai mere liye kyonki mera ghar hai mujhe maloom hai kaise ise sajaana hai...

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Namaskar - 16th November 2004, 01:14 PM

Namaskar mast ji

Twade e rahna wekhe.........badey changi lagi.Tussey punjabi wich enna sonna likhdey ho sannu hun pata lageya.Punjabi wich pehle baar main kissey di rachna wekhi ya.Changa lagaya padke.
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sukanya ji...tuhanu pehli vaar apne punjabi di nazm ich paakar sanu vi vatheri khushi hoyi hai...umeed hai aage vi tusi sada haunslaa bhadhande rahvoge....

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Kehnde ne ki jine akhiyan to peeti hoye us bande nu sharaab da nasha ki hona he...aisi aankh de nashe di gal...

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..

tu meri soni heer kude
tenu eh do naina dasde ne
koi tere jayi tasveer nahi
dohe palka vich eh vasde ne

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

gal buliyan di hun aayi ta
aapa dove hi sharma baitha
tenu tak tak kamli hasne ha
asa khud nu seene la baithe

tere gore gore galan de
eh toye maari jaande ne
hun khad khad enj sharmaa vi na
sadi sud bud laayi jaande ne..

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

zulfaa'ch disde mukhde to
hun kive nazar hata laaiye
dil kaabo karke baaithe hai
es dil ni ki samjhaa laaiye

zulfaa de badal kholi na
na mar jaaiye asi boli na
aapan enj hi lukh chupp badalaa to
chann teri deed kara laaiye

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..
Boht hi vadiya likhya tussi!!!! tuhaade agle punjabi di post di udeek rahegi Veere!

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Smile wow....mast bhai punjabi - 4th July 2008, 03:14 PM

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Kehnde ne ki jine akhiyan to peeti hoye us bande nu sharaab da nasha ki hona he...aisi aankh de nashe di gal...

ena naine nu asi jhak lende
ae nain mere wal takde ne
teri soni soni ankhiyan wich
mere hi hanju vasde ne..

tu meri soni heer kude
tenu eh do naina dasde ne
koi tere jayi tasveer nahi
dohe palka vich eh vasde ne

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

gal buliyan di hun aayi ta
aapa dove hi sharma baitha
tenu tak tak kamli hasne ha
asa khud nu seene la baithe


tere gore gore galan de
eh toye maari jaande ne
hun khad khad enj sharmaa vi na
sadi sud bud laayi jaande ne..

ae nain mere wal takde ne
ena naine nu asi jhak lende

zulfaa'ch disde mukhde to
hun kive nazar hata laaiye
dil kaabo karke baaithe hai
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wow.............mast bhai, tusi v punjabi ho....bahut vadiya lagiya tuhadi punjabi shayri padke.....highlight kitey step behad pasand aaye....punajbi jado romantic mood vich hon taaN aida di pyari shayri saamne aaundi hai....nice work.

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wow.............mast bhai, tusi v punjabi ho....bahut vadiya lagiya tuhadi punjabi shayri padke.....highlight kitey step behad pasand aaye....punajbi jado romantic mood vich hon taaN aida di pyari shayri saamne aaundi hai....nice work.

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