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tenu bhul ja te das kive......... - 20th July 2015, 11:58 PM

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Bade dina baad aaj mauka lagaya ki ik punjabi geet likhya jaave, koshish kitti hai ek vaari padhna jaroor...



mere haan di nimaaniye ni
jado'n di tu khoyian

tere naal jedi lagiyaan si
aakhiyan vi royian

hanju digh ke vi sukh gaye hor ki kavaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

yaad mainu aaya fer chaundvi da chaa'n
reh gaya si kol tere sadaa sonaa mann

eh dil hu'n kamaliye kisnuu davaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

ajj ik sher kise jogi ne sunaaya
rabb ne si onuu ode rab to'n milaaya

tere to'n judaayi hor kinniya savaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

tod ke gayi tu jedhe rishte puraane
sambhe hoye aaj tak ne o khat vi puraane

mol inaa chittiyaan da ki main lavaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........



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21st July 2015, 01:29 AM

Anu bhaiyaa

Namaste

Khoob ehsaas...badhiya geet.. kyaa baat hay... dil se daad


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21st July 2015, 10:26 AM

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Anu bhaiyaa

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Khoob ehsaas...badhiya geet.. kyaa baat hay... dil se daad


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Dhaval bhai thanks a lot. Aapne ise padhaa aur pasand kiya bahut aacha laga...



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21st July 2015, 10:44 AM

Waah...mast ji...kya khoob geet likha hai aapne....bahut pyare ehsaas...yoon hee likhte raho..isi bahane hamari punjabi bhi achchi ho jayegi.........



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21st July 2015, 11:05 AM

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Waah...mast ji...kya khoob geet likha hai aapne....bahut pyare ehsaas...yoon hee likhte raho..isi bahane hamari punjabi bhi achchi ho jayegi.........
Madhu shukriyaa shayad maine khud 4-5 saalon baad punjabi mein kuch likha hai isliye khud ko bhi aacha lag raha hai....aapki punjabi hum sudhaar hi denge dont worry..........



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21st July 2015, 11:20 AM

Dear Anu...tuhadi eh poetry menu bahut vadiya lgi, maiN jab kal raati tuhadi awaz vich suni si udo hi mere dil nu bhaa gye si eh...vadiya koshish hai punjabi vich likhan di...umeed hai bahut jaldi dubara hor navi pujnabi poetry padan da mokka milega

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21st July 2015, 02:55 PM

Oye hoye maar sutteya

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21st July 2015, 05:00 PM

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Men bhulann di koi lod ni. Te je kadde kise hor layi likkhi aa te chinta na karo rehen main tuhanu evain vi ni dawaangi.

Eh te vadiya ho gaya ji.
Anu ji tuhanu kadi na bhullan lage, ess nu paDh ke te kadi v neyi


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Dear Anu...tuhadi eh poetry menu bahut vadiya lgi, maiN jab kal raati tuhadi awaz vich suni si udo hi mere dil nu bhaa gye si eh...vadiya koshish hai punjabi vich likhan di...umeed hai bahut jaldi dubara hor navi pujnabi poetry padan da mokka milega

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Didi - tusi padhya ta pasand kitaa bas samjh lau ki gal bann hi gayi....naale rahi punjabi'ch likhan di Gal ta main koshish karda rahangaa ki ene chir da vichooda na pave....



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Bade dina baad aaj mauka lagaya ki ik punjabi geet likhya jaave, koshish kitti hai ek vaari padhna jaroor...



mere haan di nimaaniye ni
jado'n di tu khoyian

tere naal jedi lagiyaan si
aakhiyan vi royian

hanju digh ke vi sukh gaye hor ki kavaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

yaad mainu aaya fer chaundvi da chaa'n
reh gaya si kol tere sadaa sonaa mann

eh dil hu'n kamaliye kisnuu davaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

ajj ik sher kise jogi ne sunaaya
rabb ne si onuu ode rab to'n milaaya

tere to'n judaayi hor kinniya savaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

tod ke gayi tu jedhe rishte puraane
sambhe hoye aaj tak ne o khat vi puraane

mol inaa chittiyaan da ki main lavaan
tenu bhul ja te das hun kive main ravaan

tenu bhul ja te das hun.........

Wah, Anu ji kamaal kar ditta !
Bohot he vadiya likheya hoya hai ji. Mere valloN bohot bohot vadaayi tuhaanu.
IddaaN he likhde raho atey saanu hor v paDn da moka deyo.


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Oh ji malko tuhade bajo hor kis layi likhaangaa naale likhe di tareef kitti hai ya maaran di dhamki deti eh gal chette nahi payi...agge to mare hoye nu maaran to pehla jara jeya soch leya karo...



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Gal tusi pate di kitti hai mere veere....naale meri enni himmat hi ko'ni jeda main eda vadda panga lavaan



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Main taan aiwayee footage kha rayii si. Tussi bohot hi changa likhyaa ae.
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Bohut pasand aaya mainu.
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